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Posted: 11 years ago

What a lovely ss!
Read all the parts at one go n have to say i thoroughly enjoyed this fun journey!
It was such a sweet , light , amazingly funny n hugely entertaining story! N i loved the fact that hero of this story was not Arnav singh raizada but our very own crazzy khushi kumari gupta!
I have to say ya that this character of khushi is one of those who have come closest to the original khushi's character in the serial! I mean in terms of spirit n essence of the character!
The controlled crazziness underlined with innocence!
N it was a novel experience to see arnav playing majorly a supporting role in this fiction! But i loved him nonetheless! It was good to see a mere mortal Arnav, with same woes as any regular working class guy than larger than life businessman as he is most of the time portrayed!
Oh n i loved lavanya! Specially wen she came to khushi's aid at numeous occassions!!
N i loved the fact that story was set up in pune! As i love the city having lived there fr sometime!
N i also loved the fact that every chapter was named after madhuri dixit's hit songs!!

I simply loved n adored the story! This story definitely deserves more readers! Thanks for writing it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was hilarious and so well written, love your sense of humour, brilliantly witty!

The comments in green are making me laugh out a loud making everyone wonder what I up to ( I am quite enjoying being a woman of intrigue and mystery! )

Love the lists...and I love making them so they are giving me personal satisfaction...

Arnav sexy Raizada's quickly making an impact on her and I love the way you are incorporating the songs in your titles. AAA a coincidence ?

Loved the brand names of the chocolates...

Loved how you said to imagine the space made by the fingers to show how close they were to victory...

This is humour at it's best...on to the next few chapters...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ok, so I was not imagining (neither was it an effect of having read too many FFs) but you are mentioning names of stories, Parinay and The Same coin.

Loved the description for Sheetal as unlike her name as Munnabhai was to MBBS...ha ha.

Loved khushi's reasons for loving her job...again I identify with her having being a teacher myself. Her reasons almost identical to mine...

Loved her bond with La and bless her for that haircut. And loved how Khushi wanted the neighbours to speculate about her dressing up just for the thrill of them being wrong.

Loved the way bua describes the plates and where they are kept, the janam kundli.

Loved how everyone pairs up and talks about stuff of common interest.

Not a believer of screen guards...ha ha ha

I am as excited for the date as she...
Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved reading it. The Madhuri Dixit Song title with one FF in every chapter (except one) was an amazing idea. I also loved the narrative style. First person accounts are usually fun. 😊
Tell me it's not Khushi but you who is a strong Madhuri Dixit fan? 😉 At least it looks like this to me with this story and I see You in Khushi here. I'm sure there are many of the characterizations of Khushi which has come personally from you (I mean some real facets). This makes me ask one question - Are you a teacher?
This Arnav with so many middle names was actually Arnav Sexy with a sinful mouth Raizada. He could get away with almost everything with Khushi's focus mainly on his delectable lips. ☺️
Lavanya was so good as a younger sister. And Buaji was a shikar of Sapnon Ki duniya like most of us. 😉 I knew Payal couldn't be that dumb and blind. Off course one knows their friends. 😃
This was a light and fun romantic story and I truly loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I have lot of things to say about this SS as there are lot of things that I can relate with here.


I am a huge, scratch that, HUGE Madhuri Dixit fan myself (okay, I didn't like Gulaab Gang ), but I even made my mom & brother watch Wajood(!) because of her in that. I had tons of her wallpapers during my college day, and I spent hours by putting more clothes on her in few indecent pictures spending hours on the Paintbrush tool! So loved how all the names were based on her songs and all the videos you provided, but I couldn't watch them in office!


Though Pune is not my hometown, I went to the college there, got married to to a guy from Pune and in many ways, it's a second home to me. Have been to Sinhgad a few times! Yes, climbed up all the way and lot of fun having pithla- bhakri and dahi/ taak there. That reminds me, is it a blunder to mention that there is no food there, or just the creative liberty you have taken?


Do they really have more dustbins in Pune now?


By all these factors, and the 'marathi mulgi' bit I think you might be from Pune too... and who knows, it will probably turn out that you & I know each other personally 😉


Loved all the phrases you came up with for Arnav's middle name. Some of them were just too good, and I wish I had noted those down while reading... maybe next time, if & when I come to read it again. I really liked how you made him this common guy looking for a job etc. I enjoyed all the digs you took about MIDs, the mention of the FF's and in general lot of things from IF! 😊

I really enjoyed this one and ODNA a lot. 👏

Please write another story based on humor.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey...just read this...lovely story.
Firstly 'cause I absolutely adore Madhuri Dixit!!! I was so overjoyed when Khushi performed to MD's popular dance numbers at the Sangeet! And you have used her songs as the chapter titles...that made me grin like a fool throughout! 😆
Secondly, It was fun to read what goes through KKG's sanaki mind!
The twist in Buaji's character was hilarious!!! And I love that La is Khushi's younger sister...She is super cool!
And can I possibly leave this comment without mentioning how absolutely endearing and adorable Arnav is!!??
Loved their story...the way their relationship progressed and how they sorted out differences which were caused dude to the lack of appropriate communication.
Really enjoyed reading this story! Good work!! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome story was real sweet and cute loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome story ...
I loved the you write the story... .
Khushi ki pagalPan
Arnav is dreamyselff...
La is so beautiful character in this...
All in all I loved the stroy ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
This SS was a laugh out loud story! Khushi's monologues and the way her mind works was so superbly narrated. I am a die-hard MD fan and that makes this story even more special for me. Loved how you have used various Madhuri songs to fit the mood of each chapter. Khushi was hands down the star of this story with Arnav playing a supporting role. Loved the quirky sister in Lavanya and she did resemble my younger sister in her comments and traits. (Loved your funny comments in the brackets, which seem so naturally written and make me wonder if you are this fun as a person in real life.) Ata me nighale baki stories vachayala! 😃

For my love for MD and MAAN!! 😆 (I desperately tried to find good quality pic of Khushi dressed in MD attire in sangeet... par sigh! Nahi mila!)

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Posted: 10 years ago
lol this story sure had me in splits!! Khushi is insane!! I was doubled up laughing most of the time - which was pretty unfortunate a couple of times cz I was supposed to be working lol...

anyway totally loved it... though I was kinda feeling a little disconnect as to why Arnav left without talking to Khushi and why he changed the no n tried to not let her in to his life at the end..

anyway all that ends well.. and all..

this was super cute i will again say! n i enjoyed it!! :D

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