From the ashes the pheonix rises.A tortured soul.FF UPDATED!CH 9 Pg18

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ANAM

@khuwahish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

well done...

you've got great talent...

the story and narration are just AWESOME...

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Tabs

@hatelove2012

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Very nice. You r a good writer. Keep it up.

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Abhi

@abhi_guru

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Nicely carrying the suspense. Pls update soon. Cat wait...

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Serviana

@Serviana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Woow!looking forward to the next chapter! Please dont make us wait a lot!

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@rbb1

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

wow that was great I love the way you are telling the story. now I want to see the strong Astha stand up to Shlok.

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divinecakes

@divinecakes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: latha_555
brilliant, you have a talent to finish your chapters at the best parts!!!, seriously a good writer, hanging to read more...
i really like the way you explain both shlock and aasthas thoughts of whats happening...that makes it so much more interesting

good that he automatically thinks the kids might be someone else's and now he probs thinks aastha is with Kunal...cant believe the kids got away without him seeing them...

im glad aastha is not trying to run, she probably knows she cant hide, bit she is stronbg which goes with what she has been through in the last 5 years

looking forward to more

Thank you for your feedback and your comments. 😊
I originally planned to let him see them but I didn't want to break his heart completely..😳

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Serviana

@Serviana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

update soon update soon update soon 😎

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divinecakes

@divinecakes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Serviana
update soon update soon update soon 😎

Thank you I'll try to by tonight!(fingers crossed)😊

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niki795

@niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

awesome update
loved it
astha is strong... I want the same strongest astha stand in front of shlok
he thinks that the kids are some one else... May be he thinks now its with kunal
Continue soon

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music1

@music1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

he certainly looked like a defeated guy...and she inspite of all the protective shields around her feels vulnarable by his mere presence..very interesting...