ASYA (KABHI) FF- Given and Denied- Thread 1- Chapter 1 to Chapter 14 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: sarbrathan

After that prologue I am also dumbfounded and intrigued. Please update soon and pm if you can.


ha ha ha...Thank you so much. I will update soon and please buddy me for pm...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
suspend and start from the wedding day
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Very good start! Do continue and please PM me.
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I will continue..please buddy me if you want pm...Thank you..😊
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Originally posted by: --Radhika--

Very good start! Do continue and please PM me.

Thank you...I am really feeling elated...I will continue...and buddy me please for pm...😊
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Originally posted by: life4me

Good start. Continue soon.

Thank you...😳
I will continue..😊
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Chapter 1


What?!? All she could manage to say, blinking her eye-lashes several times. Dilshad was waiting for a question but saw Zoya yawned lazily. She started to explain but Zoya cut her in the middle saying that it's ok, aunty.

'How on the earth is it ok and who is the aunty here?!?' Dilshad was amused.

Zoya looked at her confusedly.

I am not your aunty anymore, remember!' You are married to my son, and you addressed me as "ammi", if you have no problem...again cutting by Zoya before she could complete.

' I would love to' whispered Zoya with her brimming eyes. Dilshad cupped her face and kissed the forehead. It is final then' she said with a smile.

Now, don't you want to know that matter?' she turned her back from Zoya. She could not manage the whole matter through her word but told what she knew. After explanation she was waiting for an outburst but it never came. She turned to see why Zoya was so quiet and found her sleeping. She sighed a little, adjusted the blanket on Zoya, wished her good night, turned off the table lamp and left the room.

When Dilshad told Zoya that Asad is not coming, she did not know how to react.

Zoya took some time to process what was happening and when she understood the situation she gasped a little and thanked Allah.

"Thank You!! Allah miyan you saved me today. Really" she did her happy dance mentally. A smile was appeared on her lips but to cover it from Dilshad she yawned. When Dilshad turned back from her she tried to concentrate but failed miserably. It was a hectic day for her and she was hell tired. She slept immediately as she hit a pillow.

It was 2 am in the morning when she suddenly woke up with a sound. She looked confusedly here and there and then remembered it was not her home. She made her way to the window which causing the sound and closed it. Then she opened her suitcase and changed into her usual night dress and made her way to bed for proper sleep.

Asad was completely lost, when he was returning to his house. He was suffering from a bad headache and he felt dizzy. His vision was getting blurred intermittently. This was an exceptional day for him. It could be wonderful but become the worst day of his life after the day his father had left.

He was a successful businessman but still cannot manage to control his emotion sometimes when he saw any bonding between father-son. This is because his father left them when he found another woman in his life at his early age. He always craved for his father but he never returned to them. Then he found that his father left them because of money and this made him determined to be rich. When the cravings turned into pure hatred he did not know. Now, he hates him to the core.

Sighing loudly he turned his way of thinking about the happening of the whole day. As he started to think he realized he is married from this day. "Another responsibility" he mumbled to himself. He looks at the watch. It reads 3 am. "Is she still waiting for me? I don't even know her. How is she feeling about this matter? Hope ammi told her everything. Anyways I need a conversation with her, makes her clear that what I think about this nikaah" he was determined.

After half an hour or so he reached to his house, entered quietly using his spare keys and tip-toed to his room. His head was now hammering badly. It was dark inside and all he wanted a proper sleep, soon he was his side of bed when a loud cry of "Allah miyan" startled him. He was out of his wits as he did not budge from his place; a body was writhing to get out beneath his body.

Zoya was having her hard time when the weight did not removed and she started panting heavily. "Why he is not moving?" She started to see those revolving stars. "Save me, please" she choked and it is then when the body jumped off. She started breathing again but before it gets normal, the bed side lamp gets on and a voice roared "who the hell are you and what are you doing in my bed?"

Zoya was dumbstruck again for the second time of the night. "What was he asking?? He could not recognize me?? Allah miyan! Is he having short term memory loss like Aamir Khan as in the movie Ghazni? Why the hell Aapi did not tell me about it?" she was now thinking about all the possibilities.

"Care to tell me, who are you Ms"...again an impatient voice asked.

"If it was a joke then I do not like it. I need to tell you that you are bad in this and it is not Ms. It is Mrs.. Mrs Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan. Zoya said with a calm voice, getting her composure back. She stood there crossing her arms around at her front. "Can you recognize me, now?" she was giggling.

"Enough!!" Asad yelled again. His anger got the best of him. From where this anger was coming he did not knew neither he care. He thought all of a sudden that it was all her fault. All the bad things happened from that time she is married to him. He felt livid when he heard her giggling. "How dare she? She was the only one who brought the worst day of my life." Asad thought. Little did he knew that what Allah had given to him and he denied.

"Nobody talks to me like that. I don't need to recognize you and now you may get lost from my room as I need a proper sleep badly." He said without thinking neither he wants to think now.

"Hey. Do you think I am crazy like you? I am married to you. It is not only your room now, mine too. Moreover I did not know about anything about you and this house. Where will I go? I need a proper sleep too." She reasoned.

"I don't know anything. Just go to the hell and spare me. I know what type of girl are you?" Asad shouted again.

"And how you know that Mr. Khan'? Care to explain" She cannot believe her ears. How can he be that rude? She was told that he is stubborn and intransigent but it seems he is cruel and introspective.

Her chain of thought was interrupted as Asad grabbed her outside his room and shut the door.

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Zoya stood there helplessly for some time processing the incident in her mind. She was happy as he too did not have interest in this relation. But she was hurt because of his harsh words. He did not even knew her then how he was so definitive about her? How could he behave so rudely? Most of all she saw a hint of hatred in his eyes. Why would he hate her? Could it be that he was not interested in this relation?Then why he did that? or it is only because she is an orphan? All possible questions were making their way to her head. She knew she was not getting those answers so she gave up. She only wanted a fair conversation about this marriage but it seems it is not possible. She had to wait.

Then she went to find some place to sleep as she was really tired. She was frustrated as she found no place where she could sit or sleep. Even the living room is deserted as the couches were shifted from there for the arrangement of the function. She sighed and made her way to the garden. She saw it when closing that window, there was bench where she can sit at least. She was shuddering when the chilly air bit her; it was the middle of November after all. She even cannot manage to get her shawl as he shut the door. After sitting she let out her cry that she was holding for this long time.

"Allah miyan!! Why only me? Why I am the one who left out from everything? Why can't you take me also? I know I also wanted some clarification but not in this way. You know what I fear the most and you made me pass through this only? Now how can I even manage everything? How can I make him understand? How can even I talk to him after what happened between us?" she dozed off after complaining to the only one, her best friend Allah miyan.

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That's all for today. Do like and leave comments if you want to read more. I know this is not a good one but the story is just setting, so bear with me.😳

If anyone wants Pm then please buddy me and leave a comment below. Thank you all.😊

Edited by swapno - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What's going on wit Asad he's so rude poor Zoya 😭
continue soon please Awesome udapte 😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good start. What's with asad, why did he get marry? Is he in love with someone else or he just doesn't believe in marriage. Poor zoya, even she is not interested in this relationship too. I hope she gets to come back in his room and not spent the whole night outside.

Looking forward to read more, please update soon. Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: akaswan

What's going on wit Asad he's so rude poor Zoya 😭
continue soon please Awesome udapte 😃😃


Ya he is..but don't cry.😳 They are meant to be,remember. lets see what happened next.
Thank you so much..😊

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