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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

ahhh la sure got them better than they did
well it was best for her
before he broke her heart more
but still sad for her right

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@sarahehsan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Brilliant portrayal of La's character, there! Really felt for her, must've been difficult but somewhere she's learned to be what she really is, to let go, to grow and to let herself to the side when she doesn't belong there. Absolutely nailed it! 👏

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-Saumya-

@-Saumya-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

I've always been intrigued by the character of Lavanya Kashyap and this one shot depicts her feelings so well. She probably was the one character which had the most growth. The whole essence of Lavanya's character is captured brilliantly in the OS.

Great, great OS. :)

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thephoenixenigm

@thephoenixenigm

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

lavanyas depiction her inner turmoil is well brought out..

great story

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motichoorladoo

@motichoorladoo

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

This is so fantastic. She was a lovely character and you gave her an even nicer voice.

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@Deleted

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Such a brilliant piece of work!

You totally nailed it. And When we read from La's POV, ASR sounds such an A*S!

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sadhnasoumya

@sadhnasoumya

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Awesome yaar
Now I realize how bad lavanya must would have felt

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Was real beautiful loved it

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

nice ..loved it. You put it all in very apt words

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

The writing, the flow is sardonic in the sense that it brings out the brutality of life, and heart break. Lavanya, in true spirits rose to the occasion as she had the maturity and sense in her to go away, without it being ugly.

This piece was overwhelming to the point that you could acutely bring out Lavanya's perspective, not make one hate her. Rather I empathized with her, and could feel the same way she felt.

Beautiful and keen sense of writing. Love it absolutely.

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