virman ss:A train to my marriage (part 2/page 14)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys...I m back with my new os...tum sab ko phr se apne writing se pakane aa gye😆...ok no bak bak..here is the update and this will be entirely on manvi's pov
A TRAIN TO MY MARRIAGE...
I am afraid of heights of all kinds-valleys,mountains,rivers,railway station bridges and even relationships make me sick. And today I am going to experience all of them
'MANVI, come fast, we will miss the train!' mom shouts breaking my train of thoughts.
'I would be glad if I could,' I muttered, putting on my dark brown blazer.
One more addition to my HATE LIST is this goddamned winter season. I m very sensitive to getting a bad cough in this season and I cannot bear the chill. So I have to put as many woollens in my bag as on my body.
'Come, come, everyone get inside,' dad says
'What the hell, manvi! how many clothes have you stuffed in your bag? It is way too heavy!' scream viren, my brother.
'Don't worry, I will take my luggage myself. You don't have to bother about it.'
I immediately regret the sentence after saying it. It is heavy! Uff!
Soon we are in front of a big--no, actually a monstrously huge--railway bridge.
'Okay, I can do this.'
I try to be a brave girl. I am not going to look down. But the combination of loudly hooting trains and my immense fear of heights makes the situation more horrifics. When it comes to heights, I can be a total freak.
'Here is our seat numbers,' says mom when we board the train.
I take my laptop and climb on to the upper berth. As it is an all- night journey, everybody will be asleep soon and I am going to watch the Korean movies My Little Bride. I love romantic Korean movies,
By the time it's 3 am I feel sleepy. But first I have go to the loo, so I just wait for the train to stop at any station. That's one more addition to my list of phobias--I cannot go to the loo when the train is moving. Now you must be getting the clear idea of my freakiness.
I doze off later.Then suddenly it's raining and I m all drenched; a wave of water comes to drown me and I m awake!
'Holy shit, viren! are you f**king out of your mind!' It turns out to be part of my dream, and viren was trying to wake me up by pouring water on my face.
He laughed stupidly and said,'we are almost about to reach chandigarh.'
Yes, we are going to our city. It's been very exciting for me to go there but this time it's a little different. I am going to face my fear of RELATIONSHIP
so I m done with first part...plz do hit like buttom and plz do comment it mean a lot to me.and I know its small update and sorry for that but I m really busy with my studies and soon my exams gonna start so I won't be able to give long updates...hope u all understand
take care🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello di!😃

Sorry for being late to comment, still I'm first!😉

I would have refreshed fan fic forum's index page for more than 100 times to comment first!😆😆😆


As you said, it was very short! But I loved the start!😳

Manvi ko kitni problems hai yaar!😆


Waiting for the story to progress...😃


Update soon... I'm waiting!😳

Take care!🤗

Love you loads!❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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tera murder karu ??? aadhe mai kyu roka ??uhhh???

accha hai ...!! jaldi continue karing ok...!! me waiting 😊
Edited by lavanya_sweet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update she have phobia
waiting next update update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fab
thanks for pm...
Like it
superb..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great work sweety
And awesome os
Liked it a lot... Thanx 4 d pm
But it was short... Haina 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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intersting os
waiting for next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey,. This is reli nice... Gotto read sth reli gud after a long time. Nice start... Continue soon. And pm me... And change ur title to SS as it is written OS, which means one shot. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi dear,
really nice os but it was short.
No pblm, we can wait.
Bcz this is a nice one.
Actually i am also afraid of height.
Thanks 4 the PM.
Take care
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Start..!! Liked Maanvi's portrayal... Very nice n realistic..as we may have more then 1 dear or phobia at the same time..Waiting for next n Thanks for the PM!

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