Here goes:
CH 11 : Kanan secretly escorting Khushi to the door! Why am I not surprised 😆 He is one super cool Nana!! Oh I loved Khushi's dress, so appropriate for the harsh winter of Zyairia.
Sigh Adhira catches them at it and what follows is good thinking on part of the girls (who are dressed to kill by the way, when is Khushi going to wear red????) ... 😉
So Aman and Shyam, I racked my brains trying to think of something nice and catchy and came up not so satisfied. Did you know that ShyAm is a ship name in itself (get it, nudge nudge) I came up with AmAm first but that just sounded ridiculous. Not to mention but it reminded me of a soap brand here in India called Hamam and I burst out laughing.. Next is AmShy, I know its silly but brings a smile to your face right! then there is ShAm, it can go coz they are a sham couple, not really gay or together! Geez I am beginning to sound crazy, aren't I? I'll let you know if I come up with any more... 😛
Awww, Arnav is all "I-don't-give-a-damn-if-her-nani-likes-me" ! Just goes to show that in the end he might not even listen to his own father if he opposes their union.
Anjali and Payal are treading dangerous waters here, glad that Kanan stopped them at the right moment. It would be saddening to see Khushi and NK awkward around each other when they get to know Adhira's intentions. Anywho, very clever idea to get Adhira's approval to take Khushi. Good job gals!! 👏
Ooohhh, the ☺️ moments begin and might I say that my dhak dhak has started loud and clear... Akash and Payal are so cute! They are my third favorite after ArHi and ShAm (LOL I just chose one name randomly) in this story... The competition between them reminded me of a similar scene in a Japanese Anime I used to see as a kid. The only difference was that there, the hero and the heroine's brother were competing to show their supremacy to the heroine which was utterly hilarious! So you can imagine how much I laughed at Anjali's statement "This might take some time" . 🤣
Yaaay, its the turn of my lovely AmShy (am just trying to see which name sounds better)... I had a silly grin on my face for the whole para. Shyam and his love for food is just so CUTE! 😳
Damnit Zara, you are very mean! How could you do this to us??? 😭 It would have been stupendously awesome if Arnav had seen NK lifting Khushi up and holding her that close! I wanted to see the uber jealous side of this wolf so eagerly and now I just have to wait some more. POUTS. Also I find it kinda weird that he has never asked her about this "best-friend" of hers that she mentions often. Considering that he pays close attention to every tiny detail and all, I find that very strange. 😕
Awww, he gets so worried! And it is just so endearing to see him like that. He treats her as if she is made of glass! So beautiful, so delicate, so fragile. She evokes his protective instinct and boy do I enjoy that.
The shootout stall scene was important and rightly so. On one hand we have Khushi's terror of killing and firing and the army and on the other we have Arnav himself choosing a gift for her. Well written dear. The toy is ultra cute!
That sparkler scene made my heart go into overdrive.. Zara you do plan on giving us all a heart attack one of these days don't you! This is the Arnav I wanna see, one who flusters her, one who doesn't mind invading in her personal space, one who makes her blush and the one who doesn't leave her alone even in her thoughts! THANK YOU DEAR! 👍🏼
They are alone! Oh wow, the stage is set and that too high above the grounds... Khushi are you sure you wanna invite him over for dinner this soon? I mean isn't it obvious that Adhira despises him... He hands over his jacket to her! Oh the romantic in me just sighs contentedly Zara, this chapter was wonderful in so many ways! 🤗
Yesss I was right! fist pump! But dear me , that was not expected from Kavita. Why she talked about her young son that way is something I find difficult to comprehend.
Yaaay! Khushi takes initiative! But drat it was so short. Why Arnav why, why are you keeping your desire in check? Let that intensity out and kiss your woman!
That end was amazing! Very very happy with the chapter Zara.
Although I have a question, if I remember correctly, you had initially tagged this FF as mature as well. But now when I see, that has been removed?
PS. will comment on Ch 12 later
