Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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Anamika100

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 3 - You are painting a very shaded canvass with this story. There are no absolute black or white but more grey characters. There is mystery and intense emotions that are not revealed yet.

I usually 'feel' a character and adopt them so to speak but here, I don't really feel the characters yet and I am able to retain my detachments and that is by your design.

Love the feel of the misty, fog shrouded lonely road and these two characters meeting up...

Why is he targeting / stalking her? Why does he have her picture...obviously he has some motive ...what is it. Is he a private detective?

while she realizes he is lying, a part of her still wants to believe in his lies. Wow...love how human this is.

Edited by Anamika100 - 12 years ago

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Priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#552

Thank god i read the teaser just the day u had planned to post the chapter...
She already appears to be torn and broken,i really hope his intrusion wont make it worse.but i also trust you with the story.waiting for the update.

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AquaSandhya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#553

I hate those recurring nightmares. Our inability to stop ourselves from being sucked into them is sheer despair. The helplessness and the knowledge of something worse to come even before we experience it prolongs the painful experience more than ever.

Poor Arnav...when he thinks about how he couldn't stop himself from stopping his hands was he thinking about opening those doors even thoug he suspected what he may witness behind it? At times ignorance is bliss.

But human mind is such that we have no control over it many a times. This brings me to Khushi.

She is all but consumed by the thoughts of one Mr. Raizada. Her heart nudges her in his direction while her mind tells warns her against. Good or bad he is all she can think of.

My heart felt the pinch when I read the words, "Death or homelessness?" Not really a choice right?

His desire, her yearning, inevitable surrender, the argument between the heart and mind, the dark corridor, their naked passion...it was hot hot.

P.S - Cowardice Bracelet huh? Never heard of it :) Waiting for more Jen...this genre is such ...

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opsyellow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#554

😳 I just want you to tell me one thing and that is this, Arnav is not a bad guy!

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 12 years ago

#555

Lol...I am reserving...no idea why ...just caught up in the fever I guess...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/95479856

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shutter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#556

Res...😉

Finally Unresing... Couldn't do it earlier coz I got stuck with truck loads of work!!!!!!

So we see a bit of Arnav;s past being revealed here...

Khushi want to get lost in Arnav's eyes and his words, even though they seem to be lies to her, and revel in his warmth for the moment!!!!!!!

Only u know, Jen, what Arnav might be thinking when saying all those words to Khushi...

Will read the next part and let u know my thoughts on it, soon...😉

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Ananya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#557

Okay, Jenny, this story is so super cool, badass and mysterious, that I almost...almost feel stupid to write a comment, wondering whether it'll make sense or not, wondering whether or not that I;ll just end up sounding stupid if I put forward my guess or try to make sense of situations 😆

So pardon me. But I REALLY DO NOT KNOW WHAT TO WRITE.

But from what a little voice in my head is telling, it seems that Arnav wants something from Khushi, perhaps to protect her, or she he might need her help... for that reason, he visits the cheap bar. And of course, he's finding himself instead falling for her instead and a little too attracted to her eyes 😃

Poor Khushi. A lot's going on for her. I think she's going to give in finally and that's how Arnav will get her sedated. Seriously now...I would really like to know why in the world he'd do that...

And why why are the clues pointing towards Major Raizada 😕

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#558

isn't it 2-3 hours till now... .
waiting...

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J P

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Posted: 12 years ago

#559

Taken

*edited *

With cost accounts being the only thing running in my mind, this was a well deserved break! Phew!

Loved it!

Whats with the nightmares now? Hmm!

Meant to be? Are they??? *sigh*

Hope! A huge word! Let's see how far her hope carries her sustains!!

Kiss? Hmm desire mixed with passion!

Cheers

Edited by TwilightStar_JP - 12 years ago