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Posted: 11 years ago
why is manvi reacting like that whats wrong with her ?? what did she actually do or what happened that virat hates her 😲
viren and manvi's frendship is really cute ...waiting for the next update plz make it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Plzzz plzzz update your all story...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Plzzz plzzz update...
Waiting for next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
are u planning to updt dis khushi...???
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Posted: 11 years ago
u have to come back to write this ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
Khushi please update this one! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Niaksharma


thank u so much...
Sorry i didnt pm anyone...


welcome its ok
but can u try
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART-6
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ITS NEXT DAY...
VIRat is standing under showar nd cold water running down from his body...he is wearing his track pent nd his both pals rested on frant wall..
He didnt wan to think..even he want to forget...forget abt her..froget abt her entry in her lifr..forget how he loved her..how he is crrazy abt her..how he convience her to marry him..how he got his lady love in real sense..
She didnt deserve all this..she didnt..she only deserve his hateness nd his anger..she is not worth for any love..not his..
He tighten his fist nd his jae clinched as he thought abt his feelings..how can he..?????..how???...nd why...why?...why she did this????...why?
He gve his heart...to love..bt she broke...she broke it...
His anger again raised..heangerily opened his eyes nd come out from shower..he abt to passedd from bathroom bt stop as he saw his reflection in mirror..
He truned nd come near to mirror..
His hand automatically reached on his reflect face..nd than his eyes fall on that mark..that cuts..that writting..
His anget increaced on top of lavel..all beyonds the limit..
He close his eyes nd angrily puched hardy to mirror nd broke it in peices like his heart..
V-one single drope of tears slip from his eyes..thats too warm..in his hyper anger..hell angry nd hurt-..I hate u maanvi...i just hate u..kya bana diya tumne mujhe...?...sirf tum...tum ho reason is dard ka...i hate u..
Nd with that he open his eyes nd look down..
His eyes fall on that broken peice of morror which still sawing that..his tighted his one fist nd raised his one hand towards his chest..with that bleeding hand..he didnt care..
He touch his chest..near his hear..with his finger which is drinched with blood..he touch that mark..not actually mark..his love..proofe of his love..his crzzy..love..
Nd he lost in past..
In flash back..
FLASH BACK...
Its last month of college's final exams come..
Viren nd virat has last few days in college nd after final exams they completed there m.b.a..
Its 8 months passsed after that incident..nd as viren already admitted that virat..chagged tottaly..not from out bt from inside..
After that incident many times virat nd maanvi come in front of eeachother nd they fighted..pulling legs...pranks..nd all..
Bt in all this..virat never realised that he is atttracting towards her..every time he create sceen for there argue..pranks..fights nd all..she never saw any intrest in him..nd he know she is diffrent..diffrent from all his girlfriends..she is simple bt still full of live wire of elecricity..
First two months he didnt realise y he doing all this..
Bt after diwali vacation..when he was away from her..from her single look..he realise..he realise that y he search chances to come near her..to irritate her..her..her tikhi mirchi..
Nd that was his ded..inder vadhera who make him realise that..he was in love..his father wass too happy to see his old virat is back..bcz of this love..he forget his rude nd arrogent nature..which he brough from last one nd half year..inder vadhera saw one hope in his family..virat is his only family..so he didnt want to lose his happiness..
He make him promise to gve his love chance nd make her his..not by forcing bt realising..if his love is true one than that girl never refuse this..
Nd
like ldeal son..virat agreed..nd for that he is not ready to make him like she can like him..bt he make her his..by his own way..he will confess his feelings to her..bt before that he know how is she..too much over dreamed..so..he know in last semister as he behaved..she can never love her..leave love..she never accept his presence..nor she torate his any act..nd he atlest know..she didnt like fake peoples..so be urself..is good idea..
He jumped from couch nd shouted that day..old virat is back..back for u..my love..
Nd
after that vacation when college days again starts..his whole attentions on her..she also found new virat around in college..he always use to flirt with her..nd yeah..only with her..she nd viren many times saw his possasive nature..he beat many boys who try to even look at maanvi with dirty mind..
He didnt confess bt his all actions starts showing that he is in love with her..
Bt she didnt accept it nor believe..
She took this as his another prank to saw her down..
Bt in deep she saw in his eyes..that it cannt be fake..bt at same time she shook out all thouts from her mind as she come here for study..not for all this..
Its 14th feb...sorry sorry..13th fab nd almost..11:50 at night...
Maanvi is sitting in her bed in girls hostel room..as today she is alone in room..all girls r out for theie dates..she is reading book..
Just than she hear some sounds..she tighted her head towards balcony..like some one there..she is never scared from dark nor gosts..bt she scared little to think abt chor..robber..
She slilently..put book aside nd slowly with cat lags walk towards balcony nd also she took took one hocky stick from corner..as she like hocky to play..
She slowly took step towards balcony from wall...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part-7
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she slowly walk behind wall nd hide herself near balcony door with holding hocky stick..
She id scared bt more than this she is brave enough..she raised hocky stick to hit that anyone who trying to entering in her room from balcony..
She gulped nd make her hold tight on stick as she saw shadow of some man near balcony door..she can saw his is tall nd musculer..
As she found him entering in room she come near behind the door nd abt to hit him..bt stoped by him..as he realise this sudent attack nd turned back..as he found her abt to hit him..he hold her that wrist nd stop her..
As he stop her by holding her wrist she open her mouth to screm bt before she can ring like alarm in hostel he place his palm on her mouth nd puss her little back..nd in this hocky stick fall from her hand..nd her back hit with behind wall nd his body almost touching her..
He pinned her one hand with wall nd her one hand automatically come in front of him for protection..
All this happed in less than 1 min..
-shhh...relax...
She stop strugging as she heard his voice...
She imigeatly recognise him..how cannt..as from last 3 mouths..he trying flirt with him..her skin burn as he touch her..she felt numerous flips in her tummy as he come close to her nd his breath touch her skin..
In last few months..specially after diwali vacations..he use to gve her glusbumpes..with his bold acts...
V-as he found her getting calm..he slowly remove his palm from her mouth nd whisper in low voice-main hoon...v
but before he completed maanvi complete this
m-virat...
He smirked as she took his name..
V-smirk nd step back with place his handon his heart-ufff...mar hi dala...
Nd look at her with carzy looks...with placeing his hands on his hips..
M-as he acted filmy she walk towards him..little shock nd angry..-tum..tum kya kar rahe ho yaha?
V-walk towards her bed nd half lay down on her bed with support of his elbow..with picking up her book-wow..love story..u like this?
M-what?
V-love?
M-just shut up..
V-ok
m-virat?
V-no ans
m-main kuch puch rahi hoon..
V-wave his hand nd ask..kya?
M-yahi ki tum yaha kya kar rahe ho..?
V-look at book nd saw her wortd..Love..
M-confuse-kya?
V-again saw her that..
M-virat saaf saaf bolo..
Nd walk near her bed..
V-arey tumne hi to bola..shut up..so i shut..
He said dramatically..
M-khud ko bahot smart samzhte ho?
V-smirked-usme maanne vali koi bat nahi hai..
M-oh plz...ab batao ki yaha kya kar rahe ho ya me bulau varden ko?
V-oh relax tikhi mirchi..batata hu..
M-plz..
She said with folding her arms agains her chest..
V-actually aaj velantine day hai..
M-she get remember his filrt..-haan tou?
She ask with little nervouseness..
V-tou..tou kya?..main velantine day ke just suru hone se pahele yaha girl hostel me kyu aunga?
M-kyu?
V-smile-varden ko kiss karne..
M-what?..shocked..
V-jumped out from bed nd stood in frant of her-relax..
M-glaring at him..
V-main yaha..kisi ko kal ki party ke liye apni date banane aya hu..
M-kya?
V-kal...college me velantine party hai na...uske liye..bt galti se is room me aa gaya..
M-oh..
She felt disspontment..unwantedly..nd he smirk to see her face..
M-lool here nd there-tou..
V-tou kya?
M-tou..yaha kya kar rahe ho..jao
V-kaha?
M-look at him with anger little-jaha jaana tha..
V-oh yeah..bt main use mana ne ke liye kuch surprise laya hu..
M-narrowed her eyebrows..
V-tumhe kya lagta hai manegi?
M-matlab?
V-arey..use pasand ayega?
M-mujhe kya pata nd plz..ab jao yaha se..jise jo dena hai do..
She said irriattatly..
V-try to not laugh-oh ok ok..
M-look away angrily..
V-bt ..
M-kya?
V-ocme close to her..
She step back..
M-kya?
Bt he just walking close to her with baby steps nd smirking..
M-virat?
V-hmm..
M-stop nd go..
V-no
m-kyu?
V-actually socha tumhe dikha hi hu..ki us girl ke liye kya surprise hai..
M-mujhe nahi dekhna..she said as her back hit with behind study table..
V-almost come near her..nd stays opening his shirts button from top..he is wearing grey lethar jacket with white shirt..
M-vi..virat..stop
she close her eyes as her little push his shirt a side nd saw his bare chest..
V-dekhna to tumhe padega hi..
M-kya battamiji hai..go..
Try to move bt he block her way..
V-come mear to her face nd whisper-ankhe kholo tikhi mirchi..sirf 1 min baki hai 12 bajne me..
M-as he said she open her eyes nd look at him.
He indecate to lok towards his heart..
She nervously..look down..
Her eyes become widden nd her mouth opened in O shape..
M-virat...ye..ye...
She whisper surprisely nd shocked..as her eyes see his surprise..
Nd in next moment..she hear him..
V-come near her ear nd said in husky voice-happy velentine day..will u be mine velantine day..?..nd...come with me at party?
She look at him in shock..surprisingly..
M-ye..ye tumne?..mazak to
She said again with looking at his chest..bt he cut her
V-smirk-its real not prank..touch it..
M-look at him..
V-yeah..try..
M-she slowly raised her hand nd touch his chest with her trimbling finger...
As she touch she hear his hiss in pain...
Edited by Niaksharma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
This story is getting interesting day by day...after a long time u updated this i m very happy..eagerly waiting for more updates...

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