ARHI Love SS~ Whispering Leaves ~ COMPLETED~(08/01)

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Gul Mallik

@CleanBowled

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Posted: 11 years ago

#861

man, this is a very delicate n skilfully weaved tale- i appreciate ur story telling skills n ur observant nature that u hav so very well portrayed within the story

u send me back to my childhood days where like khushi even i used to whisper to the leaves making wishes, but unlike khushi i wasnt lucky enough coz my wishes never came true- or did they? well i dnt remembr for that mattr

anyways very well written

luv

Gul

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Ayesha

@stunning.ayesha

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#862

very beautifully written

I loved it

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Whiterainbow

@Whiterainbow

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Posted: 10 years ago

#863

Oh it's such a lovely story :)

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hema

@Itsflora

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#864

wishing in leaves???that's a simply sweet & cute thing..
loved reading this...
the waiting was so long..
remind me of someone I know who waited a decade for her love to come back from abroad...it was pretty amazing to see the girl resisting all others encouragement to move on...
sooo really could relate to this one..

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aniakool

@aniakool

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#865

Awesome and Beautiful SS

Read it one go ...

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PS0954

@PS0954

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#866

It was very captivating. ..every bit of it!

Thoroughly enjoyed reading it!

Also the part where you metaphorically spoke about the leaves with relations in life...very heart touching...truly beautiful! ❤️

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#867

So hearttouching story..beautifully written..

After reading dusky wings,paper planes nd monster am now beacame a big fan of ur writting..😃

Always love the way u potrayed arshi emotions...khushi's trust dat her love gonna came for her..chahe duniya jo v kahe...jst awsum...her faith on leaves that they gonna give massage to arnav to came soon for her..amazing

I got tears in my eye when khushi first confront arnav nd by seeing sheetal in arnav's arnav's arm..how heartbroken she was...

Finally lovely ending with arshi forever...loved it👏👏

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UV_Arshi

@UV_Arshi

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#868

Another beautiful story!! seriously...how do you come up with these!!!

Their childhood friendship and the puppy love is so cute. I really admire Khushi's strength, her firm belief in her love and her resilience as she goes through all those years alone..with just their old memories ad her trust in his promise. And to see Arnav keeping up his end of the the promise, coming back to her..was reassuring and heartwarming...

A short but incredibly sweet love story! Enjoyed it very much :)