ASYA (KABHI) FF- Given and Denied- Thread 1- Chapter 1 to Chapter 14 - Page 100

Originally posted by: ZoyaAsadKhan

wow nice update :)

Originally posted by: swapno

Oh !!ho...you guys are hopelessly romantic😆

Okay I will think about a mitwa moment...though I think I can't write romantic scene too well😕

Thank you so much buddy🤗

Originally posted by: treasure11

hopelessly romantic😆LOLZZZ

yes we are!!!!!😆but let it go as u like it...dnt rush jst boz we r asking for it😆

Originally posted by: swapno

Oh !!ho...you guys are hopelessly romantic😆

Okay I will think about a mitwa moment...though I think I can't write romantic scene too well😕

Thank you so much buddy🤗

Originally posted by: treasure11

and dnt say dat u already are dng a great great great job and dat taxi ride scene was already fab!!!! so am telling u u'll kick it in other romantic scenes too😳

Originally posted by: swapno

Hey buddy 🤗

Thank you so much🤗

Glad that you loved it😃...I thought you will not like it..cz it was a sad one

I will try to update soon😊

Originally posted by: Applef

omg!!

he was stabbed???😲

but I love the action scene of asad..😃

beating those morons blue black...

poor zoya, she is so broken..

dilshad is such a sweet mil anyone could ask for..😊

he is out of danger now..

will zoya take care of him??😉

or back to square one??

update soon..

Originally posted by: akaswan

Hey bubby 🤗

Yes this a sad udapte but i loved it because first in the end of the udapte was good and i have a little Mangalpur Zoya and my old Asad 😃😆

Originally posted by: swapno

😆 😆 😆

One secret...I gave a happy ending because of you😃

Otherwise you know me😆

I love cliff ending 😉