Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: niki795

RES!!
unres!!

awesome update
loved it
finally shlok saved astha
loved the way shlok handlers the situation
hey you wrote astha agnihotri in your update... Its by mistake I think
loved the whole update
thanks for the pm
continue soon
loved the title of the story😊


Thanks a lot dear for liking the title.credit to my friend Lechu...
Ya, this shlok is more understanding and mature...
i edited Astha agnihotri.that was by mistake...
next update today evening or on Monday...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Nice title jeenia... So sholk is helping astha.. Bt am sure she won't like it when she gets to know the truth... Office near his flat huh? 😉 why is NA calling anjali? May to give out a lecture to astha u know get the hell out of my son's life types.. 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
brilliant update, love shlocks character, so protective of aastha, glad he didnt say "i told you so" instead he was so caring and considerate and im glad he knew her well enough that she would try for another job...liked the way he organised the ad in the paper...assuming Niranjan might cause some issues for asstha...wonder when they will realise they have deeper feelings for each other...hope they r not in denial...they seem perfect for each other...eagerly awaiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev

Nice title jeenia... So sholk is helping astha.. Bt am sure she won't like it when she gets to know the truth... Office near his flat huh? 😉 why is NA calling anjali? May to give out a lecture to astha u know get the hell out of my son's life types.. 😡



Ya, he is going to help her but definitely will not let her know... you know...
Ya office ear his flat as he knowingly or unknowingly want her to be around always...
Now what NA told Anjali... that will be a secret an dhow will it result out... a few updates later... wait till then...
Thanks a lot dear...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
super title dear
hmm hes protective:)

wat will anjali do ...she is the pawn of NA

will ashlok fall in love now?

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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: latha_555

brilliant update, love shlocks character, so protective of aastha, glad he didnt say "i told you so" instead he was so caring and considerate and im glad he knew her well enough that she would try for another job...liked the way he organised the ad in the paper...assuming Niranjan might cause some issues for asstha...wonder when they will realise they have deeper feelings for each other...hope they r not in denial...they seem perfect for each other...eagerly awaiting for the next update



Thanks a lot dear.yes he understand his pain. but a long way to go yet...
He has a lot weapons to keep his family away form his friends... but lets see what next for Shlok. and what will Niranjan do now...
but once he is not left with any option except to hire astha...
thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

super title dear

hmm hes protective:)

wat will anjali do ...she is the pawn of NA

will ashlok fall in love now?


Thanks a lot dear...
Ya he is protective ...
and what anjali will do is still a suspense but how will Shlok react will be another story...
And more over,, Anjali will not be a pawn in Niranjan's hands here, i wrote in character sketch, he is a man of rules and she is a follower but nice ones, who want happiness of their only son...
there is a lit to go for Ashlok to feel their love...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
hey my dear am late ..i know
first of all a big thanks for selecting the title🤗 🤗

and now about the story!
awsome update as always...my friend is an expert in giving superb updates...i know...but still i will keep on praising😉
ashlok relationship is so sweet and warm...
having good potential😉possessive shlok and chirpy astha!lol!
loved it a lot dear
keep rocking👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: LECHU123

hey my dear am late ..i know

first of all a big thanks for selecting the title🤗 🤗

and now about the story!
awsome update as always...my friend is an expert in giving superb updates...i know...but still i will keep on praising😉
ashlok relationship is so sweet and warm...
having good potential😉possessive shlok and chirpy astha!lol!
loved it a lot dear
keep rocking👍🏼


Ya,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,. you are really late...
but really loved title. i didn't even think will it suit to story or not just gave it...Thanks a lot sweetie...
Ya there relationship is quite good.but lets see whats next, how it takes turns...
Will try to update today next part too if cover atleast three pages...

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