Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik
Here is swati shinde come...but I don't care of her because shlok love's aastha now...he not realise yet but soon...and Aastha find a way to reach his heart...
I like this one jeenia...she is not with me but she is jus Mine...lovelyyy...very nice updet and song to...
Arj kia hai...
Shamil hu iss khel me, fakat teri tariff ki khatir,
Verna baazi to me kab ki haar chuki hu...

Thanks a lot dear... ya... he loves astha just need to know, but how will he react between his present and past... that is to see...
WO line chori ki hai... i give credit to some anonymous, i read it form his or her work and loved it to the core... so used it...
Love your Shayari a lot.you have share for each and every update...

Humne to bus tumhe hi chaha hai sanam,
Ab dga de ya kar wfa... rahnege teri hi rahon mein hum...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#502

Originally posted by: sireesha76
me first

Thanks lot dear

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lechu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#503

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iam bit busy now dear

will read it in evening and comment!

Edited by LECHU123 - 11 years ago

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mmjjppss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#504

Hmmm :( swati is back... initially they ll fight then they ll fall in love again... poor astha... i dont wish this to happen leechu... please make shlok realise his lov for astha over swathi at the earliest please... quite a good update actually... astha handles situtions casually... so nic ...😛

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#505

Originally posted by: LECHU123
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iam bit busy now dear
will read it in evening and comment!

thanks a lot dear... will wait...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#506

Originally posted by: mmjjppss
Hmmm :( swati is back... initially they ll fight then they ll fall in love again... poor astha... i dont wish this to happen leechu... please make shlok realise his lov for astha over swathi at the earliest please... quite a good update actually... astha handles situtions casually... so nic ...😛

thanks a lot dear.but it will not go s easy as u think...i think so...i am in no mood to sideline Astha or Swati... neither she is bad nor Swati... lets see what next and welcome to my story, i think you commented for first time na??