ARAKSHI: JEEVAN KAY DIN (update part 35 )

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Hello, me again, in these days i feel people interest a bit low in arjun forum no new writer comes, no new stories, nothing much happening, writer update not continuing,so i think again a little bit different story but i promise try to update everyday.

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FIVE YEARS AGO

This is a big shopping mall...it's situated in a posh area... diwali time near...everybody busy to do shopping. Christmas is also on a way...so, many festivals come together...She decides to go for shopping and here she is... busy looking and buy things.

She just arrives from London...not adjust in India yet...Everything is changing here...Environment, Water, People, and behaviour...She struggling hard...To go through it. She prefers doing shopping in this particular shopping centre...this is international base shopping mall with big brand names. Shopping from here like do shopping in own city London.

She plans to buy some gifts for her uncle, Aunty, cousin sister and brother. She enter in one branded shop...go to man side...to buy a shirt...she look many shirts...still in choosing process than one man take her attention...She look... nearly 50 or 55 year aged man, holding clothing stand, his face is pale and many pain full expression on his...She leave and quickly go to his side...

Girl: Sir, are you ok? When realising may be he doesn't understand English so, she asks in Hindi, Uncle aap ko kiya hua hay? Aap theek to hain naa. That man holding his chest with close his eyes, hear her voice, try to open his eyes...nodded negative and close eyes again...she immediately call ambulance...by the time store sales team also gather around them...One girl suggest her to check his pocket for phone or any kind of ID...She check but only found wallet with money...no sign of phone and ID...She nodded negatively... by the ambulance come and she take him to the hospital.

In hospital doctor check and tell her that he had severe heart attack...take him inside ...she wait outside...after half hour ...doctor comes out...telling her he is being treated and out of danger but still unconscious...they shift him to the room...doctor ask her to go and deposit some money in hospital office...she go and deposit money...than come and settle herself in that room where doctor sift that man...she sit on his near side chair...looking him...he look very familiar...she looking him thinking continuously ,...why I feel that I know him but how...She try hard to remind but nothing happen...she is in deep thought...time pass...then she hear his voice asking water...She stand in hurry...fill the glass...give him little hand and place glass on his mouth...he drink whole water in one go...she fill again...he drink that glass but slowly...after finishing water he feel relax...look here there and see that beautiful girl standing near him...

Man: main kahaan hoon? Aur tum kuan, ho?

Girl: aap hospital main hain, main aap ko yahaan layi hoon, aap shopping centre main thay, aap ko heart attack aaya tha.

Man: tum mujhay yahaan layi ho, tumhara sukria...That girl cut him short saying: uncle, aap aisay na kahain... aap meray pita ki tarah hain...bus aap apnay ghar ka number bata dain to main un ko italah kar doon ...aapkay ghar walay pareshan ho rahay hoon gay.

Man: take deep breath and say: ghar main koi ho to pareshan hoga...mera to koi bhi nahi hay.Iss duniya main bilkul akela hoon...dulat , paisa, Izzat sab kuch hay but koi aapna nahi hay...and tears rolled in his eyes.
Girl L(see tears in his eyes, feel her heart prick and sinking deep down) aap aisa mat kahain main hoon na aap ki pass... aap ki beti ki tarah...pata nahin aap ko dekh ker mujhay aapnay pita yaad aa rahay hain...girl has also tears in her eyes and rolling on her cheeks.

Man L(see her in this state, try to console her and said: yes, off course, you are like my daughter, I am happy to get daughter like you, tum nay aapna naam nahi bataya beta.

Girl: with her gorgeous smile, I am sakshi, Sakshi Anand. Aur aapka naam kiya hay.

Man: I am suryakant rawte, a famous industrialist and please don't call me uncle, call me baba. He stretches his arms and she comes in his arms, he peak her forehead and smile.

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Sakshi: also happy wiping his tears on his cheeks, call him baba and smile. They start talking, talking and talking more n more, they have talk till dawn. They laugh, they cry, they share many things. Doctor comes to check him and see him talking in fresh way, amaze him. He checks Mr. Suryakant and gives the good news that he is fine and ready to go home.

They both happy to hear this and sakshi know that is their strong bond which give Mr. suryakant strength ...she look him and smile...he also smile understanding her thought and accept the fact.

Sakshi: baba, aap kaisay jay gay, main ghar phone karkay car mungwa lati hoon...aap ko gahr drop kar doon gi.

Mr. Suryakant: nahi is ski zarroorat nahi paray gi, mujhay phone do. She gives him phone. He dials a number and speak, She listen he instruct someone to bring car in hospital. He hangs up and returns her.

After half hour one man enter in room wearing suits, Good morning, Sir, aap aur yahaan, aap theek to hain, kiya main chotay sahaab to bata doon... he start nonstop but Mr suryakant cut him short, nahi kissi ko batanay ki zaroorat nahi hay, bus kal halka sa attack ho gaya tha...iss bacchii ki wajah say buch gaya...main nay iss ko aapni beti bana liaya hay...Sakshi, yeah meray secretary hain bulkay meray right hand... tum ko bataya than a Mr arvind and arvind yeah meri beti hay sakshi...he introduce both of them. They look each other and pass smile.

Mr suryakant( instruct arvind) aab tum jao... hospital bill clear karo aur discharge paper banao. He nodded and left.

Sakshi take deep breath and say: chahlay aab aap apnay ghar aur main apnay ghar...but aap ko mujh say promise karna hoga kay aap apna khyaal rakhain gay. Medicine time say lay gay.

Haan aur tum ko bhi mujh say wada karna hoga kay tum mujh say milnay aao gi, aur contact main raho gi, chahay tum yahaan ho ya London main, waisay London main mera ghar bhi hay aab jab bhi aoo ga to tum say zaroor miloon ga. Mr suyakant reply her with smile.

They pass each other contact detail, their address, phone number and rest all detail, Mr arvind comes in with ward boy, he have wheel chair and he help him to sit on chair and they walk with that chair, outside his Mercedes park, Mr arvind help him to sit inside, MR suryakant ask her to sit with him so he can drop her as well, she nodded and sit in.

They drop her in a very big and beautiful house, two guards standing outside alert, She offer him to come in but he refuse softly saying that he might comes some other time but this time he want to go his home, She understand so say bye to both of them and gone.

This is not last meeting from them...If he call her daughter she show him being a daughter...she call him baba and he proof her that he is her baba. Father and daughter bond is going strong day by day. Sakshi go back London she need to complete her study and Mr suryakant everyday speak with her on phone and skype, She tell him all day chores and he tell her his day routine. Day pass in week and weeks turn in month, month turn in years but their bond is much stronger.

so, how is this you like or not

please let me know

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rehana25

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
is he arjun's father??
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful update...awesome awesome...
dad daughter bonding was lovely u written well...
plz do PM ur works will love to read...
do PM me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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cont soon please do pm about ur arakshi story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great Update.

Loved the father and daughter bond between Saakshi and Mr. Rawte.

Now Please introduce Arjun know.

Waiting for your next part

Please send me PM if u can


Thanks in Advance
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 06 November 2013 at 4:47am | IP Logged
nice update
is he arjun's father??
continue soon


thanks for liking my story
let see your guess is right or not just wait and read
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Posted: 06 November 2013 at 8:16am | IP Logged

originally posted by anu91

beautiful update...awesome awesome...
dad daughter bonding was lovely u written well...
plz do PM ur works will love to read...
do PM me...



thanks liking my story
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originally posted by yams.s

Posted: 06 November 2013 at 8:52am | IP Logged Great Update.


Loved the father and daughter bond between Saakshi and Mr. Rawte.

Now Please introduce Arjun know.

Waiting for your next part

Please send me PM if u can



thanks
i try to update in daily basis
so check on every time


Thanks in Advance
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome... now waiting for arjun' s entry ... :)

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