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Kaay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#741

Beautifully written as always :) x

Khushi better not forgive Arnav any time soon. He doesn't deserve it!

Continue soon! :) x

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Shilpa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#742

Hi thanks for the pm. I really tried hard to control my tears for khushi before my parents while am reading this. Arnav should rot in hell. He should have equal or worse punishment for such a behaviour with khushi. Continue soon.

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#743

I literally got tears in my eyes for khushi...arnav does not deserve khushi...he should repent badly..plz continue soon

thanks for the pm

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Anupama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#744

When will this atyachaar on our hearts be over? Its honestly pinching me. Such a well written evocative narration. I am not even as angry at Arnav as much I pity him. She talks of unforgiveness. It is he wouldn't be able to forgive himself.

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stories.1408

@stories.1408

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Posted: 11 years ago

#745

Enough of crying khushi.plz fast forward d remaining time

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Prapty/Maisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#746

I want a new guy for khushi...Period!
This guy can never repent for his deeds 😡

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CrazyArshiFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#747

Read it in one shot. Really good.Very well written.

But a little sad though. Arnav can at least ease up a little on poor Khushi , some parts felt very sad.

Looking forward to the updates...

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Lovelyday

@Lovelyday

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Posted: 11 years ago

#748

For the first time, I feel khushi and Arnav need not be together I mean she's too pure and he's too tainted... Ur characterization is brilliant ... That said, I don't think this Arnav deserves her ... Not at all...no amount of redemption or groveling or repenting on his part would be sufficient for him to deserve her. Love is forgiving but this is just too much.. He is not worth it .. Please make her feel loved by someone ... Please... And please make her strong ... She's taking too much sh**... She might even forgive him but I won't ... And well, I don't think he will forgive himself for all the things he said and did.. I almost want to somehow be there for khushi and kick Arnav in the *****...:-)...

Thank u for the pm.. And u r an amazing story teller... I m addicted to ur story :)

Edited by Serene77 - 11 years ago

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angelzaib

@angelzaib

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Posted: 11 years ago

#749

Hi...beautifully written update gal...really touching...

she acknowledges herself as a wh**e!!! MY god! wat to say???

she knows she'll be 'punished 😭

as for da future updates...i hav full faith in u and will follow till da end (may it never come!!!)

so am really luking 4wrd to see where u take their love story...wid bated breath actually...

wid ur writing style...gal, i hav very high expectations 4rm u

once again...wonderful update...am withholding comment on arnav ryt now...

tkcr babes

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Jay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#750

Flet very bad for Kushi. Looks like she gave up on life and accepted all the disgusting terms that were thrown at her by Arnav. I really don't want her to get pregnant from that pathetic man. Kushi will get back to her shell after their return and will be more heart broken because now she is completely aware of her place in Arnav's life and there is no hope at all. I wish your updates are longer :).

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