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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Niaksharma


no need to thanks...
I will updated after my exams


BEST WISHES FOR EXAM DEAR******************KEEP ROCKING***************
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: GOOGLU


BEST WISHES FOR EXAM DEAR******************KEEP ROCKING***************


thank u bachcha...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
Next update in this story...
Sorry for long wait...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
PART-1
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VIRATTT...
jeevika nd viren loud scream..they wake up from their sleep with jerk..
J-worriedly-ye to..
Vn-maanvi ki awaz thi..he said worriedly nd jumped out from bed..
Both rush towards her room worriedly..
Viren opened door nd enter in guest room worriedly..he saw maanvi looking here nd there worriedly nd confusingly..he felt worried to see his friend like this..he rush near her nd jeevika follow him..
M-looking around her as she found herself in unknown room..she get scared nd worried..where is she?..nd who save her?..just then she saw viren..viren?..how?..he rush towards her..
Vn-cone near bed nd sit in front of her..place his hand on her sholder-maanvi..kya hua?..tum thik ho?..maanvi..
M-vi..viren?..viren tum?..tum yaha?..main tum..tears slip from her eyes automatically..
Vn-maanvi relax..jeevika pani do..
J-haa..
Vn-main tumhe yaha lekar aya hu..tum thik ho..plz shant ho jao..
J-pani.
Vn-haa..maanvi..ye lo pani pilo..
M-nodded in no..
Vn-maanvi plz..
M-look at him nd hardly sip little water..
Put glass on side..
J-look at watch..its 7 in morning..again look at them..she found maanvi getting normal-viren..tum maanvi ke saath baitho main hum sab ke liye chai le aati hu..
Vn-haa plz..
He understand that she gave them little privacy..jeevika smile at him nd left..
Vn-look at maanvi nd try to know what happen with her-maanvi..
M-look at him with painfull eyes..
Vn-hey..kya hua?..meri strong girl ase kyu dekh rahi hai?..apne viren dost se mili aur use gale bhi nahi lagaya?..humm?
M-cried with his gesture nd throw herself in his arms..
Vn-hug her back nd rubbed her back..he know something big happen with her otherwise maanvi nd sucide..never..nd.where is virat..he handed his friend..his strong girl to him..with full of trust..he trusted on him for maanvi..where is he..nd why he leave her?..he get angry but still try to control himself..-hey maanvi relax..main hu naa..chalo plz ab se ansu nahi okay..
M-pull herslf little away nd look at him..
Vn-wipe her tears nd smile-jeevika chai lene gai hai..tab tum fresh ho jao..
M-confuse..why he didnt ask her abt virat..or her stupid act..but she trusted viren...
Vn-apne small brain pe zor mat dal..jeevika meri wife hai..remember?..maine kaha tha mere father ek ladki pasand ki hai?
M-nodded in yes..
Vn-bas..vahi..milvata hu..lekin abhi ye roni surat change karo aur fresh ho jao..yaha jeevika ke kuch kapde hai..jo pasand aye pahen lo..okay?
M-nodded in yes..
Vn-place his palm on her cheek-sab thik ho jayega..trust me..main hu naa..
M-smile with tears nd gve slight nod..
Vn-jaldi se ready ho varna meri biwi dubara chai nahi banayegi..smile..
M-smile weakly..
Vn-main ata hu..
Nd with this he left room..
Maanvi close her eyes and again cried..
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IN MUmbai...
Virat come out from his car nd angrily nd hurriedly walk inside his banglow..
He speedly passed from hall nd abt to take stairs but stop as he hear inder vadhera' voice...his father..her mother was no more..
Iv-viratt..he call him from dinningg area as he saw his son return back so eairly..he stood up from chair nd walk towards him..
V-just stood there..his back facing to his father..
Iv-surprisingly-virat..tu yaha kya kar raha hai?..tum log to ek week ke liye gaye the naa?
No rpl..
Iv-aur maanvi kaha hai?
V-tighted his fist in angr as he hear her name-bady plz..main thak gaya hu..baad me baat karte hai..
He didnt want to brust his anger in front of his father..who love him a lot..
Iv-more worried nd shock with his behaviour..virat who himself arrange this holidays with maanvi nd excited with all this..nd btw where is maanvi-virat..baad me baat?..kya matlab hai iska?..you achanak shimla se yaha ajana..aur maanvi..woh kaha hai?..jawab do mujhe abhi?
V-cannt tolrate this more..angrily turn towards him-ded plzzz..maine kaha na hum baad me baat karte hai..plz..
Iv-ded..?..virat..
But virat without hearing anything climb on up stairs angrily..
IV-ho kya raha hai yaha?..virat mujhe bady se ded bula raha hai..aur..meri maanvi kaha hai?..kya hua hai in domo ke bich..
He worriedly bring phone nd try to contact her bt its saws out of range..
Here virat angrily entered in his room nd close door with loud thund..he look around his room nd saw his pics with maanvi on walls..on table..or drore..he cannot control on himself..he remove all pics nd nd throw on floor one bye one on same spot..he is hell mad nd angry..he take alcohol bottle from nd burned all pics in front of him..without wasting second he starts drinking angrily to calm his anger..but as he didnt find any relaxment he call to his PA nd ask him to arrange one girl for him on his hotel room..his PA become shock but as he was sounded he did what he said..after few minutes virat drove towards his hotel frustatly..he is not in his sense..his anger over come on him..his mind nd heart blocked bcz of his anger..he didnt know what he did with his life..his love..his wife..one mistake of her make him made mistakes nd now he trying to chage their destiny...
:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
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VIREN TELL TO JEEVIKA ABT HIS ND MAANVI'S FRIENSHIP...
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NOW SOME FLASH BACKS STARTS...
HOPE U LIKE...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

done...
Now time for ejej.. But not now...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I'm geeting shock after shock...😲😲😲 Manvi suicide???😡 What happened between Virat and Manvi!😲 And yeah, I'm happy that atleast Viren is there...😃 But what is Virat trying to do now??? Please don't make him do that di!😳😉 Really eager for next update...😃 Eager to know their past!😳 Take care di!🤗Love you!❤️
Edited by Angelic_Friend - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
kya khushi itna sa update... 😔
Chal koi ni... Give a longer one next time... 😉
Anyways ye virat ka gussa hamesha uske naak pe kyun rehta hai...
Baba re itna gussa...
Think of poor manvi...
Loved manvir... ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: naina927

<font size="3"> kya khushi itna sa update... 😔
Chal koi ni... Give a longer one next time... 😉
Anyways ye virat ka gussa hamesha uske naak pe kyun rehta hai...
Baba re itna gussa...
Think of poor manvi...
Loved manvir... ❤️ </font>


thank u so much dear...
Yeah i know chhota hai..
Try to soon..
Nd i also love manvir
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angelic_Friend

<font size="3"><font color="#3300FF">I'm geeting shock after shock...😲😲😲 </font><font color="#FF0000">Manvi suicide???😡 What happened between Virat and Manvi!😲 </font><font color="#006633">And yeah, I'm happy that atleast Viren is there...😃 </font><font color="#990066">But what is Virat trying to do now??? </font><font color="#FF0000">Please don't make him do that di!😳😉 </font><font color="#339933">Really eager for next update...😃 </font><font color="#CC0066">Eager to know their past!😳 </font><font color="#0000FF">Take care di!🤗</font><font color="#FF00FF">Love you!❤️</font></font>


auw... Full of smily nd colourfull...
Thank u so much dear..
I get clear all that..

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