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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lalarukh

wow deepu awesome update :)... first time while reading the update i am loving something other than arnav and khushi ...any guess :)..well ok i ll answer myself its the aeroplane ...my goodness yaar ,damn where the heck u have taken these pics...i mean its out class...mein nay bhee jana hay iss mein...😆...❤️

awesome,superb, such beautifully u have written the emotions...relationship between a daughter and her parents...i mean i am over whelmed with the feelings...loved khushi here although arnav is gem too but ...such an understanding daughter...the way she felt her father pain and guilt...uff that was more than awesome...did i ever said this before ...well not sure ...but i really love u khushi ...this doesnt mean my love for arnav is reduced...arnav woh tou hay he kamal...hehehe

other than love towards arnav my respect towards him increase doubled...he knows that khushi is stuck btw him and her father ...he remembered his promises to give happiness to kushi...and thinking abt her request for just one time for her sake... he went down to her parents and asked for there blessings...deepu hats off yar...tum kamal ho i swear...such mature writing shows ur mature enough thoughts and nature and i love u for that...i mean other than ur naughtiness ;)

so payal and akash didnt stopped in that white room for there SR...i loved that room it was so pure and serene...chalo they can come and spend night there some other time :)...as now free to spend their nights freely :)...as if not earlier...;) lol

shashi and garima both r sweet hearts ...they r awesome...wt ever they did ...i simply love them for there sacrifice for the sake of there friendship..it really felt so real when he cried and khushi pain seeing her father breaking down...uff i felt like crying too ...no matter wt ,a father is always a symbol of protection ...roof.. ...shelter...for a daughter...surely parents r at highest regards...no matter wt...khushi u lovely girl,loved it deepu...u rock girl

she wanted to say them proper good bye...and he gave her 2 min...hahaha i loved this 2 ;)

it was beautiful when she said Please Arnav, I cant come home without saying proper bye to them. I dont want to disrespect you or our relation for something that we could possibly handle better. Please mere liye...👏


...here u said it all deepu...issues which r handle maturely brings back positive fruit always..

hyeee kiya aeroplane hay ...uff deepu...although i praised alot earlier too but still yar...beautiful interior showing his class...loved there lovey dovey moments...that lights off ambiance...moon sky stars...both sitting damn close...ufff and wow...he controlling his desires...hahaha...lol...too good...damn y fiji ...him ordering her drink...that cheers...bed room kiss...there fight..and in the end...loved the way she cuddling with him...awe she missing her parents ...he wanted answer from shashi...not to make her worry...all written beautifully...very very very very nice update deepu

pre cap ...DAMN INTERESTING LOOKING TO IT EAGERLY ...obviously hum deekhna hee hay kerna tou ounho nay hay...LOL :):)😳




I wonder why I always end up using 2..I swear I dint had slightest idea that my 2 will become famous like this...LOL

I need to consciously use numbers in this forum..LOL..

As usual thanks for great feedback..I wanna travel in that jet too but with ASR..just me and ASR and you ride the plane...LOL
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its awsome..
Lovd it..
Thnks for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepthiya



I wonder why I always end up using 2..I swear I dint had slightest idea that my 2 will become famous like this...LOL

I need to consciously use numbers in this forum..LOL..

As usual thanks for great feedback..I wanna travel in that jet too but with ASR..just me and ASR and you ride the plane...LOL


EXCUSE me...at least give me the right of serving him and u the drinks...thats not done...me being pilot means totally out of sight ...lol...abh ker nahi sakti per atleast let me see u and him together...LOL
Edited by lalarukh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
deepu still having the craving kiya kero need to praise u more...abhi poori terhan say i am not satisfied ...beautifully written the father mother and daughter bond...and not to forgot arnav playing damn important role in btw these all people...all men r not that understanding these days yeh mein nay nahi kissi mahaan insaan ney kaha hay ...yup u r right ,its u 😊...👏❤️
Edited by lalarukh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
gosh it was awesome!!!!
loved father-daughter relation n woow supporting arnav as always!!!
gosh he is becoming mad looking at her in that saree
wish they dont have any sort of mu after arnav learning abt kushi's kundali!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
The scene between Arnav Shashi and Khushi was very touching . It was really very beautifully written. I feel bad for all the 3 because everyone is right at these own stand.

So Mr.Raizada is not able to control himself 😳 .
Edited by Srilathalolla - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful the part is touching where arnav tk blesing frm his in laws with kushi waiting for jorney of arshi honeymoon thanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
no matter how against he s with her parents...
he just can t say no to her..
he did bend down..
it was like a bidaai scene...
arnav wants answers and these answers are gonna change a hell lot of things...
omg...they are off their honeymoon...
the airplane is fabulous ...
khushi is mesmerized with it...
arnav s trying as much as possible not to loose his control
and khushi was enjoying teasing him,...
awww..then he went ahead apologizing...
she s worried what if he comes to know the truth...
the most awaited chapter next..😉
fantastic update 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
update the next soon dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
what a wonderful,tension filled update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
luvd d emotional turmoil twn khushi nd shahi

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