An ArHi SS: Seduction *Thread One* (COMPLETED)

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#831

This story is enthralling !!!!! They both have secrets..what are the secrets?

Why did she not wear bright clothes before, why was she not at the fireworks like everyone else, why can she not be seen with him except as part of her job, why did she never think she would feel like how he made her feel...

Why are Aman and Anjalie so suspicious of Arnav being with Khushi and the changes in him?

The kiss scene was crafted with sensuality. The feelings, the attraction, the wonder, joy and the beauty of it all. !!!! She was so honest in all her reactions including the extreme tenderness with with she touched him.

Edited by Anamika100 - 11 years ago

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pal_24

@pal_24

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#832

Was a lil busy with college b4 so read all the chapters in a go...and god, this story is so beautiful...
you've cast a spell on us with this story just as you have with all your other stories...
its just amazing how you weave such beautiful stories of arshi, full of intrigue and passion and much more...I got so lost in it that I didnt realise when I finished all the 3 chapters and kept wanting more of it...
and I love how you've described the local lucknow artwork handicraft and cuisine in detail through your story...now I'm curious to read more about the history behind it myself..
waiting for more

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archmink

@archmink

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#833

Why does Khushi seems like a forbidden fruit .. The one he is not supposed to eat ... But can't help the temptations ... And the last line kind of gave me creeps ... Why cuz she was seen going up by the worker that means she should be somewhere in the mahal than how come she just vanished ? That's a lil scarey...
Really liked the story

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#834

a kiss, it could mean so many things yet I can put my finger on only one, acceptance. To me that was a kiss of complete acceptance, of whatever is brewing between them, it was acceptance in the most vital form possible. And it was indeed beautiful :)

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lostintheashes

@lostintheashes

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#835

Holy shit that was awesome! 👏

The kiss ☺️

Where did Khushi go? 😕

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srishti9015

@srishti9015

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#836

nahiiinitna accha update aur phir cliffhanger!? *dies*

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#837

Such a beautiful story and so well written as usual !

Thanks for the updates.

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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#838

Wow - what a chapter and that description of things Lucknowi was really good. And that kiss was just mindblowing. Shame that khushi's gone off - wonder what is it that has khushi tied up in tangles that she cannot pursue whatever is happening betwee her and Arnav. As for Arnav, is he really on the rebound and is he is for more hurt as Anjali seems to think! suspense suspense!

See you on Sunday for the next chapter then!