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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

CONGOS for the NEW THREAD !! 😃

I just completed reading all the six chapter..and you were right..
Once i started reading , i just couldn't stop !

Its simply mind blowing..

I m in love with the whole setup !

The hill station , the Army thing..and Khushi here is kinda different from her usually bubbly self..And Arnav seems like a complex character.

And i am loving the way Arnav and khushi's relationship is progressing..

And then the other character Aman , Akash and Shyam..hehe he's so cute , a foodie just like me..payal , anjali , NK and everything is just so perfect.

The story is really intriguing...!!

Update the next chapter soon..can't wait 😃

PS : Urghh what's the problem with this Adhira ? She's irritating ! 😡

Edited by Arshi-Nikita123 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

SNEEK PEEK for tomorrow's update :)

...

Arnav: " What's going on in here?"

Cleaner: "Chote Saab, BB called me in to clean out this room and rearrange it a bit better."

Arnav looked round the eerie old room with white drapes and dim lighting from the french window at the side.

He hmm-ed agreeing in a deep tone: " Carry on."

Arnav's eyes, however, paused on the albums on the floor where some photos from inside had scattered. That must have been what dropped, but his eyes widened and jaw tightened noticing something else.

The cleaner fearfully started to pick up the albums with the photos: " Don't worry Chote Saab. I won't chuck away anything. Just dust it a little-"

Arnav sternly: "What are these doing here?!"

The Cleaner looked at Arnav with a frown not understanding.

Arnav stepped forward shouting the houses foundations up: "WHY HAVE THESE BEEN KEPT?!?!"

...

Edited by -Zara- - 12 years ago