Arshi FF Inevitable Pain Thread 2 *NOTE* Pg 69 - Page 33

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lara3110 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!! what a story. Incredible.
Waiting for your next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
please update soon ...
Edited by ranogill - 9 years ago
arshina223 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's a note as well as reply to a comment. Please read this. I have clarified some things here.


Originally posted by: Serene77

I know u probably won't see this but I just wanted to say - amazing story.. Intense and well written . I love Arnav redemption stories and must say this one is really good . But one thing I didn't get.. Why is khushi so mad at her family for disowning her whileArnav put her thru worst hell.. He drove her to try and take her life.. Yet she responded to him and cut her ties with them?!?



Thank you dear for reading this story. I am glad that you liked it. I know I haven't updated it since long, I think it will be a year after few months since this story has not been updated. But I have my reasons for not updating it; its becoz life have become very busy as I am at the stage where I can't take my studies lightly if I want to have good career and becoz of this my mind is unable to thought of how I want this particular story to go ahead. I can give an update but I probably wouldn't have written it with my heart and I think it will turn out bad. So I will update this when I'll have the thoughts about it the way I want this to story to go ahead. I sincerely hope that it comes to me soon.

I am very much happy to clear you doubts. I know it seems very odd for Khushi to react emotionally towards arnav and not her family when he and his words were the catalyst to push her to take her life. Please notice the word I used, 'catalyst'. Arnav was catalyst and also in a way reason for her to take this step but he is in no way fully responsible for her to lose the will to live. It was the culmination of the things that have happened to her from the day she became orphan.

It was little things her adoptive family did and continued to do till the day she got married to the elder son of the very house where their daughter have already been married to. I personally don't think that garima would've disown Payal if she was in khushi's place, becoz let's face it, you can be angry with her for eloping but disowning? it's big thing and not to forget the reminder they gave her of her not being their blood.

It's one of many things they did to her.

When you live your life with your family, you would expect them to know you at least a little bit. For Khushi it was the last straw for her when the people she lived with for so many years did not even once questioned her about her hasty marriage. That told her how much they even know her.


In comparison to khushi's family and arnav; Arnav knew her for few months so it came as no shock to her that he misunderstood her and why would he not? he knew her for barely few months. But that isn't the case with her adoptive family. They knew her, she had expected them to at least to listen to her side of story, to raise questions but they didn't and she got more hurt from them than Arnav.

They are her adoptive family, the relations she have with them comes with blood ties which she didn't have with them. With Arnav the relation she have with him, is bound by love, and she can say that the thing which she has with him is solely hers. Even if he didn't reciprocate her feelings but hers are real and only hers.

That's y she was quick to forgive him and not her family who at every step, took what she gave but never returned anything to her and at every opportunity abandoned her.

I hope now it's clear to every body who had similar doubts.

Again thank you everybody for reading this story. I will try to update it soon.

-Arshina
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Posted: 9 years ago

THANKS SO MUCH FOR YOUR NOTE. I AM WAITING TO READ YOUR NEXT UPDATE. 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank u for giving a hope dat u will continue dis story...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the note.

Yes you should focus on your studies. It should be a priority.


I have been with it from the beginning and totally gave up on it every time I see a pm a new story update.

That's why I am not commenting or even reading the new one because no point giving your time to reading a story commenting on it when it's going to be left incomplete.

Sorry if this hurts you this is not just you but other writers as well so I read only completed stories or stories of those writers who at least inform the readers that they will complete after a break and have at least one complete story.

I would really like to see you complete this and your other stories because they are very good. I would read them when they are complete.


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Posted: 9 years ago
i really love all of your stories i enjoyed them so much
And you are an amazing writer and please update all of your stories soon. Happy dawil to and your family and friends
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Posted: 9 years ago
I read this story in one go i can't even describe how i am feeling now

I cried like throughout the story really beautiful concept loved it

whenever you update PM me pls


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Posted: 9 years ago
Waiting for your update or Epilogue, dear. Incredible story. Loved it very much..👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
A short note for all my work..
I am busy in studying for my post graduation entrance exams. I will only update any of my stories after June..

thanks for reading my work.

Arshina

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