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Posted: 11 years ago
Omggg..juhi..at wat point u hav end d chp..nw i ill b restless till next update..
Arnav my baby had suffered so much..i heart went out fr him..
Khushi ill b drr fr him i kwn dat
Nw d actual truth is out..so m lil relief..bt khushi truth is yet too cum
Bt y m havin feelin dat either khushi hav cancer yaa she was aaksh gf..shittt nw m restless!!
😲 😕 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aweesome
But ofcourse like you previously warned us you love cliffhangers
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Posted: 11 years ago

unres

WOW!!! you made me speechless!!
BRILLIANT UPDATE👏
arnav again locked himself in his world for 2 days!! that much khushi affected him, and he is aware of that, and now is ready to have her with him!!
thank god khushi came back!!
oh my god!! arnav is oncologist!!! wow!! his past is very sad!
poor akash died because of glioma!! and arnav was in guilt as he couldn't help him on time!!
waise I am having this feeling that the mahal which akash wanted to renovate is khushi's place or maybe his girlfriend is khushi's sister only!!
now khushi's past is also going to reveal.. cant wait juhi
very well described arnav's restlessness and his emotions while he was narrating about his past life to khushi!! and she silently supported him
continue soon
Edited by jas0308 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
That is truly heartbreaking to have seen so many of your family members suffer so much, but in realty it does happen. Arnav is a doctor makes me wonder if that will play a role in future parts yet?
For Khushi to be Akashi's girlfriend seems too obvious, but is she related to his girlfriend, will Payal make an appearance in your story? We know bua Ji exists, is Khushi fulfilling a wish too?? Is someone unwell in her family? Is she nursing someone?

So many questions, that will gnaw away at us and disrupt us from everyday work, not allow us to sleep, annoy our partners with our irritability and frustration, at thinking about what could be Khushi's story.. and you have the ability to solve them with a quick update , please have mercy!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
After two days of restlessness, Arnav knew thlat he needs Khushi with him. Wondering if Khushi had decided to avoid him why did she come to terrace.
Wondering about their talk when they will meet again in the morning on the terrace and if there will be any change in their equation.


I am not going to give you pleasure by wrecking my brain about Khushi's past/secret. Will wait for the update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was such an emotional update... i left out a big breath after reading it which i dont know for how long i was holding in...
u are really an amazing writer and i love how u give importance to each and every details ...

i just hope khushi was nor Akash's girl friend !!! lol

cant wait for next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was an amazinggg update!!!

Arnavs past was very sad to read abt but he being a doctor was unusual...lol no one makes him anything other than a businessmen

Wonder whats stopping khushi but m sure arnav will figure out something abt it

Amazinggg update!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fabulous update as always. You are a wonderful writer.

Not a Cliffhanger again man 😲

Now I will be counting the seconds and minutes till the next update...

Please ASAP

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Posted: 11 years ago
Arnav's story was indeed very sad. Is Khushi going to be connected to Akash in any way???
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Posted: 11 years ago
Why am i getting d feeling dat either khushi has cancer or khushi myt b akash's galfrnd!
I dunno, i may b an idiot whoz thinking a lot!
It was so bad to read about arnav being an oncologist and yet he couldnt save his brother from cancer.
I hav 4 of my cousins whose dad passed away coz of cancer and now dey r pursuing mbbs... I could actually relate to d story and couldnt help crying at der fate.
Bt people like dis emerge as strong individuals,waiting for dat point in ur story.
Great update, will b waiting for d next one.
Edited by Sj236 - 11 years ago

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