Asya Mohabbat Ki Jeet FF(Part-18-A updated on page-118) - Page 77

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thnku dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update..
Zoya all emotional..

But in last asad stops her..


Continue soon
And sorry for late reply :(
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Ok dear i ll try😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ImmortalLove

Lovely update..

Zoya all emotional..

But in last asad stops her..


Continue soon
And sorry for late reply :(


Thnku so much di🤗
Its ok di no prblm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hiii guys. How r uh ol? I am olso fyn
Misssed me? I dnt think so coz i guess i am losing my readers nd olso i am myself disappointed with my work nyways.
This update is for aksasya di without whon this story would have not strted, she gave me the idea nd courage to write.
So i am very happy nd sad to declare tht this is the last part of this ff. I will give a big thnks to ol my frnd readers aftrwords. So here i start.
Part-18-A
Zoya-asad ap kuch nahi jante so plz jayiye yaha se. Plz mujhe mt rokiye. Plz go. This tym she yelled at him.
Now Asad was also angry, he didnt say anything just did what he felt was right. He held her head with one hand and kissed her roughly, zoya was shocked by his sudden action.
Zoya was pretending to be angry and was yelling at him but suddenly she was pulled towards him with a force nd her lips were sealed with his. This was the first time her mr. Khan initiated the kiss, and that too so rough. He was kissing her very roughly.
It was clearly visible that he was hurt, angry whole this month and was pouring ol his emotions in his kiss. He demanded entry in her mouth but zoya was so lost to respond she was in her world, many questions were rising in her mind. When she felt asad biting her lips, she gasped nd this was ol for asad to enter her mouth. He kissed her with ol his might.
Finally after few more seconds he broke the kiss nd rested his forehead against hers.
Zoya yelled at him as soon as she came out of this torture nd pushed him with all her might- what is wrong with uh mr. Khan? Kya kr rhe the ap? Ku kar rahe hai ap yeh sab?
Asad was ready for her outburst nd he was olso ready for this fight. As he read ssomewhere ''WE SHOULD FIGHT WITH OUR LOVER[boyfriend/husband] ND LESSEN THE GAP INSTEAD OF KEEPING SILENT AND INCREASING THE GAP BETWEEN THEM.
Asad-main toh vohi kar raha hu jo ek shauhar ko karna chahiye. Par ap kya kr rhi hai apne hi shauhar ko chod kr ja rh h. Ku?
Zoya now crying said-asad ap kuch nahi jante. I dont want uh to hate me. Plz dnt do this to me. Uh dnt know nythng bout me. Uh dnt rmmbr nythng.
Asad-what i dont rmmbr zoya, tht uh r daughter of gaffur siddqui. Tht ur father destroyed my family. Zoya was shocked to listen ol this from his mouth but kept quiet. But tell me one thing unhone jo kia usme tumhari kya galti hai. Nd tumhe kya laga ki meri mohabbat itni kamzor hai ki itni si bat se effect ho jaye. I am disappointed ki tum mjhe itna gira hua samjhti ho. Zoya vo past hai, aur use past hi rhne do. Zoya ap hi toh kehti ho ki humare ammii abbu ki saza hum bacho ko nhai milni chahiye. Phir ku main apko chod du. Nd he turned away from her being hurt.
Zoya took few minutes to take what was coming in her way. She hugged him from back nd cried her heart out.
Zoya-i am sorry asad. Main toh sirf apki khushi chahti hu aur kuch nh. Plz i am sorry.
Asad now played with her to lighten the mood. But i am not forgiving uh. Plz go now. Aap kahi ja rh thi na. Nd vaise bhi main kisi aur ke sath vo cute cute babies create krunga .
Zoya turned him nd graped his collor in her fisted hands nd said-dnt uh dare thnkng of touching ny other girl. I will kill uh. Nd with tht she kissed him, he too reponded, after breaking the kiss he scooped her in his arms nd took her to their room nd placed her there.
[SORRY GUYS NO MATURE CONTENT AS NOW I HAVE TWO SMALL SWTHRTS RIDHI ND AISHWARYA IN MY LIST WHO R UNDERAGE. ND I DNT WANT TO SPOiL THEM]He kissed her forehead, cheeks, jaw line nd finally claimed her lips. She too did same with him touching his six packs nd living the moment. Finally they both were now one after so much of difficulties.
Next Morning
The beautiful couple was sleeping peacefully in eachothers arms. They both had a pleasent smile on their face. The morning rays of sun enterd the room waking asad up.
He slowly opened his eyes to witness the most beautiful view infront of his eyes. His zoya snuggling more into his warmth nd sleeping peacefully naked in his arms. Flashbacks of last night came in his mind. The most beautiful night of his life.
He kissed her forehead nd wished her good morning. She olso moaned nf spoke in her sleepy voice. Good morning and planted a kiss on his nake chest nd again went in her dreamland.
Ok guys this was part A. I ll post part B afterwards. Till thn do like nd comment.
Love uh guys.
Nd aish nd ridhu mature toh nh tha na?
Love Vish❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
me first

DI i was going to sleep 😕


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Edited by Aishwa09 - 11 years ago
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Continue soon

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Part-B
Asad was ruffling her hairs, letting her sleep on his chest.
He knew from last on month she has not at all slept, olways crying cursing herself for indirectly destroying his lyf.
He placed a soft kiss on her forehead, i am sorry jaan. I knw mjhe tumhe btana chahiye tha tht i didnt forget anything but main kya karta mjhe pta tha ap mujhse nikah nh krengi aur sari zindagi khud ko blame krengi, isliye maine yeh sab natak kia.
Zoya who was sleeping woke up from the touch of his lips on her skin, was now in tears.
Asad felt something wet on his chest it is thn he realised tht zoya was crying, baby maine bola na i am sorry.
Zoya-plz ap sory my bolio. Infct i am sorry.
Asad cut her between-no more sorrys zoya agr ab sorry bola toh i ll not talk to uh, he said while faking anger.
Zoya-acha baba nh bolungi. Vaise asad ek bat btao maine apko milk mein sleeping pils dalke di thi how come uh didnt slept.
Asad smiled sheepishly and told her everythng
Flashback starts.
Asad was having his dinner when zoya brought the milk.
Zoya-mr.khan plz drink thi main andar se apki medicines lati hu. Asad nodded.
As soon as zoya left asat got up from his chair went in kitchen nd threw the milk in sink nd poured the glass with fresh milk.
Zoya came back nd found asad eating his food she handed him his meds nd asked him to take it with milk. Asad obliged. She was happy tht she can now leave him.
Flashback Ends
By the end of confession zoya was in a shock he mouth was in a perfect O shaped.
Zoya-mtlb us rat aap jag rhe the? Asad nodded his head lyk a kid with puppy eyes.
Asad-acha hua na jag rha hota tha nh toh aap toh mjhe chod ke chali jati.
Zoya was feeling guilty listening tht line. Asad noticed the change of emtoions on her face.
Asad- dnt be sad now. But uh knw i missed uh so much this whole month.
Zoya cuddled more into his warmth, i too missed uh, uh knw i was feeling horrible whn doc said tht uh lost ur memory for temporary basis, but agr apne vo natak na kia hota toh hum yaha nh hote.
Asad-vaise ZOYA KUCH BHI KAHO MOHABBAT KI JEET HI HUI HAI UNLIKE THT SERIAL QUBOOL HAI JIS MEIN END MEIN MAIN LEADS KO MAR DIA. INSAN CHAHE KITNA KARLE PAR HOTA VAHI HAI JO KHUDA CHAHTA HAI. HUMARI MOHABBAT KI JEET HUI. HUME KITNA SUFFER KIA, TANVEER KI HAR SAZISH NAKAAM RH.
Zoya-ha asad uh r ryt, aftrol buraai ki jeet na hi kabhi hui hai aur nahi hogi, har yug mein sirf achayi ki hi jeet hogi.
After few more talks they both refressed nd came down for brkfst.
Zoya made sandwitches nd coffed for them. They were having dinner when suddenly the door bell ring.
Zoya-main dekhti hu.
As zoya opened the door she was surprised to see her whole family infront of her eyes, dil, ras, nik,najma, imran, nuzat, ayan humaira. Everyone was ther.
From their luks it was evident tht they about their confession nd zoya staying here, she still looked at asad for confirmation nd her nodded.
Zoya hugged dil nd cried but this time tears of hapiness, dill kissed her forehad nd blessed her.
Ayaan-finally everythng is ok now.
Zoya-tum bhi raabart tum bhi inke sth mile the?
Ayaan-ha pr mjhe bhaijaan ne kl hi btaya sbkuch, aur main toh vaise hi apne bhaijaan aur bhabhi ki khushi chahta hu.
All hugged eacother, humaira nd zoya olso accepted eachother.
As everyone entered the house she saw gaffur at the end with his head bowd down. She turned away to go, as she turned she bumped in asad who was standing ryt behing her.
Asad-bas zoya aur kitna torture krogi apne abbu ko? Ab toh maaf krdo, is pure mahine mein koi aisa din nh jb inhone mjhe phone krke mra aur apka hal chal na pucha ho. Galtiyan sbse hoti h pr inhone apni galti mani.
She luked at dil nd she nodded her head assuring her to forgive him.
Gaffur-bete tum chaho toh mjhe lock up mein dalvado pr mjhe maf krdo nd he felt zoya's body crushing his hugging her tightly
Zoya hugged him tightly nd cried-abbu i m sry, i love uh i missed uh so much.
G-i missed uh too my bachi, he signalled asad to join the hug nd obliged. With tht humaira olso ran nd hugged her family.
So like this mohabbat ki jeet hui aur happy ending.
So here my ff ends.
Plz scroll down.
Love Vish❤️
Edited by MagsDhingra - 11 years ago
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Finally my ff ends here😔, but its ok ol gud things end nd bad too😆
I want to give a warm hug🤗 to ol my readers who olways encouraged me nd blessed me with lots of beautiful comments nd complimnts.
My dearest frndReema di, shreya di, aksasya di bcoz whom i started this ff, raj, rey, somy, afra, ridhu, aishu, shrashtu, labu, anopma di, Fui, nilusoni, kreyas, nd many more. Sorry if i forgot someone's names.
Thnks to the all silent readers. Thnku so much everyone.
Love Vish❤️
Edited by MagsDhingra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Aishwa09

me first

DI i was going to sleep 😕


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Hey i didnt expected ur cmnt forst as i thought uh must be sleeping.
Nyway thnku so much swthrt. Ok now sleep😊

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