Arshi OS - Mrs. Raizada - Part 2

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Preety_Nebula

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

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You got me in this ...Awesome and hilarious

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Durga

this is hilarious...you brought Indi the copywriter in your story...

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Pam turned back to see a lady in her fifties with a charming smile. "Don't go there now, can't you see. It's rabba ve time" said the lady grinning.

"Err, not a good thing to keep your mouth open for so long", said the lady behind Pam.

"Huh, what? Who are you?", Pam finally asked her.

"Oh, I am a copyrighter. My name is ..."

Thnx Durga for bringing Pam sham for us.This is the most fun stroy I've ever read.Thank you.Sari Thakan uttar gaye...Way too good.Thnx for making it for us...Dil se.🤗

cute 👏

So what's next...

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Horizon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Durga, this is outrageously hilarious and extremely special for us the blasters the special appearance of our dear Indi! Yes, I remember her comment for your first part.

I recalled Subhash Ghai, some one who used to make special appearances in his movies!!:)

I am glad you kept Sim, ever dumb, to get confused about the time zones.. that is so mcuh in the character..:)

Loved it Durga.

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amaypranay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

That was tooo good!

I'm still laughing...please continue...if you can..it's just amazingly cute!

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DurgaS

@DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: arshi.zoha
lol ... loved the second part!
first Sim n Then Pam after our lovebirds !!

on one is going to leave them alone !

O god ! help Sim n Pam to accept the reality!

n That lady's dialogue Dont go there ... its rabba ve time ! ... this line killed me 😛

Good Chappy dear! loved it !

Thank you, thank you for loving this part too. Ha, ha, yes it will take time for Sim and Pam to digest this fact. 😆

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DurgaS

@DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Wow superb.👏
Lovely

Pam was left to acknowledge Khushi as Mrs. Raizada. Who else is left now?

It seems Khushi go to foreign trips with Arnav frequently. I would love if you wrote a part of this OS mentioning Lucknow, the place which they never visit as a married couple.

Thanks for continuing it.

Pm me when you update it's next part.

Thanks. 😳 I really don't know if or about whom I will write the next part. I do have an idea about them in Lucknow. But not in this series. My mind is still processing that story. Anyway, I will do pm you whichever story I post next. 😊

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: tejaswini.253
awesome😃

Originally posted by: RizArshi
Its hilarious. Loved it to bits 😆 Thanks for the 2nd part.

Originally posted by: nishaipkkdian
Such a funny and cute OS.

Thank you all very much. 😃

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DurgaS

@DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: jakhushi
Just read both parts together Durga...absolutely adored both the OS.
Pls make them meet Lisa next 😛. She can be shocked seeing them and get knocked off by car if you want 😉😆..of course only injured 😛.

Hi Jakhushi. Thank you so much for reading and loving both of them. 😳 Lisa, what an idea! Thanks for it. Oh, I want to do mean things with her too. But not car knocking. Let me think. There really wasn't a plan for the next part, but you got me thinking. Thanks again. 😃

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: kukiie
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Originally posted by: tina_1234
Aww cute shot

Originally posted by: deepika45
nice

Thank you so much. 😊

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DurgaS

@DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: chandana.s
Wow... First SIm & now Pam..Loved it

Lovely OS..Very well written

I really want more parts .. do PM me when u update

Thank you Chandana. More parts? I see everyone is really enjoying reading about unsuspecting girls faint. 😆 Will surely try another one. But, this will take time. I will pm you. 😊

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