Arshi FF Inevitable Pain Thread 2 *NOTE* Pg 69

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diya

@luckyarshi143

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

awesome update...

loved it...

thnx fr d pm...

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hararnav

@hararnav

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

hey... i just started and ended reading this story... u r one good writer.

loved the way u took care to portray everyones emotions.

i was thinking maybe u shud end this here and start a sequel... just a thought its up to u...

i have to read the FF now... pls pm me when u update

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hydsri

@hydsri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Nice update. Good to see Anjali strong and ready to help Arnav. Ths story is going well so you should continue.

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bakula_gandhi

@bakula_gandhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

loved the update..

please do not end it here.

Would love to read how happy the family will be to see khushi back, how arnav, nk and anjali teach shyam a lesson for life...and to see arnav and khushi together.

waiting for the next part

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Rimi

@Rimi_BS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Thats awsome update..loved it..
And plz dont end it..continue with a new title.

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

It was anjali whu heard the conco. Loved it. Woowie arnav is sooo romantic. Khushi is healing fast. Anjali is getting stronger and loved to c the new look of nk the protective nature of his. Amazing. Update sooon

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nisha_mehta

@nisha_mehta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Update was too good
Its nice to see anjali being so strong for herself and the family
Nk indeed is a strong pillar of strength for his family.
Arnav will still have to prove that his love and trust for khushi will never change.
Pls dont stop here...waiting to read more about how shyam is punished and how the whole family would chrerish to have their khushi back and not to mention arnav and khushi being together

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Love.life2

@Love.life2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Hi thnx for d pm

Awesome updt.

Loved Arshi moments.

Finally they both seem happy it ws really touching to see wht khushi felt.

Also Arnav felt so happy hearing khushi loves him.

Anjali hs indeed become ASR n glad its end of game for tht creep.

Nk hopefully will manage to put him in jail.

Pls dnt end this story its nt at all dragging.

Also its jus the beginnin tht Arnav hs confessed his feelings n khushi too.

I hve kind of forgotten bt Arnav hs yet to talk 2 khushi n overcone this crisis.

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arshina223

@arshina223

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: aruni50218
Wow really nice...
Story so far has been perfect, but I think you should give Shyam a closure. and a chance for Arnav to prove he trusts Khushi more than Shyam's lies.

Ofcourse shyam will get his ending. I will not end it abruptly. But I thought to end it in 5 more chapters.

Thanks for commenting😊

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arshina223

@arshina223

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: crazy-ash
What!?? Where did 'should i end this' come from??!!
Nooo!!!! Khushi just came back! How can u end this now!
U r not draging the story! But believe me we wold like to see more of this old khushi...strong anjali...loving arnav and a wonderful NK !!

Lol!! I am not ending it with this chapter only. I thought that the story was going in slow pace and I should just end this in few more chapters. But there are many things that has to be cleared and I think I will just go with the previous pace , will not rush it.

Thanks for commenting ash! 😊