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Posted: 11 years ago
part 13

awesome
virat jealous of viren
continue soon
nice precap
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ah ha...Virat is jealouse on Viren? But y i mean hd some feelings fr manvi bfr? Intresting...cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
REALLY AWESOME UPDATE KHUSHI. PART 13AND PRECAP R BOTH NYC. LOVES THTS KIND OF VIRAT WHICH U SHOW IN UR STORIES. AND MANVI IS ALSO SUPERB. LOVES VIRMAN SCENES SO MUCH. PRECAP SOUNDS AMAZING. SO UPDATE NEXT PART SOON.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb updates!! In the past Virat was very possessive of her and caring also.. Loved the Virman scenes especially Virat's dialogues.. He was such a nautanki ;p.. Manvi was a strong willed person.. It wasn't easy to impress her but sometimes she couldn't control her heart when he was around.. Virat is jealous of Viren? Interesting.. Precap is nice.. Will wait for the next.. Take care :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

<font color="#0033cc">Superb updates!! In the past Virat was very possessive of her and caring also.. Loved the Virman scenes especially Virat's dialogues.. He was such a nautanki ;p..Manvi was a strong willed person.. Itwasn't easy to impress her but sometimes shecouldn't control her heart when he was around.. Virat is jealous of Viren?Interesting.. Precap is nice..Will wait for the next.. Take care :) </font>


thank u so much meera...
Yeah virat jealous of viren...
Will updated soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhYA_123

REALLY AWESOME UPDATE KHUSHI. PART 13AND PRECAP R BOTH NYC. LOVES THTS KIND OF VIRAT WHICH U SHOW IN UR STORIES. AND MANVI IS ALSO SUPERB. LOVES VIRMAN SCENES SO MUCH. PRECAP SOUNDS AMAZING. SO UPDATE NEXT PART SOON.


thank u so much dear..
Glad u like
will updated next in this story now...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rasp_berry

Ah ha...Virat is jealouse on Viren? But y i mean hd some feelings fr manvi bfr? Intresting...cont soon


no.. Viren has no feeling for maanvi more than friend.. Bt virat didnt like their closeness...
Will updated soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795

part 13

awesome
virat jealous of viren
continue soon
nice precap


thank u
will try
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: manvilover18

Wow super updates...
Can't wait to read next parts...
Update it quick plzzz...


thank u dear..
Will updated soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART-14
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In PRESENT...
2 MONTHS PASSED...
Viren take maanvi with him america...nd she jointed his buisness d starts working with him..for month..she was leaving with them..bt after month she convience virika to leave on her own place..after long argue nd disccusions..viren agreed..nd help her to buy one small apartment as she want small apartment..with one hall attenched with kitchen nd one badroom nd balcony...
She use to do her whole work by her own hands..her apartment near by virika's house..
In this two months she changed alot..she make herself buried in work..she is workholic now..to forget her past she didnt waste one min..virika try to make her enjoy with planing outing nd dinners nd all..maanvi only smile from heart whenever with virika..bt other times..she use to quite..nd only work..she didnt try to hide her pain or else..bcz she know..its no use..she didnt even know her fault..y destiny play this game..what make him change..bt one nd only thing she know that..this virat who hating her is now her old virat..who loves him a lot..nd make her fall in his love..so no use to go nd ask him abt explinations..
Its sunday..
Mostly on sunday virika use to go out with her or plan something..bt today they r not in america..virika left to india for that shimla hospital..as there big problem came two days back..viren ask maanvi to come with him bt sje refused nd told him that here he will take care of buisness..nd viren agreed too..
Sunday..off from work..
She sitting on couch..siping her dark coffee with fliping some tv channales..moodlessly..
Just her phone rang..she placed remote on side nd saw msg from viren..she smile at his care..he telling him to eat lunch on time..
She rpl him nd abt to place her phone on her left side bt stoped as she hear his voice..
She gulped...
She hold her coffee mug tightly nd look up at tv screen..
Virattt..
She whisper with weak voice...
After 2 months she saw him again..on tv..
Than her eyes fall on headlines..
Her eyes become widen..she imigeatly took her phone nd dialed number hurriedly..
Nd as phone recieved..she got so many question in one go..
S--hey..bhabhi..kaha hou?..main kab se tumhe dhundh raha hoon?..u ok?..thik hou?..aur pata hai uncle
M-cut off him--shut up...samay bolne doge?
S-m sorry woh actually...
M--leave ur actually..aur ye batao..ye hou kya raha hai?..dad kaha hai?..ye tv par kya dikha rahe hai?
S-woh maanvi..tv par jo dikha rahe woh sach hai..
M-shock--what?..but kaise?..kab?
S-main batata hoon..tumhare jaane ke baad virat jyada tar ghar ke baad raheta hai..nd from last one month woh buiesness tour pe hai..nd tab se usne hardly uncle se 2 times baat ki hogi..in 2 months me uncle ne kai baar virat se janna chaha ki tum kaha hou nd ghar kyu nahi aa rahi..kya hua hai tum do no ke bich..bt virat ne har bar rudly ignore kiya..he changed a lot..aur in sab me uncle ki health bigadti gai..
M-tears sliping from her cheeks-dad...
S--abhi 15 day the virat ki trip khtm hone me..jo uska ab dream hai to become Number 1 buiesnessman..15 days use america me hi rahena tha..bt friday night ko unhe heart attack hua tha..doc ne salah di ki unhe america le jaye for operation..nd virat unhe lekar abhi hospital pahocha hai..dont worry virat unhe kuch nahi hone dega..pahele ye batao tum hou
before he could ask her anything..she cut call nd rush inside her bedroom..she hurriedly wear desent clothes nd took her purse with car keys..
On other side..
Virat talking with worlds best team of doctors for his father..he cannt rist a bit..they told him that they will operated his father after week..till than he will be under observation..
Virat come out from doc's cabin in her three piece suit..he walk towards his fathers room..he stood near glass window..
After one month..he met with him..bt..bt he didnt want..never ever..he wann see him life this..he is dad kum buddy to him..now only his father is his family..reason of his life..he only living for him..
V-make fist of his palm nd close his eyes..whisper--why dont u understand?..why...?..why dad..?
Nd in next min he opened his eyes nd again look at him..
V-angrily--is baar tumhe main kamiyab nahi hone dunga maanvi..is baar nahi..main apne dad ko kuch nahi hone dunga..tumhari wajehse aaj dad ki ye halat hai..i hate u..i only hate u..just pray ki kabhi humara samna na hou..
He is fuming when he hear samay's voice..his head turned towards that direction as he hear that...
S-as maanvi saw him she rush towards him nd ask abt Inder vadhera..he rpl--relax maanvi..woh stable hai abhi..nd...
He continue explaining her abt his condition...
Maanvi didnt notice him stading away from the as her back facing him..bt he..his anger raised like heighest temperation in world..he cleanched his teeths agrily with burning eyes..
He saw samay talking with her..he turned towards them starts walking towards them like mad wolf...
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sorry for late...
M not well...
Edited by Niaksharma - 11 years ago

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