Arshi FF~~'Mine' #4 [Part 24-27] Thread#5:Link-Pg1

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shr3291

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Posted: 11 years ago

#531

Been waiting to read the update specially after the teaser...

Nyc update lyk always.. :)

Aman-khushi is so cute,nyc...so very lyk siblings in behavior...

arnav-khushi..hmmm... der understanding of each other so good..more lyk frequency tuned types..if I may say so...

Waiting to read the nxt part..pls update quickly :)

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momoahmd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#532

wowww...

another amazing update dear...

enjoyed reading it...

the teaser is awsm...

eagerly waiting for the next one...

plxxx continue soon...

thnxxx a lot 4 pm...

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lin2002

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Posted: 11 years ago

#533

oooh.i jst love their relatnships...both arnav-khushi...n aman-khushi...:)...

asusual sruthi...fabulous...:)

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mpuhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#534

totally loved it. like the easy banter between jerry and mathur. it's just a matter of time before arnav realizes he's in love with khushi.

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rk2127

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Posted: 11 years ago

#535

For your story 'Mine' I have one word exclamation ... WOW!!!

I bookmarked it long time ago but forgot about it until I got the pm for update and since that red the whole story in 3 days, glad I had a long weekend to do that.

Now about your story, it is very bold and audacious topic, but I liked the way you treated it.

Because your khushi is so strong the sadnes and the pain of dark moments are lifted to relieve the readers from the stress. Also, like the way you are progressing your story and current internship track to show new colors and character of khushi to Arnav.

So far Arnav only knew khushi among the boundaries of the flat, now watching her working, interacting with others and most importantly her relation with Aman and their interactions will bring khushi in new light to Arnav. Looking forward to next update with Arnav coming to know about khushi's parents.

I loved Aman, his character and his support is really important for khushi. There relationship is what kept her going thru the bad times. If I guessed it right Aman is the one who will support and bring Arnav and khushi together, in case Arnav pushed her away not ready to show his weakness and vulnerability to khushi.

Well all I can say is I'm very intrigued in your story and will follow thru. You indeed a good writer!!!👏

Edited by rk2127 - 11 years ago

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paddu503

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Posted: 11 years ago

#536

Loved the update...now excited for the party in AR...what happens in the party...continue soon...take care...

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addictedx53

@addictedx53

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#537

The relationship between Aman & Khushi is so comfortable, its heartening. Its also good to see Khushi so competent in the office, her standing & respect will be entirely her own, & earned.

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A_BA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#538

Glad all the office drama is over with, so they can all get on with their work!

Arnav really does have a lot of control that he hasn't taken advantage of his locked, noise proof office with Khushi yet!

I hope Arnav will be there to comfort Khushi during this difficult time for her.