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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Nurshad.kajen

jab woh laut ke ati hai tab



oh okk but par wohh abhi tak wapas nai ayee??
she's better,na??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Orchids--



oh okk but par wohh abhi tak wapas nai ayee??
she's better,na??

ya di a lot better than before
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nurshad.kajen

ya di a lot better than before


dat's a gud news.. :)
dnt wrry.. she'll b bck soon.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Orchids--


dat's a gud news.. :)
dnt wrry.. she'll b bck soon.. :)

i hope so di
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sure bhai.. she'll b dere wth u soon.. bilkul fit n f9 hoke.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Hey
Loving ur ff...
Just can't wait to see what happens next. ...
Pm 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 25



Sanjeevani
Mumbai
India


Ridhima was about to knock the door when suddenly she remembered she is still in her casual saalwar suit..

Ri:oh shit main abhi bhi is dress main kya kar rahi hun ..dr. kriti agar mujhe is dress main dekh lia toh main toh aj gayi ..run ridhima run..

so she quickly run toward her cabin to get ready..

here in dr. kriti's cabin


Armaan and Rahul was sitting here with a frown on their face and two nurse is nursing their black eyes well you must be wondering why ? what happened to them ?

*******FLASHBACK*******

armaan opened the door and was shocked to find his another best college buddy nikita standing there..

Ar:Tum

he looked at her surprised face but she just whispered 'Ar-m-aan'

but before armaan could utter a single word nikita grabbed his coller and take him with her..Armaan tried to speak..

Ar:nik...

Ni:Armaan just shut up

Rahul was coming from the opposite side and he was shocked to see the sight ..but before he could speak..nikki who was coming with armaan like a tigress with her prey ..rahul gulped..but before he can run away from there niki shouted..

Ni:oye..stop

Rahul stopped and he turned around nikki was shocked again..

Ni:oh toh tu bhi hai...rahul garewal..and chupchap chal agar bachna chahta hai toh..

rahul knew if he says anything now he will be gone so he followed her and a scared Armaan..

Nikki took them to her cabin and told them to sit down well her look says it all i am not asking it's an order so yeh do nazuk dara hua 35 aur 36 saal ke bache chup chap baith gaye...then nikki looked them closely and sighed man she missed these two a lot but now it's revenge time so she took a boxing gloves from her drawer (well u must be shocked but here we are talking about nikki armaan and rahul were lucky that she didn't take machine gun ) armaan and rahul were scared like a trapped mouse ..and then BANG!! BANG!! 2 punch from nikki and armaan and rahul got one black eye each...

Ni: tum dono shukar karo ke main thodi bimar hun..u two need to talk a lot but not now aj sham ko 7 baaje mere ghar khabar dar agar ek min. bhi late hua toh..aur yeh sab ke barein mein agar dr. kriti ko kuch pata chala toh...

Ra:kis cheez ke barein mein yaha pe toh kuch nahi hua hum dono toh stairs se gir gaye hai na armaan..

Ar:haan..he is right..

Ni:gud now bhago yaha se aur sham ko agar late hua toh..

Ra:nahi hoga..surely nahi hoga..chal armaan

Ar:haan ..chal

and armaan and rahul quickly run away from there...is se pehle nikki unke dusre eye bhi black kar dein..

*******FLASHBACK ENDS*******


Ar:oouch!! carefull lady...

Nurse:sorry sir..

dr. kriti was worried when he left he was ok but now he and rahul returned with a black eye ..woh dono keh rahe the ke stairs se gir gaye but shakal dekhke lag raha hai ke kisi ne pita hai..

Kr:armaan kya sach mein tum dono gir gaye the? ya kuch aur baat hai ?

armaan and rahul quickly looked at each other and rahul replied

Ra:no mam hum sach main hi gir gaye the..darasal humne woh stairs dekha hi nahi..

Ar:waise maam..

kr:haan armaan bolo

Ar:maam woh patient kia bohot critical hai?

kr:kaunsa patient? jise tum operate karoge?

Ar:haan mam

Kr:no he is not critical at all but why?

Ar:maam kya hai na main har cheez double dekh raha hun toh is samay operate karna u knw patient critical nahi hai but operate karne ke baad surely critical ho jayega..

kr:well woh toh hai so what you want to do armaan?

Ar:maam kya ap yeh surgery 1 day ke liye post pond kar sakti hain ? i am sure kal tak meri ankh thik ho jayega so tommorow i can operate if it is fine with you

Kr:of course it's completely fine with me ..main abhi hi sabko infrom kar deti hun..main abhi ayi

but before she can go armaan called her

Ar:maam

Kr:yes armaan

Ar:mam mujhe us doctor se personally bat karni hai jis ke sath main operate karna hai..mam can you call that doctor ?

Kr:ok mujhe bhi nahi pata ke woh doctor kaun hai main abhi hi sabko page kar deti hun joh dr. bhi hai woh apse yaha ake milega..is that ok with you?

Ar:ya mam of course it's completely ok...

and then dr. kriti left the cabin to infrom

Ra:armaan main bhi chalti hun agar phir nikki aa gayi toh is baar..

Ar:ok ok toh bhag..

Ra:haan yaar bhagti hun..

then rahul also left from there leaving armaan alone...armaan went towards the window and looked out side...he then remembered the last time when he was here he was here to give her resignation letter tab zindagi ne use hara dia tha ..woh apna jine ka inspiration kho chuka but use phir se jagaya ek nanhi se jaan ne aur uski 2 best friend ne ...aj woh sabse age hai but phir bhi kuch toh adhura jarur hai..kya hai woh? woh janta hai ke woh kya hai but now he can't bring her back she must be married..armaan just whispered 'I MISS YOU RIDHIMA '..

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Ridhima was going towards the OT when she heard her pager ringing she opened it to check and she found that dr. kriti ask the doctor who was going to operate with dr. malik to come to her cabin and have a chat with dr. malik..

Ri:well dekhte hai ab is dr. malik ko kya chahiye unhe..

so ridhima finally went towards dr. kriti's cabin to meet dr. malik..she knocked the door ..

Ri:May I come in ?

A deep male voice replied 'Yes ..please come in '

Ridhima opened the door and found a man standing facing the window ..from backside use dekhke use kisi ki yaad aa gayi..she called him

Ri:Dr. Malik

The person turned and that was it finally ..after 13 year she finally saw him..he was also equially shocked..

Ridhima just whispered 'Ar-m-aaan' and she saw him replying a word that she is hearing after ages 'basket'





Part 26


Malik Mansion
Manchester
England


Anamika just came from the washroom after waking up when she heard the sweet tone of her cellphone wondering who is calling she pick up the phone but when she saw the caller an automatic frown came in her face

Anm:hey shaitan ki gf ab tujhe meri yaad ayi ?

caller:sorry hitler har bar ki tarah isbar bhi i was busy eating

Anm:koi nayi bat bol ..tu nahi khati kab i wonder tu abhitak moti kyun nahi hui..

caller:secret hai teri is empty bheje mein woh baat nahi ghuse gi..acha rehne de woh sab jis reason ke liye maine tujhe phone kia woh sun..

Anm: whaaattt? Alisha khanna is calling me with a r-e-a-s-o-n..what is happening in this world seems like the worlds surely going to end..oh god save me..

Alisha:haha very funny oye tu itna nautanki kyun karti hai yeh bata pehle..meri phuti kismat ek hi BFF and she not even care about me..huh

Anm:haww..and people tell me i am the one who is a nautanki...unfair world huh..acha yeh chod bata tera world ending reason...

Alisha told her the reason...

Anm:OMG!! Who is that man? damn we have to give him respect ..no way..kya naam bataya..haan shashank gupta..dr. hai toh phir aur acha hai..anamika malik se panga bhadi padega us indian dr. ko..acha chal mujhe dad ko phone karna hai...ya see u at our usual meeting place hellgarden...good bye moti...

Alisha:anamika you are so so deaad...

Anm:haha i knw..

and she hang up the phone ..

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In India,

here in sanjeevani mumbai time seems to have stopped for both armaan malik and ridhima gupta ..and there is a reason for this stoppage because these two soulmate are seeing each other after t-h-i-r-t-e-e-n years not one or two years..they can't take their eyes away from each other finally what seems like ages ridhima was first to break the eye lock ..she move her eyes to his face and the first thing that caught her eyes was his spectacles she is seeing him in specs outside sunglass for the fist time..ayiye chaliye ridhima ji ke thoughts hi sunte hain..

Ri(in her mind): finally..finally ..itne intezzar ke baad tum mujhe mill gaye armaan..yeh kya koi sapna hai..if it is then i don't want to wake up from this dream ever...aj bhi bilkul waise ki waise hi ho tum...but mujhe tumhari class lena padega..yeh kya halat bana rakha hai apna ..aankho mein specs..pura suit pehen kar and i can bet that you have lost a lot weight..khate nahi the kya..but aj bhi utna hi handsome aur utna hi sundar..

things are not different from armaan's point of view also ..chaliye dekhte hain..

Ar(in his mind): basket..just one word came from my mouth when i saw you..it all seems like ages..i can't keep my eyes away from you after all i am seeing you after how long it is ? oh ya yaad aya 13 years..and believe you are still the same..wahi badi badi aankhein..wahi pinkish lips..wahi angelic face...all are same ...and basket and jeans..deadly combo i must say..but you are beautifull in anything you wear..afterall you are a queen...khub man kar raha hai ke tumhe gale laga lu..aur kabhi khudse alag na karun..kabhi nahi kabhi bhi nahi..

but his thoughts broke when he found him in her arms ..woh is taraf murte hi dekhta hai ke ridhima use kas ke gale laga lia hai..armaan has a strong urge to respond the hug..and he was going to do the same but suddenly some painfull memory came to his already confused..his mind again take him to those pain full moments...

**************FLASHBACK****************


Ri: Armaan tum jaise rich aur bigde ladko main achi tarah se janti hun tumne mujhse kabhi pyaar nahi kya tha..you just used me..i hate you armaan..tum jante the ke mere kisi aur se shadi hone wala hai phir bhi..

Ar:wow ridhima wow ..truly sab mere galti hai na..i can't believe ke tum mere pyar pe shak kar rahe ho...really ridhima ankhein kholo tum bhul gaye woh sab pal jo humne sath bitaya tha..bhul gaye woh sab kasmein...sab kuch ek mazak tha kya tumhare liye..

Ri:haan haan woh sab jhut tha mere liye..tha sab jhut..i don't love you..i don't ..

Ar:You don't? good lekin toh phir hum dono ke pyar ki nishani ise kyun janam dia..mar kyun nahi dia ise..u should kill her..

Ri(crying):i can't armaan yeh bacha mere liye ek lesson thi please ise orphanage bhej do..aur dusre jagah jake tum apni zindagi jiyo aur mujhe bhi jine do pleasee...

Ar:wah ridhima wah kya ho tum? ek maa hoke tum aise batein kar sakte ho..now i believe ke you don't love me also i don't..maine jis ridhima se pyaar kya tha woh koi aur thi tum nahi ho woh ridhima jise maine sabkuch mana tha..jiske liye mai jita tha..hasta tha woh koi aur hai tum nahi ho woh ..tum nahi ho ..aur tum chinta mat karo main aur meri beti chale jayenge yaha se dur bohot dur taki tumharein saya bhi ispar na parein...tum khushi se jiyo apni zindagi..ajke bad main bhul jaunga ke armaan malik kisi ladki se pyar bhi karta tha..meri beti will be my everything...my l

ovely daughter anamika armaan malik


**************ENG OF FLASHBACK**************

When these memories played again in his mind there's no point in responding armaan apne ap ko ridhima se alag kar leta hai and bolta hai

Ar:carefull dr. gupta no sorry itp must be dr. body

scarsm is clearly visible in his tone but ridhima's reply

Ri: it is malik..dr. ridhima armaan malik



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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Bhai superb duper amazing part
waiting fr new parts
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
mee tooo for the new part... hope we get them soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Hope hope hope...ab age ka toh bhai hi jane

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