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soniachammu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#361

Wow its a beautiful sad story poor khushi stupid ruthless arnav
Smartass shyam hope khushi finds someone to love her leave arnav and be happy

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jenshad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#362

HOW Amazing Is This Story? :) 🤗 Those People Who Is Saying That Khushi Should Be Strong; Easier Said Then Done ;) Write As You Have Imagined Please, The More He Crushes Her, The Better The Track Will Be Later When He Will Die Of Guilt!! Even If He Breaks Her Spirit He Will Not Be Able To Break Her Innocence On Her Face, She Is So Pure & Vulnerable Like A Baby ❤️ I'm Wondering If Arnav Will Sit With Khushi In The Aircraft Or Not, I'm Sure Khushi Will Be Terrified If She Again Has To Sit Alone As What Happened Last Time With Her :((

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shah.1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#363

well khushi is too innocent yrrr
I hare arnav

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smat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#364

Brilliant
Beautifully written
So 💔 and 😭
thanks for the update
⭐️

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shalini_s

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Posted: 11 years ago

#365

omg.. just hope Khushi runs away from Arnav.. I don't want her to suffer more..

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rakenduvadana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#366

thanks for the pm

loved the way u described kushi's happiness. Now eager to get a hint of the further plot of the story...

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Dhrashtee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#367

I just read your FF from the beginning... i am loving it already. Poor Khushi! She is too innocent for her own good... I am glad Arnav brought her to NYC. I loved his reaction when he saw her weeks later and was ashamed of himself... Waiting for see how this story unfolds... also waiting to see when Mohit will come in the pic... :) pls cont soon..

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#368

Khushi is a fighting spirit and she always sees a glas as a half full.That is the beauty in her which will make this stone head person to melt.

Thnx😊

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LazilyAnonymous

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Posted: 11 years ago

#369

Sorry for the late comment...I have been busy 😳 But I am here 😃 With a Dhaashuu comment 🤣

Chapter 9

I loved this part. I loved the innocence you portrayed in Khushi. I was a little scared for the NY trip. But now I just love it. NY is her city of dreams ❤️ A place where she could just live and forget about a certain Shaitan. I loved her connections with book. But I have the same feeling. I read books and totally immerse myself in it. While reading, Khushi lives a different life, away from her pain. And that brought a part of herself alive. I loved the life and zest that entered her. Hoping it stays that way ❤️

Khushi's fighting spirit amazes me. She is so strong, never breaks apart. I never want to see her at her breaking point. I hope her spirit never breaks because a broken spirit is like a glass. When you glue it back, there will still be cracks and scars and it will always be more fragile.

Arnav preparing divorce papers...Why am I not surprised 😳 He is going to regret everything...BIG TIME. And I will be laughing manically when that happens 😈

I loved the beach scene. Khushi, why are you so adorable dammit 😳

One Request: Can they have their next trip in Canada 😉 😳 I will gladly show them around 😃 While I was reading about NY and how Khushi got felt hope and life ❤️ I wondered how it would feel like if they were in Canada 😛 So Next time, they should come to Canada 😃

Anyways, AWESOME PART.

I love how Arnav has to remind himself (more like force himself) to hate her. Arnav, please act like your Harvard self and find the real truth out. And realize your love 😳

Anyhow, I Loved The Update ❤️

Edited by LazilyAnonymous - 11 years ago