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Nimrat Kaur Sodhi

@CasKett.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: shubhi_taarey
amazing chapter it was just fab.
loved the tashan and the bonding
all the best for ur boards and update soon
thxx for the pm

thank you shubhi

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Nimrat Kaur Sodhi

@CasKett.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

I'm back woh bhi bahut jaldi as compared to last time so this is dedicated to Jhanvi_TaaRey dat is my JANA. JANA dis is your first surprise ;-)
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CHAP 3
They walked the same way as they were. Tani had kept her eyes closed coz she blindly trusted rey. They reached her house when rey said "Tani tumhara ghar aa gaya." Tani replied " huh humlog pohoch gaye par itna jaldi." *she said all this in sleepy tone*. Rey replied " aree tu toh mera haath pakadke and uspe lean karke soo (sleep) hi gayi thi. Waise bhi buddhe log is umar mein sote hi hai." Hearing this tani had a cute angry pout and she faced towards opposite side of rey and cross her arms over chest and seeing dis rey knew it was a red alarm he knew now he had to do her buttering to manaofy her. Rey went in front of her and made a cute sad pout and held his ears and started doing situps as rey was doing all dis tani was controlling her laughter but as rey started doing situps it was not possible for her and she broke into fits of laughter rey saw this he stood in his place and went towards tani now distance between them was dangerous hus hot breath was trickling on her face and hers near his chin and lips tani's laughter stopped as rey held her waist roughly and bring her close to himself now their body was plastered to each other tani was not able to think and was going weak on knees because of the proximity it's not that they were not this close before but the intensity this time was very deep. They were looking into each others eye and were trying to sort out what was happening but all that they could see in each others eyes were mixture of different emotions. Rey said kabhi bhi mujhse naraz maat hona and acting toh bilkul bhi nahi kyunki agar tum mujhse baat nahi karogi toh mein mar..." he couldn't complete his sentence , he was stopped by tani as she heard this she kept her index finger on his lips to stop him she knew this time she has really hurted him. All she did was gave him a bone crushing hug and said " tu pagal hai kya itni asaani se mein tera peecha nahi chodne wali hu" and smiled in the hug digging her face in his masculine chest and his hands automatically moved itself behind her back and he was caressing her back to make sure she is really there or it's mirage. Still in the hug she said " oyeee abhi itni emotional speech di hai toh kuch kaam bhi karle" rey knew she will ask something weird so he raised his eyebrows indicating shoot I'm ready to do and can do anything if it's for you. Tani freed herself from the hug and turned to opposite direction and while smirking said "tujhe mujhe uthakar upar lekar jana hai and... " before she could complete she was in his arms. she gasped as she thought he will say no an they will fight on it. Rey held tani in his arms in bridal style and tani flung her hands around his neck. On the way to tani's room they were talking to each other.
R : so party kaise lagim
T : party toh ekdum faduu thi
R : party toh ekdum faduu thi *mimicking her* pehle toh party mein jaane ko tayaar nahi thi and spoilsport ban rahi thi.
T : yaa thodii
R : THODI!!!! *raising his brows*
T : fine!!! Bahut badi spoilsport thi but next time aisa nahi hoga.
R : better nahi toh tumhe ready karwane mein hi kitna time aur energy waste hota hai
T : *pulled rey's hair*
R : aouuchh!!! Buddhi it hurts.
T : Sorry!!! Par tum aise bologe toh mein kya karu. BTW thank you apna promise nibhane k liye.
R : PROMISE? *raising brows*
T : ya promise. Boys ko sambhalne ka. Thank you for taking care of boys.
R : ya sure. Umm tani tumhara room aa gaya.
T : oh itna jaldi
*rey make her stand and to stand properly tani's arm are around rey's neck and in dis their foreheads touch each other. Both of their's eyes were closed. Tani was the one to come out of the trance and she parted away from rey and said
T : bye rey.
R :bye.
Tani was going inside when he called her
R: umm tani I wanted to tell you something.
T : haa bol.
R : kuch nahi bye.
T : aree bol na.*thinking ye gaddha kabhi I love you bolega abhi I love you bhi mein bolu kya usko pata nahi girls like to hear it from boys first.*
R : good night.
T : bas yehi bolna tha.
R : umm yeah.
T : GOOD NIGHT!!!!! *and went in her room and slammed the door on his face.
Rey reached his house and changed into his vest and trousers and went in front of the mirror and was talking to himself
R: Tu pagal hogaya hai rey tujhe pata tha tujhse ye nahi hoga fir bhi kyu..kyu? Gaddha hai tu ek number ka idiot hai humesha sochta hai bolke rahunga and jab woh yujhe dekhti hai toh mujhe kya hojata hai humesha koi na koi excuses deta rehta hu and aaj kya excuse di GOOD NIGHT!!! Abhi tak usko meine bhulke bhi goodnight nahi bola and aaj... urghh aaj mein bolke hi rahunga. He took keys of his bike and went to her house.
He reached her house and said "humesha ki tarah khidki khuli hai." He starts climbing the pipe he almost reached her window and was going to jump in but tani was coming tiwards window and was half asleep. Rey was gonna jump in when he slipped and held the window tani was going to close it when rey in audible voice says
R : Tani help me jaldi nahi toh nein slip hojaunga.
T : par rey aap yahan iss waqt.
R : sab kuch batunga tani pehle uske liya mujhe zinda toh hona chahiye na jaldi karo abhi tak humara bacche bhi nahi hue hai *he said totally freaked he didn't knew what he said*
T : (ye sunke uska kya haal hua hoga) sorry!!! *blushingly*
She pulled rey inside and she was smiling blushingly all the time. Here rey was totally confused he said
R : tani mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai.
T : *thinking isse yaad nahi hai issne kya bola chalo thofi masti kar lete hai waise bhi mujhe bahut tang kiya hai* mujhe pata hai tumhe kya kehna hai. *with stern look and in a serious tone*
R : tumha pata hai??? toh batao mujhe kya kehna tha. *panicked*
T : yehi ki tum mujhse pyaar karte ho. Am I right or am I right!!! Hmm.
R : yaa you are right. So tumhara jawab kya hai? *with innocent look*
Tani started moving towards him and he moved backwards till he touched the wall.
T : you wanna hear my answer?
R : *gulped down his saliva and just nodded his head*
T : so do as I say *rey nods*
place your hands on my waist.
Bring me closer to you.
Close your eyes *tani encircles her arms around his neck* so be ready to experience the answer. R : he noded. (Bichare rey usse toh pata hi nahi kya hone wala hai usse toh lag raha hai joote chapal padenge.)
Tani leans in rey could feel her hot breath on his face and in no time her luscious lips was on his rough ones. In no time rey responded to the kiss and tani opened her mouth allowing him to enter and rey proudly entered her mouth. Both were tasting each other and in mean time her hand was playing with his messy soft hair and his hands were roaming in her tank top. Rey broke the kiss to break the confusion in his mind. Tani was startled as to why rey broke the kiss.
T : kya hua rey?
R : tumhe kaise pata mein tumhe propose karne aya hu.
T : tabhi jab tum help maang rahe the.
R : maine help maangi thi propose karne aya hu ye thodi na bataya tha.
T : yaad hai tumne kya bola tha BATANE K LIYE MEIN ZINDA HONA CHAHIYE HU AND ABHI TAK HUMARE BACCHE BHI NAHI HUE
R : tumhe pata tha toh itna natak kyu kiya*turned opposite side*
T : sorry rey *hugs him from behind* mujhe maaf kardo.
R : *hold her hands and make her face him* actually accha kiya nahi toh mujhe woh kiss nahi milta pata nahi kitne saal rukhna padta.
T : REYYY!!! *hugs rey and hid her red face in his chest.*
R : so tani as I was almost gonna die so mein serious tha and maine kaha HUMARE BACCHE matlab mein tumse shaddi karke rahunga. So tumhe kitne bacche chahiye.
T : REY!!! plzz na kuch aur baat karo na mujhe sharam aa rahi hai.
R : ohho badi sharam aa rahi hai. Jab hichare ladke ka fayda utha kar kiss kiya tab sharam nahi ayi.
T : Rey!!! Apko humare relationship k pehle din pe hi jhagda karna hai.
R : nahi baba
T : so chup baithiye and do as I say.
R : tumne firse bola do as I say matlab mujhe firse kiss milega. *smirks*
T : rey aap bahut naughty bante jaa rahe hai.
R : par tani ek toh banta hai na. Tabhi toh mein dara hua tha na.
T : awww mera baby dara hua tha. Kitna jhoot bolte ho jaise hi aapko pata chala you started res... she was cut by his lips and they continued at where they had stopped before.
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So guys kaisa laga plzz do comment and like. This was the last update of this TS ||BFFs or Lovers?||
Aur plzz comment karo jisne starting se nahi kiya tha dis is the last update.

Edited by NIMRATKAUR - 12 years ago

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Nimrat Kaur Sodhi

@CasKett.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

My comment:
Nimzzii, you updated so fast [:O] *shocked*
Thanks to me *pats shoulder*
Awh..you dedicated it to me *feels awesome*
Starting with the half sleepy Taani and Rey's proximity..Haaye..*missing 'em onscreen :/*
And then the "roller coaster ride" till her bedroom!!
and then the GOOD NIGHT -_______-
after that, I dont have words to say. This is the most epic confession xD
Gosh!! THAT one kiss X'D
Keep Writing such stuff <3
Romance Specialist you're ;*
Thanks again for the wonderful birthday yall gave me <3

- Jana.

Edited by NIMRATKAUR - 12 years ago

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Mehreen Bushra

@_PanCake_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

yaayyy...me 1st

Tht too wid out pm...

Update was just amazing...

All TaaRey scenes wer awsum...

But most importantly their confession...i loved it <3

Edited by mehreen_taarey - 12 years ago

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Anysia

@Anysia

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Awe . . . lovely update . . .

Loved it . . .

Loved Reyaansh . . . cute and adorable 😳 😳

Keep writing
Stay Blessed

Thanks for the scrap . . . 😊

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anzana

@Bista-anzana

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

It was wow updte...

Rey n taani aww soo cute nokjok...

Aww rey got serious wen he cme to noe taani was hving fake angry haha..
He liftd her up in his arm..

Taani knew wot ws rey abt to say but he didn't ..

Fiannly rey cm back to taani's house to propose..
Lol he said abt tak Humare bachhe v nhi huye hai

Taarey kiss hayee 😳..

Keep writing dear...

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Aditi

@taarey-forever

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

awesum update .. 👏

taarey confession .. it was superb ..! 😳

luvd dis story alot .. 👍🏼

taarey were adorable .. ☺️

thank u 4 d pm .. 😊

keep writing ..! 😃

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pooja

@....pooja....

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

amazing update

taarey fight was cute

then taani knew what rey has to said but he didnt say

finally rey got some senses

rey go to taani hiuse again

then rey cute line ki humare bacche bhi nhi hue

taarey confession was superb n their kiss also

really lovely stry

keep writing more

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Ziya Khan

@ZiyaGautamholic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Hello..!!!
Itne jaldi khatam ho gaya!????
Anyways jitna tha bahut sweet aut romantic tha..!!!
Loved it..!!
As everyone says the romance creator you are...this last part rocked...!!!!
Love it...!!!
Please keep writing..!?!

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Ankita

@ankita_95

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

I had already fallen for this TS ..
my face brightend up wen i recieved the pm for this one..
omg!! It was an unusual confession..
do as i say was lolz.. lamao!!
N the line abhi toh humare bache bhi nahi hue hai was totally killer. !!
Frm strt to finish it was pleasure reading this TS..
thnx 4 pm :)