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Posted: 11 years ago
I read the two parts as soon as i found them. Sorry, i was pressed for time and didnt immediately comment.
I loved how finally Arnav opened up to her so completely. His past was really sad.
Now i guess we will learn about Khushi's past. I am still thinking she is eiher a prostitute or belongs to a family of prostitutes.

I am really loving the khushi in this story.
This too was another brilliant update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
great update. Arnav is strong; although he initially retreats to his room, he realizes the impact his actions have on his family and forces himself to do something about his despair. I'm glad he finally opens up to khushi; her letter sounds like it will be very intriguing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
great update! I love how you explained Arnav's pain of not having Khushi around in the first part. I could almost feel the loss he was feeling! I'm so curious to know what Khushi's past is. Looks like it is something bug! I like that Arnav finally came clean and told Khushi everything out his past. I can't wait to read the next part!
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Posted: 11 years ago
For one moment there I felt that Khushi was that girlfriend of Akash. Or maybe I'm loopy due to the pain meds, I dunno.

I have noticed YOUR obsession with 'S' and I love it...what I find frustrating is the the clifhanger at the end of every chapter. LOL!! But I hope Khushi and Arnav can fight through this hiccup. I have finally caught up with all the chapters. :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
He is a doctor and was not able to save his brother! But that is life... I see that all the time in real life also.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh no! I did read in your notes that you just love cliff hangers, but this one's got to be the worst/best one! What is Khushi's reality? I have so many options running in my mind and each one is more weirder...
Coming to the rest of the chapter, loved it! Arnav's past sure was painful and the way Khushi totally understood what exactly Arnav was going through and why he isolated himself is commendable! No wonder Arnav is addicted to Khushi's presence in a mere few days.
So Arnav is actually Dr. Arnav Singh Raizada...that's awesome!
Looking forward to the next chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago
Juhi's two part updates always makes me dizzy especially with her cliffhangers. 😆

chalo one part hogaya.. Arnav's past is revealed. The initial part where he was desperate and got dejected in her absence was beautifully portrayed. Finally it was the reality of his sister and Nani's existence that shook him from the illusion. His plans of finding out Khushi's biography flopped. Same perplexed state for the readers seeing Khushi's indifferent behavior towards her employer. It was time to let out the past a perfect ambiance.. I should say the moonlight and the beauty of night is really seducing..

Dr.Raizada again ? Sad to hear about the inner turmoil he is facing at present. His guilt of not concentrating his own brother's health has really crushed him to pieces.

Now whats the reason for Khushi's hesitation.. Whats in that letter? uff dhadknein tez hota hain again..
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a cliff-hanger and now the nail-biting starts...I can think of 2 scenarios about Khushi - She is having a terminal illness or is she Akash's girlfriend?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Commented on page 17...will write more, when I will get my words back...
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh gosh !! pls dont tell me that even khushi's got cancer !!! such an intense update...loved it

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