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Posted: 11 years ago
What a refreshing, light hearted tale!
Starting off with khushi, I really loved her musings. I agree with you, we all have this khushi in us, with me 2 things being common - 1) The things she used to muse about. Yeeah, Even I start thinking of with one thing, and end up thinking what not.
2) The online forum wali! When will I get a life, and I'll stop coming on this forum?

Arnav, this man kinda confused me when he went away without informing her. I felt he was running away from her...because of his initial actions, it was clear cut that he paid extra attention to her! But happy to know, that is was always her, khushi.

Lavanya, I want her as a sister! So understanding,caring & the love guru too! I loved her the most, more than out jalli and eccentric khushi. Pretty please write more in this genre in the near future ?😃

All in all, it was the perfect chick lit for me. Sweet, simple and real😊

To khushi,
From Arnav

Yahin kehna tha na usse?

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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 1: Shattered- Expelliarmus
2: AAA (An Apate Affair)- Me 🤗
3: Parinay- Naach Basanti
4: The Same Coin- Semanti
5: Gravity- RockBarbie
6: Ten Things I Hate About You- guggu/ Monsoon Rains- charlotte74
7: Cross My Heart- BlueMystique
8: The Emerald Isle Tale- meera30/ Carpe Diem- dieforasr
9: Opposites Do Not Attract- You, but of course 😃
10: Love Interrupted- Meri nalayak lazyleaves 😛
11: A Late Spring- IPK007
12: Unexpectely Expected: saucechips
13: So far unnamed angst story- Khushi Kumari Gupta
14: Dusty Haven: GirlOfFire
15: It Was Always You: Kalyaani

Res for the comment once I finish reading.

Edited:

When I started reading the story, the index made me marvel. All Madhuri songs! What an idea Chaitu! Good that what started luck by chance, you continued with it. It makes this SS hatke.

By the time I was at the second chapter, I knew I will get to figure out one FF name in each chapter. Chapter three only confirmed that fact. And Khushi was so obsessed with FFs, this HAD TO seep into her everyday thinking 😃

You had one Arnav one different first surname Raizada for every chapter 👍🏼

Your Khushi was as crazy as an chick lit should have. Your Arnav is exactly the dream boy/ Prince Charming that every chick lit heroine dreams about.

But you gave an insight into all her craziness and made Arnav jobless... yeh bhi tuney alag kiya aur accha kiya...

Bua really cracked me up. Ram Ram japna aur sab sexy FFs apna 😆

Lavanya... in every chick lit there is either a friend or a sister who brings stability. La did that job really well. She knows how to curb her sister's craziness in place.

But in spite of you adhering to all the stereotypes of chick lits there was our own Indian flavour to the story making it very relatable, something like festival celebrations or the whole world knowing if you are dating someone 😃

I really wonder what the story had been if it were from Arnav's perspective coz I could not really understand why he took off without telling her, then didnt keep contact, then liked it when she called briefly but never called back after that and then suddenly turned up at her doorstep! 😲

But everything else was cute and funny. Ek baar padhna start kiya toh rukne ka mann nahi kiya 👏

There were so many funny moments that I cant possibly list them all but I liked the steady digs on FFs and forum and IPK 😆
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lighthearted and truly enjoyable. It was so well paced that at no point did it slacken...no wonder you are such a favorite writer of so many of us!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read in a go...
And I just loved reading this light hearted love story so much... I couldn't stop once I started reading it...Took short breaks for charging my phone... Beautiful characterisation... A jobless Arnav is a first for me... And its a welcome change... Tycoon or Jobless, Arnav is Arnav and loved him to the core...And a dramebaaz Khushi.. Totally crazy...And could relate to her FF addiction completely!!!!
Its a blessing that she's got a sensible sis like Lavanya... I've always loved Lavanya and this younger sis version was just adorable...
I couldn't help but ROfL imagining a fangurl Bua ... Reading x-rated stuff... ;)))))) And how you included the characters of ongoing SP shows in this story was hilarious...
In short, a complete package...
Had fun reading it... :))))))
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Posted: 11 years ago
So just finished the whole story in one go and it was really hilarious.. Wow khushi's can be so 'nautanki' if she wants to😉.. Loved your Arnav.. Well it's been ages since I met some Madhuri Dixit fan, I love each song in the form of chapter's title😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful story

i enjoyed reading it
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was one amazing story and I wish I had read it earlier. But I did read it eventually, enjoying it to the bits.

A simple story with simple characters in a simple city. Her fantasies and love story were totally explained by the chapter names and Madhuri Dixit's songs couldn't have been used better. Alos your vishesh tipnis in the mid were hilarious.

Waiting to read ore of your work. 😊


p.s: Buaji was one hell of a character. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read in one single go
N I have to admit that your writing style is quite addictive. ...
Congratulations on your writing skills
N keep up d good work !!🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very lovely story, though I was expecting more on why he left...anyway in the end the ending took care of it..:)..enjoyed it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I've had such a blast reading your story. The situations were so sweet so real.
The way you've woven the names of other great stories on this forum was so clever.
Completely empathise with Buaji's and Khushi's obsession with fan flics. With amazing writers like you on it what's not to like???

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