Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19 - Page 64

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priyavin thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
How could he do that to Astha? Shlok broke her heart.

Hope he realises he loves Astha now, please update soon...


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Posted: 11 years ago
y is shlok doing this???
cant they sort it out ...is it necessary to hurt astha??
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Posted: 11 years ago
aab ayega asli mazaa...😉
was worth the wait u know... brilliant!!! simply brilliant...

hope u fix astha up with another guy ( real close friends) just to annoy the hell out of shlok yaar...
i wanna see him all riled up...😉
😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
stupid aastha...pehle shlok ko apni baat finish to karne deti...sooo Mr.Shlok Agnihotri you r in love with your best buddy Aastha...per wo usse confess karvana chahta hai that she also love him...so Mr.Shlok ne swati k saath mil k ye plan banaya hai...good going shlok...you won your aastha again...and i think swati is also support him to get back his love...poor aastha ye to usne socha hi nahi hoga...

Ek Shaks Pas Reh Ke Samjha Nahi Mujhe
Is Baat Ka Malal Hai Shikwa Nahi Mujhe

Main Us Ko Bewafai Ka Ilzam Kaisay Dou
Us Ne To Ibteda Se Hi Chaha Nahi Mujhe

Pathar Samajh Kar Paon? Se Thokr Laga Dia
Afsos Teri Aankh Ne Parkha Nahi Mujhe

Kya Umedein Baandh Kar Aaya Tha Samnay
Us Ne To Aankh Bahr Ke Dekha Nahi Mujhe?!!!...

very very beautiful update...jeenia...i m waiting your next update...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priyavin

How could he do that to Astha? Shlok broke her heart.

Hope he realises he loves Astha now, please update soon...




Just wait for tomorrow dear..all your questions will be answered...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

y is shlok doing this???

cant they sort it out ...is it necessary to hurt astha??



yaar shlok is doing nothing this time... Astha overreacted without listening to him...just wait for tomorrow...he is not hurting her but she hurted him this time... just wait yaar...all i can say...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anusha16

aab ayega asli mazaa...😉

was worth the wait u know... brilliant!!! simply brilliant...

hope u fix astha up with another guy ( real close friends) just to annoy the hell out of shlok yaar...
i wanna see him all riled up...😉
😆



thanks a lot dear...no space for anyone else between the two..just wait... for tomorrow..all i can say and you will get it...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

stupid aastha...pehle shlok ko apni baat finish to karne deti...sooo Mr.Shlok Agnihotri you r in love with your best buddy Aastha...per wo usse confess karvana chahta hai that she also love him...so Mr.Shlok ne swati k saath mil k ye plan banaya hai...good going shlok...you won your aastha again...and i think swati is also support him to get back his love...poor aastha ye to usne socha hi nahi hoga...

Ek Shaks Pas Reh Ke Samjha Nahi Mujhe
Is Baat Ka Malal Hai Shikwa Nahi Mujhe

Main Us Ko Bewafai Ka Ilzam Kaisay Dou
Us Ne To Ibteda Se Hi Chaha Nahi Mujhe

Pathar Samajh Kar Paon? Se Thokr Laga Dia
Afsos Teri Aankh Ne Parkha Nahi Mujhe

Kya Umedein Baandh Kar Aaya Tha Samnay
Us Ne To Aankh Bahr Ke Dekha Nahi Mujhe?!!!...

very very beautiful update...jeenia...i m waiting your next update...



Yaar she is not that stupid, she reacted what she saw on dancing floor and left but don;t know what happened when she left...ya, shlok at least knows what he wants now and will do anything to get because he already knows she belongs to him only...

Red lines suits for Shlok completely...
ya..she overreacted without listening...she could listen him completely...
but if she could have listened..ff was complete here only...😉
Just love your lines...
Will try to update tomorrow...

Edited by jeenia123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update. Made me sad, but i liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Havin tears in my eyes for astha...confused abt shlok y he was angry when astha said it was a passing moment?wat he wanted to talk abt?i think its not abt swathi then he would not hav gotten angry?plz clear my confusions fast..finally i hate swathi

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