Cleared 5 - Page 61

Originally posted by: the_breeze

On your explanation about the mature tag removal : WELL SAID! 👏 And I can assure you that your writing is amazing enough to keep readers hooked without all that. Though, how about putting up the mature scenes on the blog! 😉 Not right now but maybe after completing the FF like you are doing for Price of Freedom, Can't resist Arshi hotness 😆 Sorry but even for price of freedom i'm slowly editing out the mature stuff. DWE is going to stay how it is.

CH 12 : Zara, I swear if I ever meet you in person, the first thing am gonna do is take you shopping with me! Every single time your choice of clothes is simply superb!!! ⭐️ YAY! Thanks for liking my dress choices.

Khushi is just tooo cute man! The way she just rambles about stuff is endearing and Arnav as we all know has fallen hard! It would have been great to see Khushi actually throw a snowball at him, I mean he has done things for her which he had never done before so it will be oh-so-romantic if he becomes a teeny weeny bit carefree around her.. But sigh I know that is a long way away or maybe never.. But I'm fine with that as well. LOL i have to say it's ner impossible for Arnav to be lovey dovey and smiles in this ff. He gives it a go for sure but it's not who he is. Not all guys in the world are carefree and happy-go-lucky.😊

Oh wow! I had this huge grin on my face when he lifted her like that! She is really so special that he treats her like this! And what made me LOL was when he said that he DEFINITELY did not care if Nani saw them like this! Hi-5 👍🏼 he only says what feels right and nessacery to him.😊

Love that Khushi is taking the initiative with the kisses. I know you explained Zara why he refrains but the heart doesn't care, I still want him to grab hold of her and kiss her senseless! Gee, I sound shameless 😛 lol yeah you do. 😆you'll see how he loses control round her in future.

AmShy make an appearance. Just two sentences in the beginning and these two make me laugh.. Love you guys. 🤗 The ensuing conversation among the guys was very real and natural. Good writing dear. thanks sis

WHOA! He turns up at her place for dinner!!???!!?!?! And looking like that ☢️ (swoons) Man there are gonna be fireworks... definitely!

P.S. Someone has got to tell Arnav that he has to go slow in the surprise department as well. 🤣 akash forgot to say that😆

CH 13: Oh the title has me all jittery... my titles means a lot for each chapter

Adhira at her caustic best. And Kanan mediating as usual. "Hedgehog woman" 😆. OMG he brought flowers for Adhira!!!!!! He remembered that part from Khushi's talk in the previous chapter... In your face nani. 😈 Arnav is slick and smooth like that😆 if you notice each character is a animal with some i have already mentioned. Aman=hare, Shyam=tortoise, Akash=owl, Adhira= mean hedgehog, arnav =wolf😉

There we have it, the cat is among the pigeons now and I can only hope for the best... The dinner table scene was explosive to say the least. Loved every bit of it. Best was how nani and Khushi let out their emotions. And I am glad that the truth is now out in the open. No more secrets. yep no more on their half.

The scene in her room was well written. Good that she opened up to him and laid her fears out in the open. It was painful to say the least imagining a little girl waiting for her mother to come back for her. I can say that I understand Adhira's viewpoint here. She only wants what is best for her granddaughter. I guess other than the anger at Garima for her choice of life partner, Adhira was also greatly hurt seeing her daughter in that state after Shashi's death. The suicide just went on to complicate things even more. So I think she is nursing a broken heart having seen her daughter suffer so much. Maybe that is why she is so hell bent on controlling Khushi's life. adhira does care for khushi but shows it in a very strict and harsh way making it nearly impossible to see. You have got everything so right. bang on the money about how she feels she needs to control khushi's life too. 😉

I agree that Khushi was naive in thinking that Arnav would just give it all up. That is not who he is. And she is asking for the impossible. He is being only rational and realistic when he refuses to promise anything to her. But I also understand why Khushi is doing what she is doing. having gone through all that, it is but natural for her to be afraid of loosing another loved one that too in war. So dear Zara I am heavily conflicted here. Because both sides are right in their own way. 😕 muahahahahaha thats exactly the point😉

Reading about their breakup was difficult. But as of now I think it will actually help them in getting their heads cleared. Not to mention that now there are lots of scenes I am sure that will come. Arnav stalking her, Arnav finding NK consoling her, Arnav going all possessive and mad with jealousy, Khushi getting a wee bit stronger, the gang will be divided, Nani will be happy etc etc.. (Yes, I know I have an over active imagination 😳) urm...you have 1/3 right about whats going to happen next😆 i leave you to guess which ones.😆

Cannot wait to read all this.

Yesss, I was right again! He does gift her the bangles! 😎 yep!😃

This is surely turning out to be a blockbuster story dear!

Thank you for the PMs.

Continue soon

Originally posted by: avika_ShArMa

Zara, did you ever say or explain something about why you removed the 'mature' portions from your stories?
when? did i miss something?

do tell me pls.? 😊