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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Awesome update
kriya is helping rey
eagerly waiting for next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
awesome ...update
kriya help rey ...
jriya plan ...like interesting ...
bahut chhotu update ...plz make long update ...
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: taarey_vrimar

Awesome update
kriya is helping rey
eagerly waiting for next part soon

😛
thanx dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
sory guys i know but i dont hav time to write thats y...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
haye...awesome update...k helping rey...its good...taani jealous...yipee...nice update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
sabse pehle to sorry for commenting late. the last two parts were amazing
kriya taarey ko milvane ki koshish kar rahi hai
oh gosh!!! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Nyc prt..
I kno its hard 4 u to write coz of tym n all.. dats y i also stoppd writing for sm while..
nyc wrk done.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankita_95

Nyc prt..
I kno its hard 4 u to write coz of tym n all.. dats y i also stoppd writing for sm while..
nyc wrk done.. :)


thanks for understanding me yaar u know na study n aall...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
part 5

tani:sad ...
After some time.
Vicky:so guys abhi ham aaj ka programm start karte hain so hamara pehla performance leke aa rahe hain rey n kriya...then rey n kriya start dance on song beintehaan ..
Tani was lost in the thought of valentine day...when they dance together...
One lady:kitne cute lag rahe hain na dono...
Tani:nahi...
Lady :kya..
Tani:haan..
After performance over all the gang member congratulate rey n kriya.
Kriya:thank you guys..hy rey pls chup mat raho warna tani ko pata chal jayega ki ham natak kar rahe hain...
Rey:par kriya tuhme lagta hain uspar koi asar ho raha hain...
Kriya :ofcurce rey ...tani ko dekho kitni lost hain m sure woh hamare bare main hi soch rahi hogi...
Scene shifted...
Sharon :kya hua tani kaha lost ho
...
Tani:sharon woh main...
Sharon :haan batao kya hua koi problm hain..
Tani:nahi kuch nahi...
Sharon :rey aur kriya kitne cute lag rahe hain na eksath...
Tani:sad hmmm
swayam enter hy sharon kya tumne rey ko kahi dekh hain...
Sharon : Nahi par kriya ko pata hoga...
Swayam :woh bhi nahi hain...shayad dono sath gaye ho.
Tani:confused state of mind...
Swayam mujhe un dono ne bataya kyu nahi..
Simmi:hy guys ladke wale aagaye hain...
Sharon :chalo tani ab tuhmari sagai hain...
Par yeh rey kaha reh gaya hy bhagwan pls rey ko bhej do kahi yeh sagai ho gai toh...

In hall alll were busy in their work Here swayam try to call rey but its unavailable...
Ceremony its start now...
Vishesh mother come n give tani shagun ki thali...
All the gang were tens abt rey n kriya...
Then vishesh mother:tani ko ring pehnao beta...
Tani:was still lost in rey thought n searching rey but she didn't find him...
Vishesh tani ko ring pehnata hain...
Tani feel to cry
bharat:ho gaya satyanash...
Suddenly kriya came running...
Swayam swayam...
Swayam :kya hua kriya tum yaha rey kaha hain..
Kriya started crying
sharon :hua kya hain..
Kriya :woh rey...
Sharon :kya hua rey ko..
Kriya :woh rey ka accident ho gaya...
All were shock..
Tani:kya kaha hain rey kaise hain woh kahi unhe jyada toh nahi lagi batao na...
Swayam :relax tani tum batao kaha hain rey ...
Kriya :city hospital main...
Tauji:toh chalo jaldi...
All were reach in the hospital tani started crying badly sharon is controlling her...
Tani:yeh sab meri wajah se hua hainn...
Sharon :nahi tani...try to control...
Kriya all story tell to swayam abt the incident...
Swayam 'its k kriya relax...
Dr came n tell all is fine now u can meet him...
Tani:bhai main jati hoon...
Swayam :k...
Tani enter in reys ward rey was lying on the bed...
Tani :m sorry rey...yeh sab mere wajah se apko kya zaroorat thi bahar jane ki...
Rey:tum yaha tuhmari toh aaj sagai hain na...toh jao jake sagai karo...
Tani :pls rey maine kaha na sorry i love u maon tuhmhare siva kisi aur se sagai toh kya shadi bhi nahi kar sakti...
Rey:really...
Tani :ya really...
N tani hugs rey...
Rey:oochh...
Tani 'kya hua dard hua kya...
Rey'hannn..
Tani :sorry...
Rey laughs...
Bahar se sab undono ko dekhte hain n veshesh aunt uski family chali jati hain...
Kriya:dekha swayam inhe bhagwan ne banaya tha usne apne he plan se unhe milva diya...
The end...
So guys hows it...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Aweome update
perfect ending
Taarey r together
keep writing more :)

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