Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: tamanna-azaan
awsum update dear...
it was so cute when they were doing charwa chouth...
atlast shlok spoke the truth...
i think NA is not good...
but anjali is nice lady...
astha came to knw abt the truth... and now she also knw that swati was not at all bad..
she did that for her mom..
shlok outburst on astha was awsum...
it show clearly how much shlok cared for astha...
i hope both soon understand their feelings..

Thanks a lot dear...
Yes, they did karwa chauth for each other but since unknown for their feelings, atleast shlok is not able to understand yet...
Na good or bad , yet to know, but his bad side brought them a bit closer...
Yes, Astha knows Swati is not bad at all... she had to go out of his life...and she knows Shlok weeps for her till now... her own feelings are growing... but what if Swati comes back now? What if Astha brings her back to Shlok's life knowing the truth?
What if Shlok accepts her back?

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Shalini

@srilanka123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

Marvellous!!!!!!!!!!! 😆

Waiting for the next update.

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latha_555

@latha_555

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

nice update, i like shlocks possessive side in this story. Glad they made up quickly, and realise there may be some changes in their feelings? Wonder if aastha will tell shlock about swati.

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: srilanka123
Marvellous!!!!!!!!!!! 😆
Waiting for the next update.

Thanks a lot dear...

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: latha_555
nice update, i like shlocks possessive side in this story. Glad they made up quickly, and realise there may be some changes in their feelings? Wonder if aastha will tell shlock about swati.

Thanks a lot dear.this is the biggest plus point, they make up very easily... and they will as they both can't afford to loose each other's friendship...
Let see what next, how will atsha tell him about swati????

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

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Posted: 11 years ago

#236

Awww shlok's possesive behaviour...

Confused aastha...

Swati's truth...

Agnihotri's pain...

All masala in your updet...amazing...now I wonder what next. ...Interesting jeenia...

Sochta Hu tu mera kon hai, kya lagata hai,

Kyu tere gum se magar dill mera sulagata hai,

Mere zajbat me dhere se chala aaya tu,

Ab tere saath ne ye yaki hai dia...

K chupi hai kahii tuj me meri subah...

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik
Awww shlok's possesive behaviour...
Confused aastha...
Swati's truth...
Agnihotri's pain...
All masala in your updet...amazing...now I wonder what next. ...Interesting jeenia...

Sochta Hu tu mera kon hai, kya lagata hai,
Kyu tere gum se magar dill mera sulagata hai,
Mere zajbat me dhere se chala aaya tu,
Ab tere saath ne ye yaki hai dia...
K chupi hai kahii tuj me meri subah...

thanks a lot dear but you know what after reading your comment, i am just feeling, i added more to one update... aweee... now what?
no problem , will write something else next...
thanks a lot dear...

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

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Posted: 11 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: jeenia123

thanks a lot dear but you know what after reading your comment, i am just feeling, i added more to one update... aweee... now what?
no problem , will write something else next...
thanks a lot dear...

I thought I disappoint you... You write very well..and I love it...but first time I m not predict what's next...that why I said...must be swati is back in shlok's life...Aastha use accept bhi kar le but then she realise her filing for shlok...but shlok fall for her first...I m sure...

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ANAM

@khuwahish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#239

That was amazing update...
Waiting for next... 😳

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

I thought I disappoint you... You write very well..and I love it...but first time I m not predict what's next...that why I said...must be swati is back in shlok's life...Aastha use accept bhi kar le but then she realise her filing for shlok...but shlok fall for her first...I m sure...

No sweety, not at all... infact i was laughing at myself that i gave more than required material in one chapter. ya i myself is not sure what next yet.yet to decide, will Swati be there or not...can you suggest?