Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19

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meera.rajeev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#601

Am speechless! At first i was angry at astha pulling swati to their group.. Bt now that was the best thing! Swati has realised how much shlok loves astha!! And again shlok did'nt!idiot! Varun and gauri are awesome! They are really very good friends. Lovely update dr!

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meera.rajeev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#602

Nooo!! Make it dream! Or a plan by shlok and swati! U know swati wants to prove that astha loves him and shlok wants to show there is nothing like that?? And monday? No. Plz yaar jeenia show some mercy! Give an update tmrw na! Plz plz plz plz

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#603

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani
ooh noo😡

Oh yes...

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#604

Originally posted by: meerab147
must be shlok's some kind of plan na😃...nd again i have to wait...oh no i will be busy on monday tuesday will read on wednesay dear...sorry i will be late 😭😭

No problem. ..friends are always welcome...rest you will know Monday. ...I mean Wednesday. ...😉

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#605

Originally posted by: niki795

superb teaser

without teaser only we would have been peaceful
but after giving teaser how do you think we all can stay without update??

Awee..so sorry but required for story to move further. ...on Monday dear. ..

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#606

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev
Am speechless! At first i was angry at astha pulling swati to their group.. Bt now that was the best thing! Swati has realised how much shlok loves astha!! And again shlok did'nt!idiot! Varun and gauri are awesome! They are really very good friends. Lovely update dr!

Thanks a lot dear..ya swati has understood shlok has moved ahead with astha but he himself is unknown yet...so what of shlok himself ask her to be back in his life...why eould she leave the chance to get her ld love

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#607

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev
Nooo!! Make it dream! Or a plan by shlok and swati! U know swati wants to prove that astha loves him and shlok wants to show there is nothing like that?? And monday? No. Plz yaar jeenia show some mercy! Give an update tmrw na! Plz plz plz plz

Awe so sorry. ..but no option except Monday. ..

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#608

Originally posted by: niki795
another awesome update
loved it
at first I got irritated how astha bought swathi to their group and making her go to shlok
but then the talk between varun ,,,, gauri ,,,, and astha made me understand y she is doing like that...!!!!
I love the way you write about each and every emotion,,,,,, feelings
shlok possessiveness about astha is beautifully described
varun and gauri are cute and their plan is nice
finally swathi realised shlok has moved on
but yet he didn't realise
continue soon
thanks for the pm😊

Thanks a lot dear. ...for your comment...I just try to make the story feelable and imaginative. ... ya swati has understood ..rest depends on shlok...