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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: mehreen_taarey

wow...amazing concept 😃

taarey scenes wer soo cute ☺️
rey is soo scared of swayam 😆

jojo...u said u r gonna update nxt part 2day
toh jaldhi update karo na
am waiting

ARE CUM DOWN CHEK THE NEXT POST
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Amazing update
I can't wait to see Taani in action
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Amazing update
I can't wait to see Taani in action

thank you
just go to the next post i will update today
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 3

Taani what she wore Made by me

Here everyone finished the party and started leaving. But rey was all sad and it was seen by all.

Sharon- rey kya huwa itna sad kyu hai

Vicky- rey kya huwa bro all good na

But he was not giving answer instead he moved his head to taanis room's door and then back to the gang with a weird smile. And this action of him makes the gang understand.

Gang (except swayam) - ohhh Taani ko goodbye bolna hai

Rey nodded his head to the gang and then looks at swayam with an expectation smile but swayam gives him a weird look.

Swayam- tu apne ghar jasakta hai mene tuje ruka nahi hai

Gang- SWAYAM!!!!!

Swayam- WHAT!!!! wo sorahi honge (Some sound comes from taani's room) okay soo nahi rahi hai lekin...lekin wo tired honge

Rey- swaym please (looks at Sharon for help)

Sharon (fake anger) - SWAYAM use jane do varna ajke bad tum na mere ghar awoge or na me tumse baat karugee

Swayam (freked out)- WHAT .. Sharon...tum esa nahi karsak ti

Sharon- me esa kar sakti hu ...do you have a problem with that huuu

Swayam (terrified and goes to rey )- rey tu yaha kyu khara hai ...ja or Taani se good by bolo us ... uska room purpal wala hai ...tu seeda ja tuje dek jaye ga

The gang laugh at his reaction. Rey goes to taani's room.

Sometime when this scene was happening, in taani's room.

Taani was on the laptop, concentrating on her work. She was researching thing and was really anger when she remembered captains words "brake lena chatiti ya... kisi ko marne ke bade dook horaha ta". She remember flash back. She stands up and moves to her balcony.

Flashback

Tanya had been called to the captain cabin.

Tanya in captain's cabin.

Tanya gives a salute to his captain who was sitting on the chair.

Tanya- good morning captain app ne muje

Captain- yess Tanya come ...tanya there is a job for you

Taani- what is it sir

The conversation went on and as Tanya keep on listening her blood was boiling with anger.

Scene to a factory. (just imagen that is taani okay)tanya wear-

(start at 0.10 stop at 1.19, just see some moves and imagine)

There was a girls fighting (actually I won't make it difficult, it was Tanya) with lots of men and when she finished she faced a man. A tall man in suit was on the floor.

Tanya was standing in front of a man with her killer look and each step when she was taking towards him he would slid himself away from her.

Tanya- why were you doing this..hmmm

The man- Taani beta ...

Tanya- don't you dare call me beta... Someone like you can't be my father... (Bends down to him and holds his collar) and do you know me tumjese insanoko kese punishment detihu ... want to know (takes her gun out and puts it on his head)... me use seeda upar ponchti hu

The man- please muje ek chance do beta

Tanya- in your dreams..Mr sooraj shekawat ...goodbye (and shoot)

Flashback end

Her thought were broken when she felt a pair of hands around her waist and a wet sloppy kiss on her cheek.

She turns around and finds rey smiling at her.

Rey (still holding Taani)- so..

Taani (puts her hands on his chest)- so... tume ghar jana chahi ye rey

Rey (leaves her and this moves of him makes Taani confused)- tumbi

Taani (confused)- mebi kya...(thinks) let me guess bhai told you to go home and not meet me hmmm

Rey (holds her waist again)- hmm so you were listening to us

Taani- no I wasn't ...I just guessed by your word "tumbi" so...anything else

Rey- yes I need to go...but not until I get a kiss from you

Taani- but you did get a kiss when you came in

Rey- well now I want a kiss when am going ...hmm you see I will get a goodbye kiss and a goodnight kiss together

Taani (she shakes her head)- no ways

Rey just smirks and pushes her to the wall and the next moment he puts his lips on her. She was shocked first but then gave in.

Here outside the room everyone was sitting in the hall and watching tennis. Basically swayam was pacing around the room.

Swayam- why isn't rey coming out...what are they doing for so long... how long does it take to say goodbye... what if rey kiss my sister ...what i.ff

Gang- shut up swayam

Simi- and dude they are a couple kissing is normal

Sharon- swayam you better shut your mouth or I will shut it for you (my daily dialog hehehe)

Vicky- swayam what is your actual problem

Swayam- my actual problem is they are in the room all alone

Gang- sooo

Swayam- sooo anything can happen...(heard something in taani's room) what was that sound...OMG is rey tutoring my sister...OMG .. am coming Taani to rescue you (he was going to goto Taani's room when the whole gang stop him)...guys leave me

Gang- SWAYAM

Here with taarey.

Taarey are still kissing and are lost in each other but Taani came to her sense when she heard the gang shouting her bhai's name. and pushes rey, rey looks at her and smirks

rey- stabber lipstick ...I like it hmm...

Taani (red face) - rey ...ummm

Rey- you see sweetheart jome chata hu wahi pakar rehta hu

Scene shift to when everyone is leaving taayam house. (guys I just don't want to stay in one day ok I want to move on with the story)

The next day. Taani leaves the house early morning and leaves a letter for swayam.

Swayam came to the living room but then something strict his mind- TAANI omg she hasn't woken up (he was about move but then his eyes fell on the letter which was left by Taani. He gets the letter and opens it and reads it.

Note

Dear bhai sorry I didn't tell you but I had to leave for 3 days. Am going somewhere and I can't tell you. Will come back soon and I have switched off my phone so you or anyone can't call and tell the rest the gang if they ask. Don't be worried bhai am fine and will come back soon. Sorry you didn't find your morning coffee form me but was in a bit ruch. See you in soon

Love you bhai

From your dear sister Taani

End

Swayam(thought)- ese kese jasakti hai...ehhh will miss you sis

He leaves for college.

Meanwhile with Taani.

Reached a building-

(change the flag)

People were coming out and going in but everything got frozen when Taani OOppss I MEAN Tanya steps out of the car. Some people were shocked, some were just staring, or some were whispering saying "she is back". Some were walking past her and saluted her; she saluted back and went inside the building. And then when all the office saw her, they standees up from their chair.

Man 1- welcome back ma'me

Girl 1- hello ma'me nice to see you back

Man 2- good to see back ma'me

Tanya- it's good to be back and good to see you all again

And like this everyone welcome her.

Tanya- where is captain

Man 3- ma'me wo conference room me hai meeting me hai

Tanya- ok thanks

She walked to the conference room door and just opened the door not caring about what was going on in there. When she opened the door she sow the captain and smiled at him so did the captain.
(change the flags)

Captain to the people- i think we end here... you all may leave

The people leave and Tanya goes in front of him and salutes and says- Tanya is back to duties sir

Captain- welcome back agent Tanya shikawat

Caprain and Tanya sits in the conference for few min to chit chat.

Captain- well i think you should go back to your cabin

Tanya- i sure missed my cabin bye sir..(she left to her cabin)
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precap
gooms in st louis
tanya comes to rescue st louis
gang new intro to taani as tanya
Edited by d3fannm1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: tamanna-azaan

nice update...
loved taarey..

thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Amazing update
taarey kiss 😳
Swayuma part was so hillarious😆
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
awesome update ...tanya back to her duty...

loved taarey scene...and sw is so hillarious...thank god sh was there...

precap is interesting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Lovely update
Taarey kiss soo romantic
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Awesome :)
Waiting for the next update :)
PM me ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
superb updt
taarey kiss was nic
updt nxt prt sn

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