VIRMAN SS: REALIZING HIS LOVE UPDATED PART 9 PG 67(17.11.14) - Page 41

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prathe

superb update loving virat idea to pataofy manvi family😊
sorry i am a bit late i in my comments
i am a bit inactive nowadays




it's ok dear... I was really waiting for ur comments... but very happy now...
thank u😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update
loved virman meeting
thanks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
It's really an awesome story..
I wanna read more..
plz update soon plz..
n do pm me..


Sanjana...
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Posted: 11 years ago
plz try to update this also
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi Niki, Marry, kicha, Panama...

first of all let me finish the ff dollies. I don't know, when I am gonna update the last part. But I 'll try to do it soon. Only becoz of all ur wishes, I am trying to do that. After finishing that, if I found any leisure, I'll complete this one too... thank you for letting me know your wishes.

luv u my dollies... take care🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
When will you start updating this??
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 7:

hi frnds... after long time I feel like to update this SS and so did now. Forgive if there's mistakes plzz😊


Manvi's eyes were blind-folded by Virat's fingers and he took her to a place... He removed his hands from her eyes. Manvi opened her eyes and was mesmerised by the beauty of that place. It was near the shore of a beautiful lake and amazing greenish atmosphere... She can also hear the chirpy songs sung by birds around the place. Her luscious lips curved with a sweet smile and she felt very happy to be in her favourite spot of Hrishikesh after long years and that to with her love... He can now understand and feel how happy she would be and he's seeing her smiling face after so long time. He started drooling at her smile and Manvi started to blush after realizing his glares fixed on her. She rised her eye-brows and said him, "thank u for coming here Virat... I feel like all my tension about beeji, Rahul and everything were flew out somewhere..."

"I know you love this place and this is ur favourite spot... You may forgotten, but I remember when you said ur love about this place Manvi" said Virat holding her hands. "You know how much I missed you these days?" she said. "But you'ld never know how much I too missed you..." he replied. "How much?" she asked laughingly. He suddenly kneeled down in front of her and took a diamond ring from his pocket. She was surprised by his sudden act and stood silently.

"you wanna know how much? I want my every morning to rise on with ur face and every night to set off with ur face. I wanna take away all your tensions and burdens with me and to give you a happiest life what you deserve the most. I wanna roam around the world holding your fingers and to see my dreams with you in the rest of my life. I feel like I wanna marry you this moment and to fly with you taking you in my hands... I love you Manvi... Will you marry me? Will you be my everything hereafter?" said this he looked at her eyes for her answer.

"You need to ask this to me?" she said and kissed his forehead. He softly took her hands and made her wear the ring in her fingers. She felt so happy to see his love and even tears are rolling down in happiness... "No tears here after jaan... I am here na?" he said.

Then only her mind striked and she asked, "How you came here Virat? What if someone had seen you? What if my beeji... how you reached my home and to terrace?" she unpacked so many question and got tensed again... "your dad and chachu only invited me... and ur beeji welcomed me happily... ur dabba took me to you..." he said winking at her.

She got even more tensed and, "Oh Please... don't puzzle me. Just say what's happening?" she said.

"Vadhera institutes and Chaudary industries meet and signed in for a new business deal... It paved my path to Hrishikesh and now to my Manviji. Hope it's clear" he said with a smile. Hearig the news, her mouth opened in oval and eyes got widened... "Is this true? It's not a dream na?" she said like a child. "Vadheras and Chaudaries now started with a business relationship and soon to be a pyaarka relationship..." he said and hugged her tightly expressing his happiness.

There would be always a hindrance in our Virman's romance. Now it's dabbu...

Their sweet lovely hug is disturbed by Manvi's phone call and it is none other than her brother dabba. "Manvi di... Manvi di... kahan hai aap? Beeji is searching for you from long time. Come soon and she's so angry on you" said this he disconnected the call. Seeing her tensed face, Virat asked her abt the call and she replied her beeji was searching for her from long time. She immediately holded his hands and started running to her home. On the way, she also entered into a small temple and without fail she took the temple prashad with her. Virat was confused and asking, "In this hurry burry, why we went to temple? We could go some other day na?"

"Oh... just shut up and come" said this, she continued running. Once she reached the compound of her home, she stopped suddenly and looking at him tensedly... "What now?" he asked... "I am holding ur hands and running into my own home to see my beeji?" she said.

He laughed at her answer and said, "U are no way..."

"I am stucked with so many tensions and u are laughing so cool?" she said. "Why are you getting tensed? Cool Manvi... Just repeat ur statement again. You are running to ur own home taking me, holding my hands to see ur beeji. How funny!!!" he said.

Both laughed together thinking her innocent speech and act. "haan... stay cool and we can sort out soon. You go alone and I'll join you inside" said this he left her hands to go inside.

Once entered her home, Beeji got very angry seeing her coming in. "Stop there itself Manvi..." said Beeji.

"Beeji... wo actually I..." Manvi started to blabber in tension.

Meanwhile, Virat went to the garden area of home when no one noticed and then entered inside the home through another enterance and made everyone to seem like he's coming from garden. Manvi's mom Sheethal saw him coming and said, "Have u fresh up? Come and eat something beta..." said this she took him to dining table. On their way, they saw Manvi and Beeji and stopped there without moving. Sheethal ma signalled her like "what happened?" and Manvi signalled her back like she had caught to Beeji.

"Where are you looking? I said tomorrow is your engagement and you should not move out anywhere... I am searching for you so long and Rahul went out after waiting for you... Is this the way you respect your hone wale pati?" said Beeji angrily.

Manvi's angry started to grow high after hearing the word "hone wale pati". Virat suddenly irked funnily hearing the word but then sighs to Manvi, "I am here" and winked with a smile silently without giving Sheethal ma a chance to notice them.

"My hone wale pati is right here in front of my eyes and I don't need to care for any bitch" she thought. Sheethal ma signalled her like "don't open your mouth"

Virat seeing everything going between Manvi, her mom and beeji... "I want to know where you went without even informing anyone in the home. You can't go anywhere without answering me" she said strictly.

Manvi showed her hands having temple prashad and said, "I went to temple Beeji... Chachi said I should get god's blessings since I am going to be married soon. So..." she said.

"This Pinky lost her brain somewhere... hereafter you should not go out without informing anyone. Get inside" she said.

Now Virat understood the reason why she entered to a temple in that hurried situation. He smiled at Manvi but she was so tensed and went inside angrily looking him back.

"Is ladki hai na? Herself is pagal and making others too a pagal.. always world war between these two... come beta. You come and eat" said Sheethal mom seeing Virat and they went to dining hall. Virat felt happy seeing her mom-in-law as she's taking him to eat and at the same time pity for Manvi-beeji world war.

Hope you enjoyed this update... After long time, I feel like to update the story and I did it now. Waiting to read to suggestion and comments.

Take care🤗

Edited by madhuharini - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
It's superb update dear
Loved virman talks
Thanks for continuing
Eagerly waiting to see what happens next
Please do continue soon
And thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jeharshu

It's superb update dear
Loved virman talks
Thanks for continuing
Eagerly waiting to see what happens next
Please do continue soon
And thanks for the pm dear


aww... thank u for ur comments dear😊
I'll try to continue soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update dear!!!
miss virman continue soon
nd write more virman works

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