Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 18) - Page 7

Awesome update

First of all I hope u r doing well now..pl take care dear...
It was a beautiful update... d morning was depicted so naturally.. I loved d part wer arnav was getting ready n khushi was thinking abt d intimate situation dey both r in.. something so personal. . I simply loved it..
I really hope samer wont die.. d way he gave khushi a glimpse into arnav's past.. I hope khushi realize d real arnav who is craving for love..I knw its eventually gng to happen bt im eagerly waiting for dem to fall in love..
Thanks for d lovely update..

Congrats on the new thread
Great update

story has started progressing now...gr8 going...

congrats on new thread
awesome update

awwwsssuuummm update wah wah zbrdast
from starting to end u balance the things so well ... tooo good u knw plus i just loved each bit of it
one more info aap week may two updates krtay ho ya one only :/ i miss the next chap already :(

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Great update. Loved how you played out the morning scene. It was different and quite refreshing, sort of, from the usual ones. It was nice and funny how you not only showed Arnav coming to Khushi's side but also her sprawling all over the bed after he woke up, making both their arguments true.

At first I was skeptical about Sumer telling Khushi about Arnav's past, coz rightfully it was upto Arnav how and when or even if he wants to share that with her. But then it was thoughtful on Sumer's part not revealing anything much yet telling her quite a handful to help her understand Arnav.

Now that Khushi knows something that almost amounts to nothing in terms of the whole truth and has made promises how will both of them move forward from here? Waiting for the next part.

Lovely chapter. Was not ready for it to end! Very well written.

amazing,awesome no words thank u after long time