TR ~ TS~ || BFFs or Lovers? || *completed*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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TS
A girl was in her washroom rejuvenating herself in a hot tub bath after a tireless day in college preparing and looking after the college fest same time at d door a guy was standing eagerly waiting for the door to open he kept on ringing bell and said " aunty jaldi kholo mujhe budhiya se kuch kaam hai nahi toh woh alsi ki tarah padi rahegi and her mom opened d door said tum kabhi shanti se bhi aya karo humesha ghar ko sir pe utha lete ho to hear up in the room the girl has came out of washroom the guy making his way to stairs and while climbing stairs he stops and says Darling shanti se ana meri shaan ke khilaaf hai *smirking* her mom turns to go inside and says "Tu kabhi nahi sudherega " rey replies " Kabhi nahi" the girl wear shorts and rey reach her door when he hears her darling"REY jaane se pehle knock karke jaana nahi toh TANI mujhe maar dalegi" to which he replied "Ofcourse darlng" in mind *who cares* and turn the knob and opened the door just den the girl had slid her top rey sprang on her bed and the girl turns to see from where the voice has come and her mouth is open in a perfect O shape seeing which rey replied " tum tension mat lo maine sivaye tumhara lower back pe jo til hai uske alava aur kuch nahi dekha" *smirking* tani was shocked rather angry she made her way towards him and started hitting him with her fists and said " tumhe kitne baar kaha hai ki knock karke aya karo par nahi tum tu toh kabhi sudherega nahi" to which rey replied " agar pata hai ki mein sudhroonga nahi toh phir kyu itna bhashan deti rehti hai aur ye pehle baar nahi hai iske pehle bhi maine tumhare body pe kahin jagah til dekhe hai" *smirking* tani was now red not by blushing but by anger she said "rey tum tab baat alag thi tab we were jus 12 but now we are 19 plz kabhi toh thoda serious hua karo" rey hold her wrist and pulled her towards himself and she came crashing towards his chest always when dey were dis close she could feel something different something ticklish but at the end it would always be perfect (position is like tani is on rey) both can feel gentle breeze caressing their faces tani's hair came on his face and rey tucked them behind her ear tani's sweet perfume was intoxicating him and his masculine clogne was intoxicating her they closed their eyes slowly the distance between them was decreasing a different desire of feeling each others lips took over when there was one inch difference between their lips when the heard noise of something breaking this brought them out of their trance and both opened their eyes and remembered wat was going to happen tani quickly stood up while blushing which didn't get unnoticed by rey and now he had his killer smirk and was thinking * ye blush kar rahi matlab she also feels the same way for me which I feel nahi toh jo hone wala tha ho jata agar woh bloody vase gir nahi jata huhh...*to change the topic tani said " shii ye tut gaya ye mera favourite vase tha sab tumhare wajahse bolo tum yahan kyu aye the" rey replied " oye madam har chiz jo duniya mein hoti hai woh mere wajahse nahi hoti agar Tommy mar gaya toh meri galti kal doodhwale ne doodh nahi diya toh meri galti agar kapil ka set jaal gaya meri galti agar ..." he was interrupted by tani " bas bas tumhari galti nahi thi vase meri wajahse tuta khush aab batao bhi tum yahan kyun aye ho" rey replied " haan dekha tumne track change kar diya main yahan aya tha kyunki ...


Hey guys so hows it mostly it has two more parts so yaa its a TS so tell me your views criticism is always welcomed appreciation toh sabko chahiye rehta hai also suggest me a title
So ya coming to the point do you guys want me to continue this tell me thru your likes and comments if gets good response will update after exams you know exams are bitches aur sabse jyaada ideas humesha exam k time hi ate hai
Will be waiting to read your beautiful comments
This is dedicated to shweta (sashaz siz) rose (roja taarey) chocopie (vanshika) surabhi (QTPie99) and punjabaan (arpita) thank you guys for being by my side and being adamant and change my decision of leaving IF

NOW I'M NOT LEAVING IF



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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
res
unres...!!
oye hoye the os is deducated to me also...
although i lliked it bt will post a nive cmnt after 2nd part
so update soon to see my comment😉
Edited by ..vanshika.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Nims...
thanx 4 the providing me link
me second...
haan toh comming to the update
the tilk wala scene was so cute...
and Rey pulling Taani to his side and Taani above Rey,...HAyEEe...
loved the update
nyc start...
plz jaldi update kar...😊
haan
u dedicated this TS to me😲????
hayee bt TQ yaar and i'm so happy k at least ur not leaving IF...
oie ab jaldi update kar n PM me fast...
Edited by QTPie99 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
res/unres
awesome yaar...
means rey taani k liye kuch feel karta hai 😳
i loved it
pls cont soon
Edited by khyati2000 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
awwiEE!!!!
its relly killer os...!!!

hehhe.. nyc carefree n smirking rey ...

its sucha cute cute romance ...:))

hahhaha rey calls taani by so many names.. :))

luvd it sooo much !!!

update soon nxt ))

wat dialogues yaar !! dil le liya :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow... nice OS Dr Plz contineu thanx 4 pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
Awesome
Loved it to the core
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
Nimrat Dil Khush kar deta...bada changa hai ji...;)
thanx for d PM...Really loved it..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
First of oll
plzz plzz continue dis story
its outstanding
rey as usual cool dude..
He enter into taani rum widout knocking...
Nd wot did he said -tum tension mat lo maine sivaye tumhara lower back pe jo til hai uske alava aur kuch nahi dekha" hahahahaha..
Besharam..
Rey feels for taani..
Updte soon...
Thnkxx for de PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Its an awesome start dear!!!
Loved it!!!
Plzzz continue soon..!!!

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