ARAKSHI SS : DO DIL EK JAAN........EPILOGUE(PT2)pg 98 - Page 34

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Amritamalhotra

Hi Magati..I have read the part just next day of posting. .
But whenever I try to comment on this part, it show network problem. ..
This is the 4th time I am try6 to comment. .
Hope this time I wl b successful...
I really wanted to tell u that I loved Sakshi to point Arjun..
And pour her heart out...why she cannot forgive him...
But happy that Arjun is patient. ..
And she still loves Arjun...
Loved that Arjun ne hi vrat khola...
Super se bhi upar hai yeh update..
And plz continue soon..

thank you for taking so much effort to comment
thank you so much
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 8

Her earrings , her necklace everything was disturbing her

He had just changed suhaani's clothes

He was happy that his princess was gifted to sleep peacefully

He was in dilemma looking at saakshi , he wanted her also to sleep peacefully

He took a deep breath and went to her and removed her jewellery and kept it safely on the table

He changed her into her night dress and covered her with the blanket

He was seeing her sleep for god knows how many hours

She muttered arjun many times in her sleep

She always had a habbit of muttering in sleep , he would often wonder whether she cant keep quite even while sleeping

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She woke up in the morning and was shocked looking at her dress

She knew it who had done it and shuddered at the thought

She smiled thinking of him but then got angry and left the room

He was in the kitchen making coffee

" arjun..." she started

" good morning saakshi , mein tumhaare liye coffee bana raha hoon " arjun said

He knew very well aware that there was a cyclone coming up , " yeh saakshi kuch zyada nai jagadti ?" he asked himself

" arjun , saakshi tujhse kuch bhi kahe , badle mein tu usse pyaar bhare baatein karna " he told himself

" tum apne aap ko samajte kya ho ?" she asked him angrily

" ACP ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE, nai , tumhaara pati , suhaani ka unworthy dad , sameer ka dost , aisha ka bhai , actually shree ka bhi bhai , aur lisa aur chotu ke jiju " he replied

She glared at him

" tumhaari himmat kaise hui mere kapde badalne ki ? how dare you ?" she said

" tumhaara pati hoon , tum uncomfortable thi tho issi liye I tried to help you " arjun answered coolly

" tum mujhe jaga bhi sakte the " saakshi said

" mein tumhe jagana nai chahta tha , mein nai chahta tha ki tumhaari neend khul jaaye , kyunki agar aisa hota tho tum fir mujhse jagadne lag jaati " arjun said

" tumhe lagta hai ki mein tumse jagadti rehti hoon ?" she asked

" nai jagadti ho ?" he asked

" nai " she answered

" really " he asked again

" kya aap dono fir subha subha shuru ho gaye ?" sameer said coming into the kitchen

" kya kiya tune arjun? Kya kiya arjun ne saakshi ?" sameer asked both of them

" arjun ne ..." saakshi started

" haan bolo saakshi " arjun said and amiled

" kuch nai kiya " saakshi completed and arjun smiled

" mujhse door raho , samjhe ya samjaaun ?" she asked angrily and left

" kitne cutely kahana usne " arjun asked sameer

" kya kiya tune ?" sameer asked

" kaha na usne , maine kuch nai kiya " arjun replied

" really ?" sameer asked

" maine aise kuch nai kiya jo mujhe nai karna chahiye " arjun replied

Sameer shaked his head " aisha ko paani chahiye "

He took water and left arjun behind in the kitchen itself

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" kuch aur chahiye aisha ?" sameer asked

" nai " aisha answered

He kissed her forehead and went to bathe

She got down from the bed and went to hall

She was smiling thinking of sameer and thanking god to give her such wonderful husband

" kya baat hai aisha , kya kaha bhaiya ne ?" saakshi teased

" kuch bhi tho nai " aisha answered

" come on saakshi , tumhe sacchi mein lagta hai ki sameer sir ne aisha ko koi bhi compliment diya hoga , its impossible " lisa said

" kyun ?" aisha asked getting serious

" kya kyun ? tum nai jaanti ?" saakshi asked

" kya ?" aisha asked

" yehi ki pregnancy ke time pe na pati ka intrest patni par se ut jaata hai " saakshi said

" haan , kyun ki unki wifes moti jo ho jaate hain " lisa said

" nai , mera sameer bilkul aisa nai hai , aaj bhi who mujhe utna hi pamper karta hai " aisha defended sameer

" who iss liye taaki tum bura na mano , trust me saare mard ek hi jaise hote hain " lisa said

" no guys , sameer aise bilkul nai hai " aisha said again

" aise nai hai tho acha hai " saakshi said

" guys , mein abhi aayi " aisha said and started walking towards her bedroom , she was in deep thoughts , she was thinking about what saakshi and lisa said

Lisa and saakshi had a laugh

She entered her room

Sameer had taken his bath and was sitting and reading a book

" sameer...?" she called out

" hmmm" he said without looking at her

" aaj sangeet mein aap kya pehenenge ?" she asked

Sameer didn't answer

" yahaan ka climate kitna acha hai na ?" she asked

" hmmm" he was still reading the book

She went to the mirror and looked at herself

She had become fat

She turned and looked at sameer , he had not lifted his head from his book even once

" sameer , mujhe garmi ho rahi hai , aapko bhi garmi ho rahi hai ?" she asked

" hmmm" he said again

She got angry and looked at herself again in the mirror

" saakshi aur lisa ne sahi kaha tha " she said

She just turned aroung and sameer's mobile fell down

She tried to bend down to pick it up but couldn't reach

She sat on a chair and tried again but still couldn't reach

Just then a pair of hands picked up the mobile and made her sit normally

" kya kar rahi ho? Tumhe catch aa sakta hai ? kyun yeh sab karne ki zaroorat hai ?" sameer asked lovingly

" mujhe aapse koi baat nai karni " aisha said

" kyun ?" sameer asked

" mein aapse kab se baath karne ki koshish kar rahi hoon , aur aapne ek baar bhi mere taraf nai dekha , meine kaha ki mujhe garmi ho rahi hai aur aapne kuch nai kaha , yahaan shimla mein kisko garmi ho sakti hai , maine aapse kitne sawaal poocha aur aap sirf hmmm kar rahe the , saakshi aur lisa ne sahi kaha , ab aapko mujhpe koi interest nai hai , mein itni moti jo ho gayi hoon " aisha said

" haan , who tho hai " sameer said

" kya ?" aisha asked and tears came out of her eyes

Sameer laughed and said " tum par se interest kaise jaa sakta hai mera haan , aaj kal mujhe tumhe chup chupke dekhna pasand hai , tum bohut cute lagti ho , tum kabhi achanak se muskhuraane lagti ho , tho kabhi naraaz ho jaati ho , kabhi champ se akele mein baat karti ho , tho kabhi apne aap se baat karti ho , bohut zyada beautiful lagti ho "

" sacchi ?" she asked

" moochi , aur waise bhi tum pehele se zyaada ab khoobsurat lagti ho , mein tho mazaak kar raha tha , aur maine tumhe andhar aaate hi dekh liya , aur chupkese tumhaare har reaction dekh raha tha , I love aisha sameer rathore " sameer said and wiped her tears and hugged her and kissed her forehead

She also smiled

To be continued

So guys ,

Do comment and let me know whether you liked the update or not

Edited by magati - 11 years ago
Snehajain thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
TTThhhaaannnkkk uuu sssooo mmmuuuccchhh...for Raesha...😃😃😃 😃😃😃 😃😃😃 😃😃😃
LOL Saksihi sabko kya bataye ki ARjun ne uske clothes change kiye...😆😆😆 😆😆😆
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice dear...
A cute and simple update...

Cont. soon and thanks for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww! It's just wonderful!

Magati!!! You are soo gifted, the way you highlighted each and every emotion was just exemplary! 👏
Regarding the arakshi part, loved it! I think Arjun will end up taking Sakshi back home soon enough, but I bet it will be a la bollywood!

And Aisha's insecurities! It's so cute! Having seen my cousin through this stage I couldn't stop laughing!!! 🤣Cause I did the same thing as Liza! Poor Aisha, but then Mr. Dammit now has a new name I guess, Mr.Perfect Husband!!!!

Fingers crossed for Arjun and would like to see how Arjun and his entire team 'manaofy' Sakshi!!!

Looking forward to reading your updates!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update and thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sweet update
Loved it 😃

Continue soon
😎
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi magati
lovely update 👏
hamare ACP akdu se bohat naughty ban gaye hai 😉 😆
raesha were too cute
thanks for pm & cont soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great Update.

Arjun and Saakshi wonderful.

Arjun asking Saakshi to tell Sameer why is she angry on him..

Sameer and Aisha conversation cute

continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww such a cute convo between sasha..
but in next update plz.. i want some romantic movement of arakshi.. plz plz plz..

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