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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woww...full suspense plz update soon... :)
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here is another part, i don't know your comment

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JEEVAN KAY DIN PART 12 A

Rakesh serve food on table...they all sit...having lunch quietly...rakesh serve sakshi and said: Radha bi bi nay aap ko sirf yeah kahany ko kaha hay...aap sirf doodh ki bani hui dish hi khaa sakti hain...sakshi utter no word...just nod and start eating. Others amaze to see her eat silently.
Arjun: sakshi, tum un khatoon ko jaanti ho...he amaze to see her no reaction.

Sakshi: nahi main nahi jaanti...haan magar itna zarrooor jaanti hoon kay...mera dil kah raha hay kay mujhay sirf yeah hi khana chahay...so main kha rahi hoon...but I don't know who is radha bi bi?

Shree: ask her...sakshi, tumhain yaad hay kay tum nay mandir main kiya kiya tha...

Sakshi: surprise to hear...mandir...kaun sa mandir...hum kuan say mandir gay hain...yahaan koi mandir bhi hay kiya...aur hum kab gayay...her answer shocked everyone...they stop eating...look her confuse shree try to say some but sameer stop him...finish lunch shree...he understand his signal...so quietly start eating...they all finish soon...they sit on sofa in sitting room...they all in deep thought.

Arjun: shree humain uss larki kay ghar say...ek nishaan mila tha...uss ki photo dekhaooo...he remember something...shree show the picture...sameer look...same this mark I find on other girl house...shree check this mark on net...Arjun instruct him.

sakshi said: show me what kind of mark...she see and her eyes wide open...she said quickly...guys main iss nishaan ko jaanti hoon...yeah toh kala jadhoo karnay waloon ka nishaan hay...

Yes sir, sakshi is right...shree said looking in his laptop.

Sameer: sakshi, tum aur kuch bhi jaanti ho iss baray main.

Sakshi thinking: haan, sameer iss nishaan ko sirf wo log istemaal kartay hain jo...kissi maqsaad kay liyay takleefain utha rahay hoon...yeah kala jadoo ka sab say akhri step hay...agar uss to kamyaabi milli toh wo amar ho jai ga...aisa kuch main nay ek dafah ek article main parha tha...but I don't believe in such a kind things guys...yeah sab bakwas hay...aaj kal kay daur main yeah sab per kuan yaqeen karta hay.

Shree: sir, I find article...yes ,she right...I tell you what the article say...he start reading...kala jadoo kay mannay waloon ka yeah kahna hay...agar wo sacchay dil say prathna karain toh un ko bohat saari saktiyaan mil jaati hain...her sakti kay saath un ka nishaan badal jaaata hay...yeah nishaan sab say akhri...parhao ki taraf ishaara karta hay...iss parhao main kamyaabi kay baad wo is duniya ka sab Say ziyaada taqatwar insaan baan jay ga...sab kuch karnay ki taqat kay saath...aaj tak bohat say logoon nay koshish ki magar koi bhi kamyaab na hua...he stop...than continue: sir, sab say interesting baat yeah hay kay...iss akhri parhao ko par karnay kay liyay...uss ko three...kunwaari larkyun ki bali daini ho gi...un three larkyun ka aapas may kuch cheezo ka mila bohat zarroori hay...he stop.
Sameer: shree...ruk kyun gay...agay parho...

Shree: sir, agay toh kuch bhi nahi hay...bas yeah hi likha hay kay bali...un teeno larkyun ki ek saath...aur amawas ki raat ko di jay gi...un larkyun main kiya common hay uss ka zikr nahi hay. Aur haan sir, ek baat aur... kal amawas ki raat hay.

Arjun: agar hum yeah maan bhi lain toh...uss kay pass abhi ek larki kam hay...tum nay kaha na kay...teen larkiyaan cahahi hain...magar yeah sab bakwas hay...main nahi manta.

Sameer: Rawte, tumharay maanay ya mannay say kuch nahi hota...hum nay saaray option check ker liyay hain...kahin say kuch bhi nahi mila hay...iss liyay ab hum iss theory pay hi kaam kar kay dekh latay hain...Arjun start thinking...his mind ready to accept sameer logic...he is right...he find nothing about those girls...ok, he agree with sameer...we work on this basis...as we know they have two girls and they need one more...so we start looking what thing similar in those girls and whose would next to whom they target? Arjun said...rest of nodded and get ready to find another possible victim.

They all go out and start working in two group...its nearly night when they return back...exhausted...they holding their head sitting worried...they got no similarity between them...just they both innocent, under 20, beautiful, without parents, alone child...these are just not a big things in ETF point of view...

Sameer: oh, god I feel my head spinning...whole day gone...we still unaware of the next targeted girl...damm it.

They all feel same...sitting quietly...rakesh come and ask about dinner...they all give him positive answer and go to freshen up...it's take 40 minutes they finish dinner... settle in sitting room and start discussing...sakshi feel sleepy...sameer see her yearning and said: sakshi and Ayesha you to go and have some sleep...we also go for sleep...they both stand and left...rest of sitting and don't know what happen?

First one Arjun comes in sense...he see Rakesh...he feel his face wet...he check water...he said...he sit quickly but feel dizzy...oh, my head...its spinning...he hold his head...then see same with sameer, shree and chotu...they all sitting holding their head...Rakesh bring water for drinking...they all drink water and feel relax.

Rakesh: sahaab aap sab aaj raat ko yahi so gay thay...iss tarah sofa per...undhar jaa kar so jaatay...aur haan main nay aap ko jaaganay ki koshish bhi ki magar aap jaagay hi nahi...iss liyay main nay pani dala aap sab par...dekhay toh dopeher ho gai hay. Aap sab theek toh hain naaa...ETF feel blast their mind...they all stand in hurry...looking each other...they rush to girls room...door lock...chotu break the door...they get in...their doubt comes true...sakshi is missing.

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Edited by Rehana25 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so sakshi is the third girl for sacrifice
and that mandir wala pandit is doing all this or whom
pls for next part pm me also
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sakshi in danger
nice update
con soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
Sakshi goes missing
thanks for pm
cont soon
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nice bt
these things if we see it vl be gud
wriitng it turning into bore
& pls try to give little gap between lines
& hope if u use colours fr every diff character it vl be grt
& pls try to write in eng
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Posted: 11 years ago
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HERE IS ANOTHER PART

I FINISH THIS CASE TODAY

THANKS


PART 12 B

ETF can't believe on their eyes...they never think that was sakshi...the girl with them...that bubbly...chirpy girl...that innocent...beautiful girl...she is the target...they never know...but now what's next?

Ayesha can't believe it's happening...she said: we both come in...lay down on bed...talking and then sleep...nothing suspicious...but Arjun understand something...although he never believe those such things but question is sakshi safety...he never take any risk...he call Rakesh...when he comes in...He ask him...can you tell me where is your Radha bi bi live? Ji sahaab...hum ko pata hay...he reply...I want to meet her, now...Arjun said...Sameer look him enquiringly...uss ki kahi hui ek baat mujhay khatak rahi hay...samjhay ya samjhaoon. Arjun said.

They all reach her place...house is very neat and clean...she is cooking...looking them she is very happy...offer them to sit...they sit she bring...lassi for them...they refuse but she say...this is important for them to drink it...they feel relax and calm...no point to refuse...they drink lassi and really feel...calm and peace.

Radha: smile to see their reaction and said: aaj ki raat aap sab kay liyay bohat bari hay...mujhay pata hay kay uss ka war chal gaya hay...aur wo uss pyari si larki ko lay gay hain magar us ski fikr maat karain...ussay kuch nahi hoga...aap sab jaa kar araam karain...raat ko 9 baje main aaon gi...ap sab meray saath chalain gay...

Sameer: cut her short...magar kahaan...aap kiya kah rahi hain humain kuch nahi samajh main aa raha hay...

Radha: samjhanay ka time nahi hay...agar main ziyaada boli toh sab kuch khatam ho jaiay ga...bas aap say request hay kay...jain aur araam karain hum raat ko milain gay...aur haan sirf...doodh aur dahi ka istemaal karna...aur kuch mat khana...baqi sab baad main bataoon gi...aab jao aap sab...aur mujhay bhi kaam karnay do...they are back.

In sitting room...they all stuck in their thought.

Chotu: sir, yeah sab jadoo toonay karnay waloon ka kaam hay.

Shree: haan lag toh mujhay bhi raha hay...magar sakshi ko kidnap karnay ki wajah samjh nahi aa rahi...

Ayesha: haan, wo toh yahaan ki ranay wali bhi nahi hay...uss ka toh janam bhi yahaan nahi hua...

Arjun: rathod, ask for backup and get ready ambulance...we might need for that...

Sameer: back up for what and where?

Arjun: around that mandir...mandir...

what are you saying? Sameer furious...but Arjun just nodded...haan rathod...mera saara shaak ab uss pandit per hay...tumhain yaad hay...jab hum mandir gay thay toh...wo sakshi ko kaisay dekh raha tha...uss nay hum sab ko chaur ker sab say pehlay sakshi ko parsad dainay ki koshish ki...jis subah sakshi miss hui hay...uss kay room main say mujhay wohi smell aa rahi thi jo main nay wahaan mandir main bhi mehsoos ki thi...lily ki...tum ko pata hay kay mujhay lily say allergy hay...aur haan ek aur sab say important cheez...uss nay apnay galay main uss nishaan ka...pendant bhi pehna hua hay...

haan sir, aab mujhay yaad aaya...kay main nay yeah nishaan kahaan dekha tha...shree excited. Sameer nodded and make call for backup and other things.

They all discussing different things but still result not comes right...until it's dark...they have dinner...only milk base and yogurt base things...light dinner and get ready for big mission. Their heart beats fast...they badly miss her lovely girl...and finger cross for her safety...this is totally awkward situation...they can't do without that lady...just wait for the best time and now time comes.

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Edited by Rehana25 - 11 years ago
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MY LOVELY READERS I CLOSE CASE HERE

TODAY, STORY IS A BIT DIFFERENT

BUT I HOPE YOU LIKE IT

THANKS

PART 12 C

Exact 9 o'clock Radha bi bi comes with two boys...who are they? She said tell you after that...don't waste time...go...they all ready to go with her...silently follow her...reaching that place...they are no shock...they already know...she take them near the mandir...wait outside...hiding in bushes...mandir sinking in totally dark...every place have quiet...even no insect and animal voice comes...it's nearly 30 minutes past than they look one man...come out from mandir and start walking other path...

Radha ask them to follow him quietly...they all hiding behind the tree and bushes...continue follow him...there is a small hill...near the canal...that man stop...near the hill and disappear...they shock...running near the hill...but no way found...Arjun try to press some places...they all follow him...chotu pull one bush with frustration and door open...they quickly get in...inside totally dark...they try to open torch but Radha bi bi stop...said in low voice: khamooshi say ahista ahista...deewar pakar ker chalo...roshini mat karna...they quietly obey her...little far comes than they look the places light with wooden torch...now it's difficult to hide...they look each other...Sameer signal for one side...they see door...Arjun silently slip there...he open door get in...others waiting him...he comes out...his hand holding some gown... they all wear that gown and mix with others...all people wearing gown...hooded their head...go to one side...ETF mix with them.

Soon they arrive in big place...there is a very big idol of kaali...many ladies dancing in front of idol...music rhythm is very heart touching...some other people...make sajda...front of that...everyone busy...

Radha instruct them in low voice...they act quickly and move...soon they all arrive near the idol...mandir pandit present there...they look...three stone benches...situated in front of idol...two is occupied but one in middle is empty...two beautiful girls...lay down on these benches...all place have fill with some heart touching fragrance.. that fragrance start effected on them...Radha bi bi give them...one seed to eat...they eat...its bitter...but after eating that they feel fragrance not effected on them...they stand very near...try to look sakshi but in vein...they can't see her anywhere...Arjun heart beat very fast...he want to look her...he want to hold her...he want to touch her...feel her fragrance...his heart become restless...suddenly music stop...everyone quiet...this silence build fear inside heart but they are no ordinary people they are ETF...they know how to deal the situation? They hide their self...when pandit starts chanting and after that speech.

Pandit: meray dostoon aaj wo waqt aa gaya hay...jab hum aapnay maqsad main kamyaab ho jay gay...aaj itnay saloon ki tapassiya kay baad hum ko wo sakti milnay wali hay...jiss ka humain kab say intezaar tha...aaj in teeno larkiyun ki bali ek saath day kar...hum wo sakti haasil kar lay gay...jao meri wafadaar kanikain jao...aur uss khas mehmaan ko lay kar aoo.

One familiar voice comes...they all turn to that side...can't believe on their eyes...she is wearing beautiful full gathers red lehenga...her hair tied up in braid with flowers on it...small choli...she is wearing too much gold jewellery...her full apparel like apsara...she look heart taking beautiful...some ganika hold her...take in front of pandit. She tries to free her and continue saying...chaur do mujhay...leave me. Arjun clinch his fist.

Pandit: try to give her a bowl...she refuse to drink...throw away. He said: pee lay...pee lay...kab tak nahi peeyay gi...yeah amrit jal hay...tu nay kal say na kuch khaya hay...na peeya hay...lay pee lay...he try again.

Sakshi: try hard and succeed free her hand...take that bowl and throw it away again...said: tum yeah samjhatay ho kay tum aapnay maqsad may kamyaab ho jao gay...nahi kabhi bhi nahi...main yeah nahi peeyun gi.

Pandit: theek hay...lay jao uss ko...lita do baqi doosron ki tarah...ganika take her near the bench and make her to lay down...pandit chanting...then signal them leave her...ETF shock to see that there is no robes but sakshi can't get up...some invisible power control her to laying..pandit take one bowl near her...smoke come out in that bowl...she inhale that and her eyes become heavy...she try hard to open her eyes.

Radha said Arjun and two other boys...when I tell you...you have to jump and save those girls...Arjun, you sakshi...kumar, you aarthi...karan, you shana...she mention with finger...now go and take your places...when hear my voice...you all act fast...you have only one minutes to safe them...now go quick...they nodded and move quickly...take places near there...task.

All start chanting...amazing thing happen...those benches...start moving...chanting fast...benches moving fast...more fast chanting and more fast moving benches...Radha focus on the kaali idol...suddenly chant stop and benches stop as well...Radha voice...now, this is the time...baccha lo...her voice impact is like bomb blast...arjun and others two boys run girls side...Arjun jump on sakshi holding her waist for both hand and roll over...sakshi capture in his arms...rollover with him...others did same...that big sword come down and hit hard with benches...all benches smash...pandit stand in shock...what just happen?

People start screaming...police come in and catch each and every person...ETF run to catch that pandit...they arrest him...Radha bi bi help the other two boy...they are holding those girls in arms...but where is Arjun and sakshi? team go to other side...stones and dust cover both of them...Arjun try to remove those things...shree, chotu help him...soon they able to drag them out...Arjun save sakshi under his body...she have just some scratches...but Arjun hit lot with stones...wound oozing blood...but he didn't look himself...he just look sakshi...in his arms...he scoop her up...come to that side where Radha bi bi standing with sameer, Ayesha and pandit with hand cuff...she see him holding sakshi...smile and give her water bottle to drink...he make sakshi sit and help to drink her water...she comes in sense...patting her eyes...she look so innocent and pretty...are you feel ok? Arjun ask politely...she look him...lot of care...lot of love...visible in his eyes...Arjun, tum mujh say abhi bhi naraz ho...main...he put finger on her lips...make her quiet...ssshhh...hum baad main baat karain gay... Radha bi bi calls her...

Radha: tum hara khel khatum ho gaya...pandit ji. Ab tumhari saari sakti bhi khatum hbo gai hain...

Pandit: meri samajh main nahi aa raha...kay aisay sab kaisay ho gaya...main nay toh her tarha say dekha tha...sirf puranay punno say hi nahi balkay...iss duniya kay record bhi check kiyay thay...phir yeah sab kaisay ho gaya.

Radha bi bi: main batati hoon...she said: tum bhi sunno...main jaanti hoon kay tum sab beqarar ho yeah sab kuch sunnay kay liyay...

Arjun holding Sakshi in his arms...other boys also did same with other two girls but sakshi condition is worse...her eyes keep shut and open...Arjun want to sit her but she refuse she said: I want to hear please...

Radha bi bi smile to see her and start saying: her religion may acchay aur buray dono tarah kay log hotay hain...yeah ek bura insaan hay...iss ka maqsad bura tha...yeah bohat saari sakti haasil karna chahta tha...takay yeah saari duniya ko aapna ghulam ban sakay... Yeah sakti haasil karnay ka iss ka akhri step tha...iss kay baad iss ko finish karna bohat muskil ho jaata...iss nay her step per begun ah logoon ki jaan li hay...lekin iss step per iss ko ek nahi balkay teen innocentlarkyun ki bali daini thi...Arjun cut her short...haan hum nay check kiya magar hum ko koi bhi similiarity nahi milli...in teeno main.

Radha bi bi: hay...similarity hay. gintay jao

NO 1: un teeno kay parents may say kissi ek ka ya dono ka murder hua ho...aur un hoon nay aapni aankho say wo manzar dekha ho.

NO 2: un teeno ki umar aaj ki amawas ki raat 20 saal say ziyaada na ho.

NO 3: un teeno ki khubsoorti bemisaal ho...

NO 4:un kay dil main ishiq ki aag jalti ho.

NO 5: un teeno ka untouch...ya kanwara hona sab say ziyaada zaroori hay

NO 6: un teeno ka eklota hona zarroori hay...yani no brother, no sister.

Radha bi bi saying and they all listen this whole story interestingly...magar mujh say kahaan mistake hui? Pandit ask...haan, yeah main tum ko batati hoon...radha bi bi said: isski wajah say...she point her finger on sakshi...dekh pandit ghuar say dekh...sab kuch mila liya...lekin uss kay rakshak ko bhool gay...pandit look sakshi first than Arjun and he said: itni bari bhool mujh say...itni bari bhool kaisay ho gai mujh say...he start scream and crying...

radha said: sahaab iss ko lay jao...lekin ek minute...radha turn to sakshi side and said: tum iss kay galay say iss pandant ko khench lo...arjun holding her help to move forward...sakshi stop on front of him...look in his eyes...pandit can't bear her glare and lower his gaze...sakshi snatch that pandant from his neck...he kneel down in front of her...rubbing his forehead on ground...saying: maaf kardo...mujhay maaf kar do...sakshi scared...she hold tight Arjun...police take him away...

All done...everyone safe and sound...ETF look sakshi condition...they all worry...she still wearing that heavy lehenga and jewellery...it's hard to leave her...she even can't stand still...Arjun scoop her up in his arms...Radha bi bi said: tum iss ko lay jao...iss ko change karwa kay...sonay daina...jab yeah uthay gi toh sab theek hoga...uss kaminey nay uss ko nashay ki smoke inhale karwai thi...uss ki wajah say hay...iss ka yeah haal hay.

Arjun: magar main aap say aur bhi kuch pochna cahahta hoon.

Radha: tumharay sab swaloon ka jawab doon gi...magar akelay main. Ab tum jao...iss ko lay jao.

Arjun ask Ayesha to come with him...she need to be change...She go with Arjun...Radha bi bi and other two boys and girls also go with her...rest of team already busy doing wrap up work under sameer instruction...they take everything in their custody...case solve and put one more feather in ETF history.

Arjun and Ayesha reach home...he make sakshi lay on bed...Ayesha start changing her dress...he go out...after 20 minutes she comes out...she got a bundle of clothes and jewellery...

sir, hhmmm...he is sitting on sofa...close his eyes...head back...hear her voice...open his eyes quickly...

haan , kiya hua Ayesha, sakshi...

sakshi theek hay sir, so rahi hay...aap pareshan na hoon. He just nodded...tum bhi araam kar lo, Ayesha...subah ho gai hay...main Sameer kay pass jaa raha hoon...uss ko sayaad madad ki zarrorat ho.

Iss ki zarrorat nahi hay...hum kaam khatum karkay aay hain...voice comes from door side...both see Sameer, chotu and shree standing there...

They all feel tired as well as relax that they succeed...now it's time for rest...they all gone there room and sleep for sometime of period.

Its afternoon when they all wake up...they freshen up and come out...

Ayesha comes in hurry...sir, Arjun sir, wo sakshi...kiya hua sakshi ko...arjun stand...wo room mian nahi hay...what? Room main nahi hay toh kahaan hay...pata nahi main nay sab jaga dekha hay...magar wo kahi bhi nahi hay...Ayesha tell them...They all worried...thinking where she gone and where to start searching?

Rakesh enter looking them worry ask? Kiya hua sahaab? Aap sab itna pareshan kyun hain...

Arjun: kiya tum nay ma'am ko dekha hay...ji, wo doosri wali ma'am ko ...he ask...haan, haan...shree reply in hurry...

Haan, ji wo abhi thoori dair pehlay toh yahi thi...main nay un ko chai di thi...ho sakta hay kay bahar gai hoon...sahaab ji aap bhi jain aaj toh gaon main sab bohat khush ahin...aur opperwala bhi bohat khush hay...itna accha musam hay...lagta hay saari nahusaat khutum ho gai hay...jain aap bhi bahar jain... (He said in detail)

They all go outside and amaze to see the weather...Rakesh is right...light and dark clouds cover the sky...light breeze with fills of flower fragrance...

Sameer: hum sab divide ho kar idhar udhar dekhtay hain...sakshi idhar hi kahin ho gi...they all go in different direction to search her.

Arjun move forward in one direction...suddenly he hear familiar laugh...he move that side quickly...that scene make him amaze...there is a very big tree...one swing hanging there...some village girls...present there...laughing...giggling and pushing swing...yes, here is Miss Publicist...her hair open and waving on air...swinging...and laughing...screaming...telling those girls: aur zor say...aur ooncha...thora sa aur zor say...main asmaan ko choona cahati hoon...aur zor say...girls try hard to pushing her and she is enjoying too much.

For a while he like to watch her but very next moment he know that he worried about her and they all searching her while she is enjoying here...his anger comes out...he move forward and stand in front of her...cross his arms across his chest...his usual pose.

Sakshi wake up and look Ayesha sleeping...for while she laying on bed then she leave the bed...get the bath and come out...whole house is quiet...she come in sitting room...rakesh sitting on passage see her comes in...she ask tea...he go and bring tea for her...she take her cup and come out when she come out and see the weather...she like to go out...finish her tea nad go out...she find some girl swinging...she want swing as well...she join those girls...they are happy to talk with her and soon she become her friend...after sometime she got turn...she start swinging...close her eyes...screaming...laughing...saying...aur zor say...aur zor say...she closed her eyes and think about Arjun...yes, her first love...kitna accha ho na...kaash kabhi Arjun mujhay iss tarah push karay ...toh mujhay kitna maza aayga...then scold her heart...kiya hay sakshi, toh sudhar jaa...agar uss kharoos ko teray iradaay ki zara bhi khabar ho gayi na...toh tera SYS session idhar hi shuru ho jai ga...na ba ba main bas issi main khush hoon...she open her eyes...suddenly look him standing in front of her swing(off course in safe distance)in his usual pose...glaring her...OOPs...sakshi sayaad teri tabiyaat kharab hay jo tujh ko woh kharoos nazar aa raha hay...she try to rub her eyes and forget that she is sitting on swing...leave the robes rub her eyes...it's dangerous...Arjun understand in a second what could be happen next...he quickly run to her side and catch her in his arms...she realise her mistake late...she scream...wait to hit the ground...close her eyes tight...she is ready to be hurt but no...she feel to be catch...feeling familiar touch and fragrance...she slowly open her eyes...her eyes crush with two black orbs...she raise her hand and touch his cheeks with her finger...is it real? Or am I dreaming? She feel his rough touch on her finger tip...her hair half cover his shoulder and face...she smile on his gesture and slowly move hair...he still holding her in his arms...she encircle her arms around his neck...then girls gather around them...di di...aap bach gayi ...They all clapping...they both snap out and Arjun safely stand her on her feet...he said: kiya, tum pagal ho kiya...abhi hadi pasli tooth jaati toh pata chalta...

sakshi: pass him smile say: tumhari galti hay...ek dum say samnay aa gay...main ghabra gai...but before they start fight again...Sameer interrupt them. They both stop and sakshi said: oh, god Ayesha itna maza aaraha hay...itna accha muasam...or yeah swing wow...chalo na hum dono...thoori dair aur jhool kar aatay hain...ayesha also like to do it but hesitate...Sameer sense her intation...ayesha just look once sameer than sakshi...

Sameer said: it's ok, Ayesha agar tum jaana chahti ho toh jao...but jaldi aajana...hum bas ab thoori dair may Mumbai kay liyay niklay gain...ETF other member can't believe sameer reply...they turn to see him but he turn to go back...sakshi drag Ayesha with her.

Arjun want to meet Radha bi bi...he excuse and go to meet her.

Radha bi bi: smile to see him and said: main jaanti thi kay tum zarror aao gay...main sirf tum ko woh bata sakti hoon jiss ki mujhay ijazat hay...main kissi ka seceret nahi bataon gi...

Arjun: mujhay sirf ek do batain hi pochunai hay...ek toh yeah kay aap pehli baar sakshi say milli thi aur aap nay room main kiss say baat kit hi.

Radha: sakshi ki maa say...Whaaat? arjun scream.

Radha: sakshi ki maa ek bohat religious aurat thi...uss ko beti ki bohat kwahish thi...magar jab sakshi born hui to us ski zindagi bohat kum rah gai thi...sakshi ki kundali main ek dosh tha...uss ki zindagi ko khatra tha...20 saal ki umar say pehlay pehlay...uss may us ski maut ya zindagi ka faisla hona tha...uss nay opperwalay say parathna kar kay...apni zindagi ki qurbani day kar...aapni beti ko bacchanay ki manat maan li...sakshi kay born honay kay ek saal baad wo mar gai...lekin uss nay apni beti per koi aanch nahi aanay di...mar kar bhi wo apni beti kay saath thi...thi iss liyay kah rahi hoon kay ab woh chali gai hay...kyun kay a buss ki beti ka rakshak mil gaya hay.

Arjun: sakshi ka rakshak...kuan hay?

Radha: tum abhi nahi maano gay...aur yeah woh waqt bhi nahi hay...yeah sab opperwalay kay kaam hain...woh khud hi raasta dekhai ga...bas itna batana chahoon gi...kay ab present aur future wohi hay...aur iss baat ko tum jald hi jaan jao gay.

Arjun want to ask more but she stop him...iss say ziyaada kuch nahi bata sakti hoon...ijazat nahi hay...tum jao...aapni koshish kar lo...bachnay ki...magar hoga wohi jo...oppperwala chahta hay...jao ab chahlay jao.

ARJUN:just tell me how you know all these?

Radha: because I am also religious person. do good deed and want to protect innocent peoples. Arjun nodded and leave.

Arjun back...ETF waiting him ready to go back Mumbai...they all set in SUV and way to back.
SORRY READER IF YOU FEEL BORING
I HAVE TO FINISH CASE
SO, I TRY TO WRAP UP
ETF BACK TO MUMBAI, NEW CASE WAITING
SEE YOU SOON WITH NEW PART
ENJOY READING
THANKS
Edited by Rehana25 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
awesome update
not boring
i enjoyed it
when sakshi past revealed
waiting
con soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
awesome update
Arjun n Radha convo was really nice n heart touching
words are less to appreciate what Sakhi's mom did to keep her daughter safe
beautifully written
thanks for pm
cont soon

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