ArShi SS: Renaissance (Completed) - Page 3

loved it to the core .. :))

Originally posted by: beenish248

loved it to the core .. :))

Hi dear, its me Khatijah Jalil from FB. This is an excellent story. . Do add me in your buddy list can.

Originally posted by: katj

Hi dear, its me Khatijah Jalil from FB. This is an excellent story. . Do add me in your buddy list can.

so beautiful...i loved every single line of it

Originally posted by: ranogill

so beautiful...i loved every single line of it

okay new friend..time for the review i believe;

the first chapter left me with a " oh hell!" expression coz i had no idea whatsoever about his reaction (obviously!) loved the little letter and barky! how adorable!😳...she owns her own interior designing business, wow! now that is something i loved, usually khushi is portrayed as more or less an illiterate but here, i am content😊. moving on, loved the way aman handled ASR's troubled times loved the way you portrayed their relation and the dialogues are a total hit.

"How do you manage to make me speechless everytime?"

"I guess it was you who shut me up a moment ago.."

these were the best ever , confession and words of love included..they were just too long to write again 😛...loved the way how they taught pratap singh a good lesson, like a team, a battalion who fight for their loved ones..the ice cream scene made me almost scream inside with amusement of course..they are simply so adorable, no scratch, u designed their characters so adorably...the way you brought tout every bit of their love instead of just generalizing it was amazing..and i think i am kinda envious of ur comic timing..so damn perfect..sad it ended soon! 😕 but no worries i have other works of ur piled up to read...and the epilogue..lol, it was really funny and i went like "i loved it dammit! with the last sentence:

Originally posted by: heckwidif

okay new friend..time for the review i believe;

the first chapter left me with a " oh hell!" expression coz i had no idea whatsoever about his reaction (obviously!) loved the little letter and barky! how adorable!😳...she owns her own interior designing business, wow! now that is something i loved, usually khushi is portrayed as more or less an illiterate but here, i am content😊. moving on, loved the way aman handled ASR's troubled times loved the way you portrayed their relation and the dialogues are a total hit.

"How do you manage to make me speechless everytime?"

"I guess it was you who shut me up a moment ago.."

these were the best ever , confession and words of love included..they were just too long to write again 😛...loved the way how they taught pratap singh a good lesson, like a team, a battalion who fight for their loved ones..the ice cream scene made me almost scream inside with amusement of course..they are simply so adorable, no scratch, u designed their characters so adorably...the way you brought tout every bit of their love instead of just generalizing it was amazing..and i think i am kinda envious of ur comic timing..so damn perfect..sad it ended soon! 😕 but no worries i have other works of ur piled up to read...and the epilogue..lol, it was really funny and i went like "i loved it dammit! with the last sentence:

"I'm ready to to be punished all my life.. With pleasure!!!" ...


loved it and love u more...😳

Originally posted by: Chaverah_TFC

Gosh!! Can you believe how weird it is getting, buddy? Well apparently, I'v just finished your SS & commented it and here you are.. Finished mine and commented..
And one more thing, I'm in love with you & your work as well.. Too many resemblances, isn't it?

What so ever, I'm really happy that you'v lykd it.. And thankyou so very much for the warm encouragement!!!

as weird as it sounds am grinning so wide right now that my mum just asked..."beta, have u lost it?" 😃