Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19 - Page 86

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
loved it
while reading I was like😆😆😆
shlok is really crazy... He stopped each and every bus on the way to Pune
if he is little slow he would have got nicely from drivers and conductors😆
the bus scene is superb...
astha lied that shlok is her husband
liked the part where shlok says he escaped from gauri ... If not he would be dead
the last part is superb
both mobiles are dead and now no fuel in car🤣😲
now what will happen
continue soon
thanks for the pm😊

Originally posted by: niki795

unres ed my comment

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Thanks a lot dear. and i was smiling while writing like fools.still was reading again and editing as i didn't get time before and was smiling at myself, what i have written...😆

Ya, it was fun for me to write...
that's why i already wrote, it will be fun to read...
so both alone, adhi raaat ko... no phone to disturb, no fuel...😉
Don't over-think...😉 nothing such will happen...
just wait that will be cute good surprise...

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

Finally astha is back with shlok yeah
wah ye mere pati hai nd shlok was smirking ;-)
ab toh car ka petrol bhi khatm ho gaya
ab kya hoga
do update soon

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Unresed my views too sweetie...

Originally posted by: niki795

for the cute good surprise will have to wait till tuesday😊

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Don't worry, you will get weekend teaser in the evening...