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Posted: 11 years ago
Part-8
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as she touch that she hear his slight hiss due to pain...this make her realise that she touch it very stroughly..she press her fingers vry much..
She imigeatly taken back nd look at him..who smirking with looking at her..she can see he trying to cover is pain..nd again she look at his chest..
Sigle tears abt to fall from her eyes bt before it reach near her cheek he wipe it with his thumb..
V-hey...m fyn...
He said with smile now..
She is still looking at his chest..
V-maanvi..?
M-kyu?...
She said as she saw dry ozzing blood near that screts...its real..he..did it..he did this...he..he..her mind ringing this..
V-kya kyu?
M-kyu kiya ye?
V-smirk-hmm..
Step little back..
V-tumne hi to kaha tha..
M-look at him..
V-continue-ki..tum usi ko apna velantine banaogi jo tumse itna pyaar kare ki use dil pe sirf tumhara naam ho..
M-she now remember how she refused some buys propoosle today in canteen...he heared that..
V-so... Maine like liya...
He said with cool expresions..nd pointing his finger towards his chest..
Nd again she look at his crazzy act..
He did it in real..
He
he wrote his name on his heart with sharp tool...
Her name written on his chest..just near his heart..
V-answer me manvi..
She again look at him..
V-ab to chalogi naa?
M-huu...?
Still in shock..
V-kal mere saath party me?
M-didnt know what to do or what to say...
She just glaring at him with amusing expressions..
V-ok to main iska matlab yes le leta hoon..good..
He walk back nd close his buttons..
V-said..-so kal mitle hai..main tumhe pick karne aa jaunga...tab take bye..see u soon..
She just looking at him...
V-walk towards balcony door..bt stopped nd again turned towards her..who looking like statue...little possasively-aur haa..dont involve ur best friend viren in this..
M-naroow her eye..
V-smirk-just...nahi dekh sakta kisi ko tumhare karib..i hate him..
He winked nd left leaving her confuse..shock..surprise...
He come down from hostel with help of pippe nd than come near his bike..he look up nd see her stood in balcony..
He smirk nd winked at her nd wear his helmet..
He starts his bike..bt before leaving..he place his hand on his heart nd said happy valentine day...
She know what he said in low voice..she understand this...
He gave her final glare nd left with zoomed his bike with style..
With leaving her confuse..
He drive back at home nd entered in his apartment..he living in his own apartment..
He place keys on table nd remove his jacket nd shirt..he place them on couch nd walk inside wasroom.. He come in front of mirror nd look at her name.. He smiled...how perfect her name written on his heart..
He touch her name nd said..with full of love..
V-I love u...
I LOVE U MAANVI...
FLASH BACK AND...
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in precent...
AS HE remember all this..
He shout angrily..
V-looking at her name on his chest in broken mirror piece..
Maanvi...
Now his blood also stained her name..
V-angrily shout-I HATE..I HATE U MAANVI...
I HATE U...
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ON other side jeevika nd viren r too worried..
From morning..maanvi was not in house...
They r searching her in whole shimla... Every hostels.. As they know may be she went to hotel where she nd virat where living..
Its 2 hours now..
Jeevika is almost crying
nd
viren is too worried..
Viren stopped his car as he saw maanvi..
Vn-maanvi?
J-kaha?
Vn-vaha...dargah ke pass...
Jeevika look towards his direction...
Both become shocked surprise nd worried as they saw maanvi walking on fire... With other muslimes...
Viren hurriedly come out from car nd rush towards her..
Vn-maanvi..
Jeevika also follow him..
Maanvi already walked once throw all that..nd now she truning back for another time..
Viren saw this nd scream..
Vn-maanvi stop...maanvi..
Bt she is balnk..
Totally..
She abt to walk bt before that viren reached there nd pull her back..
Vn-shook her with her sholedr-pagal ho gai ho what r u doing?
M-blank..no expressions..no tears...nothing..
Vn-maanvi?...maanvi?
J-rach near nd see her condition-viren hume maanvi ko hospital le jana hoga..see her feet..plz..chalo...
Vn-loking at maanv+s condition-ok..tum car le aao pas..
J-haan..
Nd she rush towarsd car..
Where he lift her in his arms..nd walk towards car..
They reached at hospital nd doc takes her in room...
Viren pary to god nd also get angry on virat..
Vn-u have to anser me...
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sorry for late updating
hope this 3 updated cover it..
Love u all..
This updates
for sanjana
nd
lekha di...
See u soon all u
thank u for all support
thanks a lot
Edited by Niaksharma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

I was thinking about this story this morning and now you updated it.. I'm so glad :D.. Loved the updates especially the flashback.. Virman conversation was really nice.. But did Virat actually cut himself and wrote her name on his chest?? That sounds scary.. Eagerly waiting for the next.. Take care :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
all 3 update is fab he relies his feeling
toward her and he wrote her name
in his cheats but what happen btw
them what mu and he so angry on her
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you for the update.. Try to update it mostly in English coz I dont know hindi.. And importantly the update was superb..:-D Do update soon.. Other stories also..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update...
What happend between Virman that Manvi is crying for Virat..
And Virat is hating Manvii soo much...
Loved the flashback..
Virat realished he love Manvi..
Did Virat really cut himself and wrote Manvi name???
Update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg y he hate her so much...wat happened that changed all equations btw them...its really a big Q now...cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finallly u updated...awesome part
wat happen btw virman.flashbck was superb..
Conyinue soon nd ur other stories tooespecially Eiej.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _keertu_

Finallly u updated...awesome part
wat happen btw virman.flashbck was superb..
Conyinue soon nd ur other stories tooespecially Eiej.


thanks
nd yeah after long time
i try to soon
Niaksharma thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rasp_berry

Omg y he hate her so much...wat happened that changed all equations btw them...its really a big Q now...cont soon



u will know one by one updates
Niaksharma thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Lovely update...

What happend between Virman that Manvi is crying for Virat..

And Virat is hating Manvii soo much...

Loved the flashback..

Virat realished he love Manvi..

Did Virat really cut himself and wrote Manvi name???

Update soon...



thank u
nd
yes its true..
He did it...
Try to soon

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