Case SS: Shadows of Past: last part:page 28

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Safina

@miss_choxz

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#191

That made me cry... Too good... Aww it's the last one what a shame... Why do I feel that everything is coming to an end???

I was thinking abt u... Was wondering when u will update El aur zindagi because hopefully me I'm expecting a love angle lol

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rizwanaa

@rizwanaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#192

awesome update
so the team finally ended up the case
proving Mr.Rawte innocent
Aisha words about the father n son were really nice
the small Arni moment was beautiful
the convo between Nath n Mr.Rawtewas heart touching
Arjun's father was behind his son in his every step
of his happiness,sadness n losses
but couldn't manage to stand beside him
may time is the only solution between their relation
it was a wonderful plot👏
thanks for pm

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#193

NYC..

PAR ITS SAD KI VO NHI MILE...

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Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#194

beautiful writing 👍🏼

both father & son emotionally attached to each other... but never show it...

finally case is solved

i had tears in my eyes while reading the part Arjun was with his Roshni...

excellent update.

& i am waiting for you next case ss 😉

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NainaSM

@NainaSM

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#195

so touched ...👍🏼... awesome ending .👏.. so emotional and beautiful 🤗

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#196

Like father like son...stubborn !!
Case toh khatam ho gaya...
but the POV of Father & son was simply awesome...
Men & their EGO...uff.

Lovely yaar...thanks for PM.
Keep writing.

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Harsha

@Harsha111

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#197

Great ending di...
Finaly case was solved
I expected father-son reunion. But this ending was more than which I expect
I had tears in my eyes
aisha's words was heart touching
hats off di for this emotional ss
waiting for your next ss

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#198

perfect end to the case and also to their turmoil...

i loved the part where arjun was speaking to roshni...i never really liked anyone except roshni as his love...and about the father-son bonding...beautifully written...no words needed to explain their relation...

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#199

this was really emotional...
the part where arjun feels roshni around him was the best part...
honestly speaking
the climax to th case mattered the least in this update for me heli...
coz for me...th most imp part in in this update ws that arjun's part where he silently watches his dad going away...once again..!

brilliantly written!

keep writing heli!

love
Aisha