ArShi FF (Complete): The Ray Of The Dawn (Thread 1)

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_Chaverah_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: kushiarnav1
Hello,

I saw u r index just now, thank for posting u r stories here...

Prologue is intresting...so arnav knowns kushi...

Looking forward to the chapter1 ...

I will read and comment to the rest...

If u r going to pm please add me to u r buddy list...

Cheers...

Sorry for the late reply buddy...
wasn't doing well with my health...

Thankyou so much for visiting my index...😳 And my work...🤗

Privilege and pleasure is mine to have posted them here...😛

Shall try to update soon...😊

-Love,
Chaverah...

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_Chaverah_

@_Chaverah_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: punnaanchal
Amazing prologue
waiting for the chapter 1

Sorry for the late reply buddy.. Wasn't doing well with mu health...

Thankyou yaar... I'm glad you lykd it..🤗
Shall update ASAP..😛

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_Chaverah_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: yappingduck
simply fabulous
loved itc

Thankyou Buddy!!! 🤗

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_Chaverah_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: rupzloveu
awesome update...
loved it...

Thankyou yaar... I'm glad you lykd it..🤗

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_Chaverah_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: beenish248
UNress... let me hug you first For this wonderful story Candy 🤗

ITS not new if i say i fall in love with your arnav all over again 😃
fabulous concept dude..
can you please some how break that permila and both siya n reah head 😡 bloody b*****s
thay are treating khushi just like a maid how dare they ..
Mrs Gloriya is so kind women she understand khushi so much ..
jonh is so cut boy ..
ahh so arnav is her childhood friend ..
arnav is in love with her .. He is so determind and i loved it ..
marvelous yarr...
eagerly waiting ..

PyaaRy Beeny.. Ab main aur kya kahoon...? Luv ya yaar🤗...

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_Chaverah_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: arnshi
This is such a nice story...reminded me of Cinderalla hehe sorry step mother and sis always reminds me that...Loved the different touch that arnav is going there fully prepared with a clear mind.
Please pm when you update..if you do.

😃
Thankyou yaar... I'm glad you lykd it..🤗

Coming to cinderella, 😉, let me tell you, frst I had just a ingle step mom and a single step daughter only.. But then it struck me dat its almost as good as Cinderella plot.. Excited wid d new discovery, I'v changed the sisters part to 2, so dat, it will resemble Cinderella.. 😆 Kinda tribute...😃

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_Chaverah_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

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arnshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Ah let the game begin..so payal and khushi are besties...thats too good..

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beenish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Awesome update ...

payal is so bold yarr ..

"""" Yeah!! Sometimes I really get fed up Bhai.. It's as if I'm the man and he's the lady.. It's me who has to take the lead.. God damn I would take it if he ever would go further than a Ms.Roy.. He won't even call me by my first name!! How insane?! And what else? Ah, Bingo!! He loves me!! Sometimes in the stress and all, believe me Bhai, I wonder if this everything is just a delusion!"""""

can you belive if i say i was laughing like hell foe atleast 20 minutes ..

akash is blushing like lady Rofl ..

i loved it to the core..

payal is khushi's bestie whoo it just like cherry on the cake ..

they way khushi was talking with payal it seems she is very close with her ..

it will help arnav in one way to meet khushi ..

can't wait for next chapy ..

eagerly waiting.. :)