Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 16)

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Sanghamitra Roy

@Smrikta992

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Posted: 11 years ago

#631

Will be waiting for ur update..

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Sj236

@Sj236

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Posted: 11 years ago

#632

Will b waiting eagerly for d next part :)

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LoLo

@LoLo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#633

Hey Friends,

Thank you all so much for all your lovely comments on the 29th chapter. Read them all and loved them a lot. I am humbled, to say the least, at such enthusiastic and loving response. I REALLY love you guys ❤️

I am very glad that you liked this take/POV on the wedding. What I had done from my end was to show pre-wedding scenario from buaji's POV, actual wedding from Sumer's POV, birthday party from Khushi's POV and post-wedding contemplation from Arnav's POV. I tried something different and since majority of you seemed to like it, am a happy soul right now :)

About the next update, it will take time. With festival season going on, asli duniya is crazy. But I'll try and update by this weekend :)

Cheerz!!

PS: Shall be commencing my blog in a few days. Notification for the same will be sent out soon :)

I did notice each pov, but didn't notice you making a point of the pov's. You get me? It was just too good. I will say Arnav's pov was the most comical. The kitchen scene; admitting Khushi is a terrible cook; too funny.

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Swati

@Swati_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#634

Hey hon...:-) :-)
I read your story in one go in one day...Can you beleve it...i have my exam in 4 days and shameless me read your story yesterday...
What should i say...i just loved loved this story...
The way you write is very different...your style, language is very very good...

I am yet to read your other stories and will do so in a few days after my exams...
*sigh* i am so lucky to come across you as a writer...

Coming to the story...
I so so love all the characters in the story...:-) :-) specially Arnav...haaye...
Where do guys of these kind found...
So flawed yet to perfect...
So arrogant yet caring...
I love your Arnav...
His past i hope doesnt haunt his present anymore...

Khushi too is sweet...her love for her Bade Pappa is heart warming...
This love comes from her heart and not due to some sense of responsibility...
I hope she gives all the Love to Arnav and makes him happy...

Bade Pappa, Madhumati, Karan...everyone is so good...

Coming to Rishabh...though he has done nothing wrong and is actually good for Khushi i cant support him because my Arnav feels bad whenever he sees him...so Rishabh sorry dude may be i might like you some other time...

Just keep up the way you write...
Waiting for he story to unfold...
Take care..

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janu

@Janu75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#635

Will wait eagerly for the next update

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Sanjana Seth

@sanjanaseth1994

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Posted: 11 years ago

#636

ok...!

will be waiting for the next chapter dear... 😊

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celinawalter

@celinawalter

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Posted: 11 years ago

#637

take ur time Anon... we will wait ...
and looking forward to the blog too...

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leena

@aleena.1884

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Posted: 11 years ago

#638

waiting for next one.
n hey u gonna open up ur blog too. but im not on ur email id list dear. i used to stalk the thread only without any pm or emails for future chappy. n i want the link to ur blog. can u plss be kind enough to provide the link to me too. 😳