ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 9 - COMPLETED - Page 25

no other emotion is looking supreme here other than LOVE...

wow yaar bauhat bauhat bauhat hee awesome,beautiful and fantastic update...such an charismatic ambiance of wedding here...both the couples bounded in LOVE...love bhee woh which is eternal one...after long time my childhood song which always fascinates me and which i forgot with time :)...it beeps up in my mind after reading the update...meray pyaar ki umer ho itni sanam ...teray naam say shuru teray naam per khatam...aik chota sa ghar ho rahain dono jahan ...jahan pyaar say milain yeh dharti asmaan...teri khooshi so ho khooshi teray ghum say ho ghum...teray naam say shuru teray naam per khatam...wt else one can wish from life...wt arnav and khushi r doing to each other in process of continuous recovery or healing from the pain and sense of each other loss...is simply marvellous...loved it deepu...u r superb...honestly i mean it ,damn it :)

akash and arnav convo always brought big smile...when both r with each other their liveliness is at its best :)...loved the way arnav teased him of first night...and doing all rituals backwards...hehehe...deepu hilarious line...stop acting like bride...act like groom...damn deep,tussi kamal :)

poor payal ...yaar arnav is so caring hyeee kiya keron mein iss ka...ok back to earth...loved it the way he gave her medicine...and wow wt a talk shawk on contraceptive pills for skin...LOL🤣...thank goodness ...i got khushi point clear as poor arnav unable to join the dots...hilarious...and his smirk on thinking that his wife preparing herselff for their first ...ahem ahem ...and that drama queen after reading her sms...tooo good yaar

break it or make it its in ur hands...awesome baat...and true they have come way far in there relationship...very very nice line deepu

shashi and garima ...both awesome parents...happy to see there kids happy...although arnav was in anger...but they tolerate his anger very nicely...that correction of tilaak by garima ...back end a supreme power ...very spiritual deeps...itna acha likha hay yaar tum nay ...wow

my my hats off for giving all of them beautiful attires yaar...payal lehnga is just superb...but wt khushi wore is damn awesome :)...akash and arnav also very very very nice :)..

ur theory of uff damn and f***...is just damn good yaar...mind blowing...:)...that was real fun to read :)

loved the way arnav took khushi away after mala's exchange...and their hug ...no words just to give comfort ...his touching her from blouse to lehnga...and then the chain...very beautifully written...

wt payal did it brought tears in my eyes...kitna acha lagta hay jab koi itni importance kisi ko life mein dey...the love and respect she has showered on both arnav and khushi and especially arnav...its awesome...bauhat he acha...deepu well done yaar infact standing ovation fromside for writing such an outclass emotional,very heart touching scene...too good...i dont have words in ur praise ...

in the end hyee awesome ring and mangulsutra...the lines which arnav said to khushi...with the light off ambiance...spot light on her...without materialistic things...connecting two person who r deeply madly truly in love ,connecting their heart and soul...thats all superb deepu...i dont know honestly wt and how to write in ur praise ...just wanted to say i love u loads ...