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sonali

@Sona_loveVD

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

awesome updt
loved taarey bond
updt soon

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priyal_TaaRey

@priyal_TaaRey

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

updt soon😛

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Diya

@foreverlazy

Dazzler

+ 19

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Lovely update. 😊 Sorry for the late comment.

Glad to know that you're not leaving IF.

Please update soon and thanks for the PM!

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sonasingh720

@sonasingh720

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

its awesum n cute...😛😛

they both have feelings for each other... lovely 😆😆

plzz do update second part...

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Swachi

@.AriSe.To.LoVe.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Mindblowing!!!! concept ree

Starting was awesome

loved it from start to end

How rey enters in taani room

nd his dialogue haaye😳

Maar dala

Rey have feeling for taani so cute

But it was really short

Update the second part soon

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BepannaahPyaar

@BepannaahPyaar

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

hey, awesum concept!!!!!!!
just luved d first part.
pls continue soon😊

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Ashu

@Avalanche.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Loved the concept! Update soon!!

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

the chapter was good and great... do continue soon and pm me

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Swachi

@.AriSe.To.LoVe.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Update next part soon

can't wait

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Nimrat Kaur Sodhi

@CasKett.

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

rey replied " haan dekha tumne track change kar diya main yahan aya tha kyunki ..." tani impatiently asked "kyunki ???" Rey said while joining his hands "maate agar aap chup baithne ki krupa karoge tabhi hi kuch bolunga." Tani giggled "sure!! shoot"
R : *puts his arms on her shoulder and she folds her hand across her chest* so buddhi hey don't gimme dat look
T : reeyyy for God's sake continue or I'm off to sleep.
R : wait bolta hu so I'm here to take you with me. So go get ready humare paas time nahi hai waise bhi hum late hogaye hai.
T : par rey hum kahan jaa rahe hai.
R : buddhi teri memory kitni kamzor hai. Aaj humara event tha.
T : ya
R : and it was successful.
T : ya
R : so kuch samjha hum kahan jaa rahe.
T : wait VP sir toh itne raat ko party nahi denge. So if I'm not wrong iska matlab tumne pub mein party organise ki hai.
R : tum kitni smart hogayi ho. Dekha isko bolte hai acchi sangati ka asar.
T : *while shrugging off his arms* sangati my foot , main koi pub nahi jaa rahi. Bye I'm off to sleep.
R : come on tani don't be a spoil spot.
T : Rey I said no means no pub main party = pura gang boys too = there are drinks in pub and masti in boys = spiked drinks. Which I can't handle rey.
R : tani stop it and get ready. Jahan tak boys ki baat hai main unhe handle kar lunga woh tumhari drink spike nahi karenge.
T : par reyy
R : *while pushing her towards washroom* koi par war nahi tani
T : rey stop it pehle kapde toh lene do bina kapdon k washroom mein jake main kya karu babaji ka thulu.
R : take it easy buddhi. Go get your clothes I'm waiting for you.
T : toh jao bahar jaake wait karo
R : *smirking* maine kabhi bahar wait kiya hai kya
T : tu kabhi nahi sudhrega
R : buddhi tu jati hai ki nahi iss topic pe hum bahut argue kar chuke hai
T : Gaaahh...
AFTER 10 MINUTES
R : tani jaldi niklo humein aaj hi jana hai
T : haan par ye stupid zip gaaawd
R : buddhi ek zip nahi laga sakti kuch khaya piya kar
T : chup kar gaddha help karne k jagah taunt maar raha hai
R : toh phir main andar aao
T : OMG dekho toh sahi andar ane k liye kaun permission maang raha hai jo ek laadki k kamre bina knock kiye enter karna prefer karta hai and isse cheez pe jaghada karta hai woh mujhse andar ane k liye permission maang raha hai
Rey jus barged into room with the intention of continuing fight but he was startled seeing the beauty in front of him. The dress fitted her perfectly her hair flowing to the rhythm of air and the cute pout on her face while figuring how the hell will she close her zip. Rey unknowingly started moving to her.
Rey bent down near her ear his lips almost touching her ear and sending goosebumps on her body and huskily said "Ab main aagaya hu na sab thik hojayega." As if assuring her that he is always with her and everything will be fine and during this he zipped her dress. Both were looking in each others eyes through mirror and after few minutes rey just winked and left from there she was too shocked to react but then she heard rey saying buddhi jaldi niche aaj hume aaj k din hi pub jaana hai and she quickly rushed towards her dresser sprayed her favourite guess perfume applied kohl and some mascara highlighted her lips with her red gloss and her cheeks with some blush and on her way downstairs she grabbed her clutch and jacket and informed her mother that she will be back soon and she may sleep instead of waiting for her.
She made her way towards his buggati and said "Lets go" and he just smirked as he knew that now no one can stop his buddhi from rocking the dance floor of pub.
They reached the pub and was now more excited as song of her favourite band ONE DIRECTION was playing and her instance was " I am loving it" and rey disgusted replied "Oh plzz stop promoting Mc D (McDonald's) and ya also drooling over your 1D guys actually not guys they are gays." He was laughing and very well knew she can't tolerate anything against 1D. She said "First of all they are not gay you are just jealous of them coz I was drooling on them and not on you" Rey replied "Oh hello why should I be jealous I toh feel pity for them." Tani replied "Chup ab aur ek word nahi ye fight kaun jeeta hai iska faisla sirf FACE OFF decide karega" here gang whi was seeing tgem from far couldn't make out what was going on so they came towards TaaRey
Simmi : kitni der lagadi tum dono ne
*TaaRey were just inches apart and giving tashan look*
Nil : guys ye kya chal raha hai
Rey : bring it on *with this TaaRey made way towards dance floor*
Vicky : ye kya tha
Bharat : abbe ye toh unko dekh k hi pata chalega
Neha : right telling bharat is
Vishakha : ya guys let's follow them
Rinni : haan dekhte hai akhir chal kya raha hai
TaaRey were now in the centre and everyone had made space for them circling them the music started
The girl's got everything ! (x4)
I've got it all,Jimmy Choo & Manolo, Prada, Galliano,Cant get nuff, I want more and more...
Louis Vuitton & the Stella Mccartney, Donatella Versace,I Use bag from GUCCI!!
Gulabi ankhein jo meri dekhi,Diwana har dil hogya,Sambhalo khud ko, zara becharo,Ki jeena mushkil ho gya !!
The girl's got everything ! (x4)
Tani does some sexy hip hop moves and at the end goes towards guys and acts as she is fed up of handling boys and the guys were fullon latoo on her seeing this rey was damn jealous
Music starts
Bach ke zara zara, shaitaniyan meri, oh ladies, oh ladies
Kar ke zara zara bemaaniyan meri, oh ladies, oh ladies
Karoon seena zori seena zori, tumhe hona ho manzoor
Phir dil ki chori, dil ki chori hai mera kya kasoor
Kya karoon oh ladies
Oo kya karoon oh ladies main hoon aadat se majboor - 3 times
Huzoor, huzoor main hoon aadat se majboorHuzoor, huzoor main hoon aadat se majboorMain hoon aadat se majboor, majboor..
Main hoon aadat se majboor
Same as the dance camp wala
Then music starts and both dance against each other
Ladkon ki ungli pe naache hai zamana
Oh Ladkon ki ungli pe naache hai zamana
Simple yeh funda hai ladkiyon ko batana
Lute nahi lut jaaye, Jeete nahi pat jaaye
Kudiyaan hai jebon mein rakh le
Kudiyaan nu thug le, thug leKudiyaan nu thug le, thug leThag le thag le thug leKudiyaan nu thug le, thug le
Kudiyaan nu thug le, thug le
Kudiyaan nu thug le, thug leThug le, thag le
Same as ranveer does in the movie
Ladkon ko lagta hai easy jeet jaana
HeyLadkon ko lagta hai easy jeet jaana
Iss baar unko hara ke hai dikhana
Badi badi haanke hai
Yunhi hawa phaanke haiJebe bhari khali hai aqle
Mundeya nu thug le, thug le
Mundeya nu thug le, thug leThag le thag le thug le
Mundeya nu thug le, thug leMundeya nu thug le, thug le
Mundeya nu thug le, thug leThug le, thag le
Same as anushka does in movie
While dancing they forgot that they were doing face off and started laughing and dancing with each other
Then suddenly song changes
( Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahaani SunoEk Ladka Tha Ek Ladki ThiHoti Kya Hai Jawaani SunoEk Ladka Tha, Ek Ladki ThiWoh Bhi Ek Daur ThaWaqt Hi Aur ThaJab Woh The AjnabiDono Tanaha Se ThePar Woh Kehte KiseBaat Jo Dil Mein Thi )... (2)Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahaani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha Ek Ladki Thi
Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha Ek Ladki Thi
They look each other and smirk and the next moment they were in salsa posture. They were dancing looking into each other's eyes as if there is no tomorrow as the song was coming to end they were coming dangerously close to each other. Both of them close their eyes only few iches gap was between them they could feel each other's hot breath trickling on others face. Suddenly the song changed and they were brought out of their trance. To avoid awakdness rey said "buddhi tu jaa girls ke paas mein zara boys ko check karke ata hu" she just nodded and head towards girls and rey went towards boys. Then they enjoy whole night at the club pulling each other's leg, enjoying with the gang, dancing on the floor as it was getting late tani said rey " I'm leaving now as it is getting late mom bhi ghar par akeli hai as dad kisi business trip k liye bahar gaye hua so I gotta go." rey replied " sure!!! And plz can you oblige me to do the honour of dropping you home." Tani giggled to his reply and said " agar main naa bhi kahungi toh bhi tum mujhe zabardasti drop karoge hi." Rey while smirking said "woh toh hai. buddhi samajhdar hogayi hai." *pulling tani towards himself by her waist* tani hit on his chest and said "chup chap chal mujhe drop karna hai ki nahi." And they silently went towards his car.
Rey was trying to start his car but it was not starting so in frustration he banged the steering of car and said "damn it!!! Abhi isse kharab hona tha." Tani said "chalo car se bahar niklo bahut time se hum dono ne ek dusre k saath walk nahi ki hai aaj walking chalte hai waise bhi you are gaining weight kabhi chala bhi kar nahi toh koi bhi ladki bhaav nahi degi." And started giggling by the time she was out and rey was in utter shock as her buddhi is cracking joke on him. When he recovered from the shock he started running behind tani saying "accha bacchu bahut joke crack kiye jaa rahe." Tani while running and looking backwards at rey said "ahaa correction hai rey BACCHU ko nahi BUDDHI ko I'm YOUR buddhi na!!!". Realising what she just said she stopped in her tracks and rey could make it to her and hold her firmly from the belly and said " you are MINE buddhi huh." Tani was red by now she was confused that her cheeks are red because of rey's comment or rey calling her buddhi. Tani always felt that she should follow her heart and she closed her eyes and said "haan YOUR buddhi only you have the right to call me buddhi if any other guy will call me saying buddhi I'll definitely wreck that guy's face." Rey was shocked listening to her reply and was thinking *point to be noted my god she is possessive of me which a true lover always is it means MY BUDDHI LOVES ME!!! Aaj main kaise bhi tani ko bata k rahunga ki how much I love her and plzz my god you have to support me she must say yes* tani who by now has opened her eyes and turned towards rey who was murmuring something to himself to stop this tani clicked her fingers in front of his face which was successful as now he was intently looking at her. Tani asked "kuch hua kya." Rey replied "nahi kuch nahi hua chal tujhe drop kar deta hu by walking and tani smiles and intertwine her both the hands around rey's muscular arm to get some warmth now she was regretting the decision of wearing this sleeveless dress and rey who was seeing her actions was smiling and removed his jacket and made tani wear it and tani mouthed thank you rey just held her closer besides him by her waist and tani smiled as she got her reply. As she know how much rey fo masti and fun but when comes to expressing emotions he becomes speechless and only does gestures and tani is the one who very well understands his gestures so in return tani intertwined their palms and her one hand was around rey's arm. Tani was thinking *agar koi bhi hume dekhega toh sochega we both are couple but it is not possible eveb in my wildest dreams* and smiles on her thinking and leans her head on rey's shoulder.
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PRECAP : don't know but will give you rough idea.
SCENE 1
T: thank you for taking care of boys.
R : ya sure
Tani waa going inside when he called her
R: umm tani I wanted to tell you something
SCENE 2
R: Tu pagal hogaya hai rey tujhe pata tha tujhse ye nahi hoga fir bhi kyu.
SCENE 3
In tani's room
Aage kya dekh rahe ho pura update ka idea thodi na dena hai.
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NOTE : SO SORRY !!! I know I updated very late but dekho compensate bhi kiya hai abtak ka sabse bada update hai. Ye second last update tha and the next update will be the last one. And ya pub mein drinking and koi random chick hits into rey and tani gets jealous ye nahi dikhaya nahi toh same hojata hai I wanted to do something different. So plzz guys like and comment and batao kaisa laga and wat you expect from next update. THANK YOU for jhelofying my bhashan..adios!!!CHAP 2CHAP 2CHAP 2

Edited by NIMRATKAUR - 11 years ago