Finally Found You ||Swaron OS||

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wanted to write an OS on Swaron , i don't know how it turned out to be. Do give a read and review.

Finally Found You

Swayam broke up with Sharon , she was hurt , shocked and guilty. She walked alone , in the street. His words coming in her mind continuously. Tears streamed down her cheeks.

"I can't lose him! I can't!"

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On the other hand , swayam was broken . He was sitting in his room , when his phone rang. It was his mom's call.

"Hello maa."

"Maa nahi."

"Sunshine you?"

"Nahi usska bhoot , tu toh mujhe bhul gaya na swayam."

"Are aisa nahi hain."

"Jaanti hun mein kaisa hain , girlfriend kya mil gayi mujhe bhul gaya tu."

Swayam became quiet.

"Swayam? Kya hua?"

Swayam did not reply.

"Swayam? Please batao mujhe what's wrong?"

"Sab khatam."

"Kya?"

Swayam told her everything.

"What the hell , how could she."

The girl took a deep breath.

"Accha tu ro mat swayam . Mein abhi aayi."

---

The next day. All were in the rehearsal hall , warming up for their dance . Swayam was not there.

"Yeh swayam kaha reh gaya?"

Vicky asked. Rey called swayam.

"The no you are trying to call is switched off , please try again later."

"Phone band hain uska."

Rey said . All were about to start their rehearsals when VP came inside. They stop.

"Good morning sir!"

All said.

"I guess tum sabke liye yeh morning good nahi."

"Matlab sir?"

Sharon said.

"I have a news for you all."

"Kaisi news sir?"

Rey asked. VP took a deep breath and then said.

"Swayam ne St. Louis humesha ke liye chod dia hain."

"What!"

Was all that everyone could reply.

"Yeh ek letter hain tum sabke liye addressed."

Rey took it . VP went away from there. Sharon was numb , swayam had left the college , without even speaking to her once. Was their love so weak? She asked herself.

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"I am sorry guys , i am leaving Mumbai . I am sorry maine achank se yeh team chod di aur college bhi , lekin i didn't have any option left . Idhar rehte rehte mein bhul gaya tha ki meri kuch responsibilities hain . Priorities badal thi maine apni , lekin i guess it's time I start changing my priorities again. Der se hi sahi, but I realised . I know i took this decision without even telling any one of you once , but i did not have time and neither did i have that much energy left to face you all again.

Rey , You were a great friend . And haan mein yeh friendship aise todkar nahi jaunga . Aaj shaam tak I'll text you my new number . Itna toh tujhe trust kar sakta hun na ki tu kissi ko kuch na bole.

Guys i will miss you all , tum sabki har ek baat , Vicky teri over acting , nilesh tere raps , bharat tera baat baat par gussa hona , amar tere delicious treats , rinni tera innocence , simmi your attitude , and aashi tumhara har word ke baad types bola , even you have been a true friend to me , thanks a lot for that.

Bye guys! I will miss you all a lot , but I promise , one day i will be back . Till then i take my leave

Swayam."

---

"Rey aage kuch nahi likha hain?"

Simmi asked.

"No."

"Ajeeb hain swayam ne Sharon ko mention types nahi kia."

Sharon was shocked , taken aback , it seemed as if someone had taken away her life . All were upset. They sat down.

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2 years later.

The gang were in dehradun for an event. They were at a park .

"Guys! Isn't that swayam?"

Simmi said , Sharon looked up immediately. It was swayam , he was jogging in the park . Sharon smiled in joy , she was going to him , when a girl came to swayam . Swayam stopped jogging seeing her , and the girl hugged him , he gave her a kiss on her forehead. Sharon was numb , the girl turned she was none other than kria. Who was now ruffling swayam's hair.

The gang came there.

"Swayam?"

Rey said. Kriyam look there , kria's smile disappeared , as she looked at swayam , they came there.

"Tu idhar?"

"Dude if you forgot maine bola tha i shifted to dehradun."

"Oh haan! Great yaar , nice to meet you again."

They hugged , the gang also hugged them. Kria smiled at everyone , all were really happy to see both of them once again. They saw a ring in kria's hand.

"Kr-kria yeh ring?"

Sharon asked , fearing the worst. Kria blushed badly . Swayam smiled.

"Vo-voh Sharon , I am engaged to swayam."

All were shocked. Sharon was in tears . Rey was quiet.

---

Days passed , they got to know that kriyam were hosting the event in which they had to perform. Sharon was very jealous of kria , who was always busy with swayam.

Kria was helping aashi get ready for her performance , when Sharon came.

"Kria , I want to talk to you."

Kria turned and nods.

"Say."

"Akele mein."

Aashi went.

"Kya hua Sharon?"

"Tum mujhse mere swayam ko kyun cheen rahi ho?"

"Tumhara swayam? Seriously Sharon?"

"Haan , mera swayam. I love him and he loves me and you don't have a right to come in between us."

Kria laughed.

"When did this happen?"

"It was always this way."

"You lost him Sharon and i found him. Simple."

"You broke my best friend's heart and now you are snatching swayam away from me."

Sharon was in tears and fell on her knees.

"Please kria don't."

Kria kneeled down , and wiped sharon's tears.

"It's too late Sharon , when you had the time to prove your love you did not ."

"What if i prove my love now? You will leave him?"

Kria did not reply , she got up and went.

"I will get my swayam back."

Sharon said determined.

---

On the other hand , rey was sitting alone. That's when kria came inside , she puts his hand around his neck from behind and kissed him on his cheek. Rey held her hand and bought her in front.

"Kya hua , itni khush?"

Kria told him everything.

"Bas aur thoda time rey. Phir hum teeno ko yeh natak nahi karna hoga."

"Meri kitni gandi kismet hain kria . Tum meri fianc ho aur tumhe kissi aur ki fianc hone ka pretence karna pad raha hain."

"Ale ale mere pyare fianc , mein aur swayam toh jaise naach rahe hain."

"Aur nahi toh kya , aur yeh baat baat par swayam ko kiss karne ki kya zarurat hoti hain tumhe? Haath pakadna kaafi nahi hain kya?"

"Arre gaal par hi toh kia."

"Nahi , mujhe toh itne kisses kabhi nahi mile."

Kria giggled , and placed her lips on his cheek for a long time. Then moved back.

"Happy?"

"No!"

"Dekho rey abhi ke liye itna hi milega."

"Accha , swayam ko sabke saamne kiss kar sakti ho mujhe akele mein nahi?"

"Rey , aap gussa kyun ho rahe ho? Yeh toh shayad aap hi ka plan tha na? Swayam aur maine bola tha nahi , lekin you were the one who wanted to go forward. Mujhe pata tha you will react in this way , lekin nahi aapko meri baat samajh ni hi nahi thi."

Rey placed his lips on hers to stop her from blabbering . They were kissing when the door opened , it was Sharon.

"What the!"

Kria moved back , the gang came except swayam.

"Sh-sharon please swayam ko kuch mat bolna."

"Kya nahi bolna kria? How could you stoop so low?"

"It was all in the moment Sharon."

"Rey , she had freaking ditched you and you say all in the moment? And you kria , you said you love swayam , how could you do this to him!"

"Sharon , please."

Sharon slapped kria.

"Don't ever even see swayam."

She took her hand and took out the ring.

"You don't deserve his love , maine swayam ko khoya tha , lekin tumne usse paakar bhi kho dia."

"How dare you Sharon!"

All turn and saw swayam. He took the ring and kept it in kria's hand.

"Tumhari himmat kaise huyi usse thapad maarne ki?"

"Sw-Swayam , she was kissing rey."

"Who do you care? Voh jo bhi kare tumhe koi haq nahi usse thapad maarne ka."

"Haq hain mujhe! She was indirectly disrespecting your feelings swayam , and i can't see that."

"Don't be such a hypocrite Sharon rai prakash! And why do you care whether she does that or not."

"Because i love you and you are just mine , no one has the right to hurt you. I did a mistake and i lost you , but i love you and i won't let her hurt you or backstab you."

Sharon was in tears.

"I can't see you with anyone else swayam , you know me in and out. I am sorry , i acted like a b***h. I deserved what you did with me , but i can't live without you swayam. I'll die."

She was going to fall on her knees when swayam caught her and wiped her tears.

"Do you really think i can move on?"

Sharon looked at him.

"Kria meri nahi rey ki fianc hain Sharon. Yeh sab toh bas ek natak tha."

"Sacchi?"

"Haan."

Sharon hugged him in tears.

"I am sorry swayam."

"Ssh , it's fine."

"Idea kiska tha?"

"Rey!"

"Expected."

They laugh.

"I love you swayam."

"And i love you too Sharon."

All knew the plan so hoot and congratulate swaron.

---

That day the caller was none other than kria , she was in contact with him. It was kria who suggested swayam to take a leave from the college for a few days but swayam decided to leave. Once rey had come to meet swayam in dehradun and he had told swayam that he wanted to meet kria and still loved her and hoped he would find her in dehradun. Swayam like a true best friend , made them unite with his plans . Kriyaansh wanted to do something for swaron , so they made a plan and after a lot of pleadings finally agreed , but had warned them that if Sharon cried , he would tell Sharon everything.

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I know bahot bakwaas os tha , but still hope you all liked it.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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My place 😊
unres😊

beautiful os👏

kreyam's plan was niceee😉

kriya and rey engaged huh

finally sharon confessing her love to swayam😳

loveedd ittt😊
Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I had a similar thought in my mind😆 but wait...let me read completely n then comment😆😆

-Edited-

Sorry...yours was complete abstract to mine...

I thought we think alike becoz of d KriYam part...

Umm...

I loved it...

From d starting to the end...

Where SwaRon r hurt becoz of their issue...

Kria calling him up...

Swayam leaving to Dehradun with a letter left and tht too without mention of Sharon.

Rey in touch with him n he meeting Kria in dehradun...

N rey's spunky idea of pretendance...

Before I read d line, Sharon slapped Kria...even bfr reading d OS..

I was SO angry on u

But then it didnt sound too harsh fr me while reading completely...

Sharon learning the fact becoz of the play...

Rey jealous that Kria kissed Swayam...

N their KISS😃*blush*

Everything was perfect!

Can u please write a KR version on how Kria n Rey meet again n fall in love in an OS if possible?

Please..
Edited by snigdha_arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was a great and fabulous os... loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Swaron nd kriyaansh 😳
nyc concept 👏
loved it ❤️
Edited by Tanhaforever4 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res. .
Unres. .

Dis was such fabulous os. .
Simple nice concept felt great reading an os which had everyone in it..
Superb yaar. .
Very beautifully penned down. .
First i was shocked dat kriyam were engaged but thank god dat was all a plan..
Swaron parts were awesome. .
D whole os was brilliantly written. .
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha

I had a similar thought in my mind😆 but wait...let me read completely n then comment😆😆

-Edited-

Sorry...yours was complete abstract to mine...

I thought we think alike becoz of d KriYam part...

Umm...

I loved it...

From d starting to the end...

Where SwaRon r hurt becoz of their issue...

Kria calling him up...

Swayam leaving to Dehradun with a letter left and tht too without mention of Sharon.

Rey in touch with him n he meeting Kria in dehradun...

N rey's spunky idea of pretendance...

Before I read d line, Sharon slapped Kria...even bfr reading d OS..

I was SO angry on u

But then it didnt sound too harsh fr me while reading completely...

Sharon learning the fact becoz of the play...

Rey jealous that Kria kissed Swayam...

N their KISS😃*blush*

Everything was perfect!

Can u please write a KR version on how Kria n Rey meet again n fall in love in an OS if possible?

Please..

\

First of all thanks for the long comment...:D

Secondly i had first thought to make it a kriyaansh and swaron os but then did not get the time and yes i had already decided to write the kr part..:D...so yes i will write! :p
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kriyaanshfreva



First of all thanks for the long comment...:D

Secondly i had first thought to make it a kriyaansh and swaron os but then did not get the time and yes i had already decided to write the kr part..:D...so yes i will write! :p


Thank u Ishana😃🤗

When can I expect d OS?

And MUST participate in this..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I dnt noe..might be weekend...i would love to participate 27th kissi aur ne toh nahi lia hain na? :P if not i will post an os on that day.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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No one yet so urs will be on 27th :)

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